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| "Faggot" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 13:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it as a one shot. I like it, it explained Kyo's behavior towards Tohru even if he DIDN'T like her. And I thought it was rather funny.
| Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: DragonWitch66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job! I enjoyed it. I think you should continue with your fic, it would be a good story. Maybe having it a one sided crush on kyo's part, I see so many fics where the character gets its love or crush so to say, but its your story i just wanted to give some suggestions, I'm sure whatever you do will be great!
| Title: always on top...*snort*
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm in luv with this fanfic! you've got to write more... from Yuki's pov! ha! how Yuki pictures himself being on top! more, definately more.
| Title: don't end it!!!!
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 07:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
More, definitely right more. I put your story on my favorites so please, please, please don't make me beg for more... I will I have to though... It's really interesting and I sort of like the Yuki and Kyo pairing. Well written too, good job.
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