| "This is Not My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Title: blah?
Reviewed By: gossamerisred On: March 06, 2006 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Its been so long since I found something so light hearted and lovely :3 please! update this, it is wonderful ^^
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aww yay! i love the whole fairy tale aspect and that you stick with it. poor ayan, so confused. he needs to lighten up and let yoji do him. hee. and i LOVE yoji's boxers! it's so fitting! i like how you write them. write more! update faster! *gives you cookies* =^^=
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 13:12 CST
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I just love the interaction you've created between Yohji and Aya, and I'm looking forward to reading more (hint...what hint? *g*)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 13:02 CST
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woohoo! you updated, I must admit i found the update on ff.net first (needless to say MM.org) didn't show me so i had to go and look for it. And yohji finally kissed aya. sheesh. and it was aya's first kiss. bwhaaa. love it. update soon. (you can ignore ken and omi)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 12:34 CST
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I'm sorry, I just don't believe your sister can be so incredibly much more talented than you. Sky Rat, this is wonderful. Your characters are completely in character, yet surprising and unpredictable as real people. Your plot grows naturally out of your characters, and it's just wonderful. I love this chapter, and I will read it again and again while I wait for the next chapter. I will probably even enjoy Ken and Omi, because you write them delightfully as well. (squashes whines for more Aya/Yohji) Thank you for this terrific chapter!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 31, 2005 16:59 CST
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i'm so glad you're working on this again. even if it's going to be months between updates, you cliffhanger-abuser.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 16:58 CST
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okay so now that you've updated, you know you have to keep updating right? right?!?
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfsonNSI On: December 27, 2005 13:03 CST
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Ah, back to the back-and-forth quibbling you write so well. I honestly thought you intended to end the fic with the drunken "you're a blond" scene and I can't tell you how happy I am you decided to keep going. I love how the road trip mimics their personalities and feelings : Yohji with a rough idea of what he wants, but easily sidetracked, Aya wanting a definate course but having no idea where to go. And it must be love, only Yohji would think Aya looked good in that orange sweater.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:54 CST
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Ooh! Fun chapter, evil cliffhanger! Well written, as always. Very much looking forward to more! Remember...you can never have too much Aya and Yohji!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: December 26, 2005 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Moooooooorrrrreeeeeeeee! Now!....please?
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Reviewed By: tingel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 08:13 CST
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I stumbled over this out of boredom. Man, did I get hooked! I absolutely love your story. The plot derieves beautifully from your characterisations and those are really original. And besides all that I like your style of writing! I'll be checking here for more. Neglect your knitting project a bit longer, I want more!
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Title: YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 00:56 CST
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*screams with Aya and Yohji* AAAIEEEEEEE!!! *deep breath* Okay, okay, review. Umm *screams some more* Okay. I love how you write Yohji. Poor guy, figuring out he's got a "thing" for Aya when he's (apparently) already completely screwed it up...and the waitress gave him her phone number, hee hee. I can't wait for them camping--if they make it that far!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!! please?
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Reviewed By: Leena On: August 24, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i really like way u wrote in different perspectives and it just seems different than other fics i read. i guess theres just more feeling. please, update soon bc i cant wait to read more! if its even possible i think im becoming more obessed with weiss fics!
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Title: HURRAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 21:44 CDT
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I admit it, I thought it was done, that you weren't going to come back ever, and I was depressed but here it is, and it's great, and yes, please, another Yohji chapter!!!! Soon, please, please, pretty please?
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