| "This is Not My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Title: Ken chapter
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 23:23 CDT
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omg, a completely Ken chapter and I loved every word of it...you rock!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 22:33 CDT
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Great chapter! I believe there was a hint in White Shaman that Ken was given access to Aya's file -- and Ken was on shift when Manx came by and said Birman was making arrangements for Aya-chan. Yohji had neither file access nor was present when Manx made those comments. I loved the humor with hints of angst and yet more emotional depth -- like the gentle comment that orange was not Aya's favorite color, and why. I particularly love Aya's observation, and how you expressed it, for why they should not return immediately. I look forward to more (particularly given the bookstore comment), but admit, while I love Ken and Omi, I'm an even bigger Aya and Yohji fan.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 13:41 CDT
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FINALLY an update! Thank you so very much. Very well done. Dear gods, the spam code if fuxm.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 04:26 CST
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Yippee! I've been waiting for another chapter for *ever*! :D Poor Kenken, finally coming to the realization that we knew all along...
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 08:30 CST
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Yay, a new chapter! Lol. Ken is a funny guy. Poor Aki. Sometimes I am that boring about food. I am looking forward to the Aya/Yohji interaction. :D
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 06:47 CST
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Wait no! Keep going with Ken and Omi I have to know how Ken is going to hande this or if he's even gonna get back in the house! Though admittedly I do want to know what's happening with Aya and Yoji, must know more about Ken and Omi first! Lol at any rat just update soon!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 22:55 CST
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ROTFLMAO! I really do like your Ken. The internal voice is hysterical. Thanks for updating so quickly. Yes, that was sarcasm.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *love* this fic! You are so awesome. :D It's hilarious and sweet and insightful... I especially love the Aya/Yohji interaction, and how funny both their voices are. The chapter in which Ken beaned Omi with the soccer ball nearly made me piss my pants. PLEASE don't stop updating. I will shrivel and die if you do. And believe me, I'll be checking back often to see if you've added another chappie! Peace out, and good luck! o_~
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 06:06 CDT
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And then what happens?! I have to know will Yoji make any progress on the Aya front and will Omi start believing in Ken!? Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 11:20 CDT
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Wow, what a great chapter. The closing was absolutely marvelous. They should get 4 cats!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:10 CDT
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Sky Rat, I forgive you for a non-Aya/Yohji chapter. well done. The one good thing about how slow you write, is I keep getting astounded at how well you do it.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:38 CDT
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the cat scene was soo cute...*crossing fingers and hoping you update soon*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 01:01 CDT
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Aw! That was sweet! I'm glad to see communication improving between the Ken and Omi, in its own way. I'm glad you updated! This is a great story and I hope that you'll be inspired for future chapters soon! Hope you enjoy the rest of your vacation!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 18:17 CDT
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Awwwww. That was just adorable.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 15:01 CDT
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That must be one of the sweetest declarations of love I've ever read. I adore this fic and all the boys' fumbling towards happiness.
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