| "The Sheep and the Hedgehog" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: NCKB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2015 21:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
Loved the story so far! Would love to see it finished!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story.. its a differnet aspect of wat could have happen... anyway plz update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, you really are not rushing which is nice, as it give you a real chance for character development, keep up the good work, and i especially love the pic of mrs briefs chasing vegeta in his bandages, brill
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Reviewed By: eshfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this 3 year fic as I enjoyed the characterizations and also, the angst and drama doesn't seem gratuitous-- it seems natural. I also like your title and your motif there-- I find it rather clever. I really would like to see you continue to update. I think you should get a beta reader though as I think I caught a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there. I high anticipate your next chapter!
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Title: Robot.
Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 23:30 EDT
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Oh man, where's that rolling around lauging smilie from the Salon when I need it?? I almost died, watching Vegeta spy on Goku, Gohan and ChiChi. Prime. I also love how Piccolo knows what's going on before Bulma and Vegeta do. It's kind of cool to see his input, just because of the way he is. And as for ChiChi, you've shown her very well. Sure, you haven't shown the deeper side of ChiChi, but since she's a bit character here, it's not important to. You've shown her as she is in the anime, and that's just fine for your purposes. You haven't turned her into too much of a harpy, so it's cool.
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Title: TT
Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 11:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, i read this story sometime ago on another website with your cutest illustrations. Just then, i re-read it again. Its wonderful, please write more!
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