| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Desire6528 On: June 06, 2005 10:40 PDT
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This looks like it is going to be another great story! I didn't get a chance to review when I spotted it before, so I am glad you decided to repost it. Thank you so much for putting yourself out there for our enjoyment. I never realized the amount the harassment that the writers are forced to handle. Your "hobby" should never cause you to be burdened and for that I am sorry that so many readers (and reviewers) are so selfish. I hope that my positive review will help relieve some of your sorrows. I have my thoughts on what went wrong with the wishing. But, in case I am right I will keep my thoughts to myself. Great set up, awesome characterization, and amazingly unique. Can't wait to see more. I hope you are able to continue. Much love.
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: alize On: June 06, 2005 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where did he go??? i am dieing to know. this story is great please do continue and update soon.
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Reviewed By: fairia On: June 06, 2005 09:28 PDT
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LoL, Inuyasha disappearing freaked me out, but I'm glad the story is back up. (Really, ignore the jackasses, they whine to hear themselves speak...or write. Whatever.) I look forward to reading it for the next few weeks, then from Oklahoma (Join the militray, see the world my foot. All I've seen is sand and grassland... I'm going to start looking for a cowboy dammit, since I can't get to that hot Italian millionare... LoLoLoL!)
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Reviewed By: Ultima X On: June 06, 2005 03:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, Ladies and Gentlemen, please fasten your seatbelts. The Sueric Angst Rollercoaster is about to start. Please lean back and enjoy the ride. I have to say that the story has me hooked and I hope that this time the idiots don't harrass you. Great story as always.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: June 06, 2005 02:59 PDT
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that was a great chapter, so happy for some yet extremly sad for the rest. you have done such a good job portraying the feeings and emotions, i was practicly crying when inuyasha disapeared and the thoughts and memories kagome was thinking and going through. it was sucha a moving chapter. thank you for such a great chapter.
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Title: Right On Sista-Friend!
Reviewed By: BakaInuGirl(Not Signed In) On: June 05, 2005 22:04 PDT
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I had a whole long 'thank you' written out about your author's notes and about just writing for yourself now, but I erased it and started over again. Somehow, it just didn't convey what I wanted to write to you. I think you're an amazingly talented author and I appreciate your stories. I just wanted you to know that. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 21:25 PDT
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woW! Talk about an emotional rollercoster! At first I was almost in tears because it was so sweet and then I was in tears because it ended up the same as it always did when it came to the jewel. I can't believe the made the same wish, to stay in the others times. That is what happend, right?
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Title: O Most Evil leave-us-hanging person...
Reviewed By: Queen Peenie On: June 05, 2005 20:54 PDT
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We are most displeased with the nature of this cliffhanger thou hast lain before us,(yes, that is the 'royal' we, LOL) Our forced absence from court and our usual activities due to technical difficulties, has left us unprepared for this quality of angst. The raucus outcries from ourselves and our single handmaiden had teh Queen Mother rushing in to query our distress. O, how I long for our court and your cheery presence...I have missed you all! *tear* Thank you for this wonderful chapter. How ironic that Kagome stated that she 'needed to be here' and not that she 'needed to be with InuYasha. Wording is very important when wishing. Did InuYasha go forward to Kagome's time on the same mis-wording? Fate can be cruel sometimes. Kagome was only just speculating on how much the others had lost because of the Shikon no Tama and how much she had gained. Is she now experiencing her loss the Tama Way? *sigh* I'm going to shake (or choke) the crap outta my modem tomorrow and rip someone at tech support a new one if I can't get the darn thing to work! -- Sincerely from out-kingdom access, Queen Peenie
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 19:04 PDT
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jeez i would really hurt MM.org if it wasn't just a website, stupid thing..oh well i don't know how it hapened but my user name isn't "won't let me log in" it's a glich of MM.org but tis not your fault i guess i'm just ranting....NE ways great chapter, but(and i know you won't answer this but i'm asking it anyways) where'd InuYasha go???? oh well you are the almighty authress so you will is the story, i just hold on tight and try not to fall off. well, till the next update, Zirra
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Reviewed By: LunarAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 18:59 PDT
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Poor Kagome, poor InuYasha... maybe now he'll actually realize how much she means to him? I loved Kirara's wish... it was so simple and so sweet. I always love your InuYasha stories. Do you only write fanfic or do you read it, too?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:31 PDT
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Darn tears...can't see the screen well. Such an awesomely sad beginning and I can't wait to find out what happens next; but I have a feeling that Inuyasha was sent to Kagome's time. I look forward to your update!
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Title: The angst!!!!
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:24 PDT
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It took me a whole twelve hours to recover from the shock, before I could write this review. Okay, so it wasn't bad enough you had to pull on the heartstrings with the prologue. Then you go and make me cry first when they pass around the jewel, again when Midoriko talks to Sango, Miroku, and Shippou, and just when I think it's okay to smile when reading Yasha's antics, you go and have Midoriko talk to Kagome, and make my favorite baka go away *sniffles* *tackleglomps* I love it when you pull me into a story like this. I am so excited that you've decided to post another story after the purity's, even more so because you've decided to post this particular fic. Just the first two installments are absolutely amazing. I eagerly await the posting of the next. I hope that the posting of this fic is a sign that you've once again found a measure of the happiness you used to find in writing. You are so brave and forgiving, I really admire and appreciate that. I know that it is because of all your wonderful attributes you can write such inspiring, touching tales. Thank you again for sharing your gift. ~frankie~
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 13:36 PDT
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Where did he go, Sue? You just made the title character disappear. Oh, you Queen of Cliffhangers, you! As usual, I'll be waiting for your next chapter! Please, tell me they find him again! This is going to be a great story! I can feel it in my 206 bones! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 (nsi) On: June 05, 2005 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god.... so intense. I love the story so far. I hope it's not a sad ending! Ahh! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 05, 2005 12:36 PDT
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Yaarg! What a harsh cliffie! I trust your writing and have faith that everything will work out, but geeze! I'm having a heart attack here. Thanks for the chapter.
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