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| "Tada Soba ni Iru Kara, Dakara Anta ni Aishiteru" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Phoxy_kitsune (NLI) On: June 09, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but I have to regretfully tell you the charecters were way out of charecter, my new fanfic has charecters out of charecter, but I give full reasons as to why that is, one of the things that makes the inu kag relatoinship so much fun is the fact that they are over dramatic and never say what they are thinking, they fight dispite how they feel about eachother and are completley ignorant to how the other really feals because the other never really lets on what they are thinking. It's probably one of the reasons I like that pairing better than any others in the series, and why the series is one of my favorite. I loved the story, it was cute and short, but lacking in other aspects. **nods nods** Keep writing. You can only get better. XD!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nope not too fluffy?!?!?!?! i loved it keep up your good work and update again soon please? i can't wate to find out what's gonna happen! ^__^
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