| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 04, 2005 20:49 PDT
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OMG! ::sobs:: Inuyasha disappeared!? noooooo! That makes me so sad! I think I'm in shock at the moment, lol, so this review is going to be rather lacking! wow, just wow! But anyway! heh, even though that chapter made me cry (you are quite good at doing that sue! lol) it was a very great chapter and a great first chapter for a story where I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen! lol, for once I have absolutely none of my stupid little predictions to make (though I think I have a very vague general idea as to what happened). But man that was an excellent chapter. Made me smile, laugh, cry. I just have to say, too, that I adore the way you write Mrs. Higurashi. You've captured her understanding and warm hearted nature perfectly. I just had to say that, I've thought it so many times but don't think I ever said it. I love how you went through everyone's wishes and what they wanted. Man I even started tearing up when Kagome was saying good bye to her family. And ohhhh sad when Inuyasha disappeared. Gah, just wow!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 20:45 PDT
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Don't get me wrong, I completely understand how extremely frustrating and hurtful it must be to have ignorant, rude people blantantly criticize a piece of work that you're very emotionally close to. I write, too, and my stories are like my babies. I've never actually had anyone flame me (thank God, because I think I might cry), but even constructive criticism hurts a little. I can't imagine how awful it is to have a bunch of people flame me for no other reason than to just be a bunch of assholes. Kudos to you for standing up for yourself and continuing to post your wonderful stories for you and you alone. That's how it should be. I'm sure you love all of your reviewers (except for the select bunch that should be flogged), but in the end all that matters is that you're satisfied with your work. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, Sue, your stories are absolutely exquisite. Honestly the best I've ever read online. Please don't ever doubt your talent or your ability to tell an awe inspiring story, because that would be a great sin to aspiring writers all around the world. I totally mean that. *hugz* Anyway, AWWWWWWW! Inuyasha disappeared!!! Poor Kagome. I hope they find a way back to each other...
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Title: after i started breathing again
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 20:38 PDT
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you sent him away? *squeezes eyes shut* Chants: Sue always writes happy endings. Inu and Kags will be together. Sue always writes happy endings. Inu and Kags will be together. Sue always writes happy endings. Inu and Kags will be together. (you get the idea) I want more!!!!!
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Title: WTF????
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy *too shocked to bother with signing in* On: June 04, 2005 20:33 PDT
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O.O . . . . . gasp. . . . *mutters something*. . . O.O. . . . eep!
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Reviewed By: tessie(not signed in) On: June 04, 2005 20:11 PDT
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OMG, U DIDN'T!!! u sent inu to kagome's time! because of the fact kagome choose to stay(it was a choice that she didnt truly want(maybe)) inu got sent to kagome's time...if i got this right, wow, this sounds amazing! tessie
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Reviewed By: katamari damashii (not logged in) On: June 04, 2005 20:10 PDT
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O_O OK, I'm hooked.
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Duckofdeath On: June 04, 2005 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny. Not unlike the anime, which is good.
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: June 04, 2005 19:58 PDT
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Alright you reuploaded this!!! Please try not to be discouraged by all the flamers out there. Due to their jealousy that they cannot write as well as you can, prompts them to try and get great authors such as yourself to stop writing. Just ignore them. You are an awesome writer.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 19:47 PDT
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I am excited by the impending nights of joy and sorrow of another one of your beautiful fics! I am looking forward to this. Sueric, I hope you find as much joy sharing this as I know we will find reading it!
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Reviewed By: Heather2 On: June 04, 2005 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hated it that people were bad to you about this fic. I look forward to more
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 04, 2005 19:40 PDT
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awww I'm so glad that you decided to post this again! From what I can tell so far, this story promises to be another wonderful tale that I just know I'm going to be captivated by. I for one love your yasha/kagome fics. You always manage to completely draw me into the story and I end up reading for hours into the night. It's a wonderful thing! So far I love this story and I can't wait to see what's in store for our favorite hanyou and Kagome. I'm so proud of you for doing this, for continuing what you love for yourself. ::hugs:: I'll look forward to reading and being drawn into the wonderful adventures that this story will hold!
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Reviewed By: Chocolate milk and popcorn On: June 04, 2005 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You posted it! I am SO excited about this story. I love all of your stories, but your InuYasha/Kagome stories are always absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for taking the time to repost this for your fans. The start is amazing. I have a couple of questions. First, Is there going to be a angsty side story with Miroku and his kazaana? It seems like there is a great set up for this. Second, How much further in the series does this one take place? Thanks for the post. I can't wait for more.
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Title: WEEEE!!!
Reviewed By: amikatomo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm SO glad this is back up! I never got to review the first time... sorry! I really love it so far and I have some questions that I'm hoping are vague enough for you to answer. First, will we get to meet another great villian of yours? They are always so well crafted and end up being on my list of 'My Favorite Evil-Doers Ever!' Second, there were so many moments in Chronicles that focused on Sango and Miroku... will Desideratum have much focus on the relationship between those two? You write them beautifully as well. And what's Shippou's role in this story? Lol, you probably won't answer most of those, but I can try ne? Thanks for giving us a second chance!
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray! My favorite couple are at it again! I read this at your site, loved it. Can't wait to see what new and wonderful things you come up with for this story. I love the snarl by the way! I can picture him doing it and then mentally wincing and gulping! Oh and the lip wax! That was hilarious with him being grossed out over a little bitty thing like that! Where do you come up with these funny ideas from? I swear I can picture these scenes happening perfectly! Oh well, I'm rambling now, keep up the beautiful work, and I love the stories and pairings!
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: I Sniff Pixie Stix On: June 04, 2005 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You finally posted it on MM, huh? Yay! I read the prologue on your site, and I've been waiting for it to show up again on here! Yay! It's a shame some people are too biased to enjoy your beautiful work, though! From all of your fans out there, though, I can probably say for all that we bow at your feet for your supreme writing skill! Thank you SO much for finally posting, and I can't wait for this and Purity 4 to get finished!
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