| "Vegeta and the Great Pet Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: ojosama On: May 27, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahaha!!! That was so funny!! Keep up the good work! ;) |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the funniest things I have ever read. I read it yesterday and just stopped laughing. Try: Vegeta's Great Adventure of Spying on Bra When She Goes on a Date. You could change the title. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 08, 2002 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never had the thought that the kids would want a pet cant wait for C-7 |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMBO! That was really good. I loved the punishment! But he's gonna get it from Bulma!!! lol Well, I'll be looking forward to your epic. I'll definately read it!
Hmmm, adventures? Vegeta and the Great Sleepover? Nah, that's been done... Vegeta and the High School Diploma! Heye! Yeah, Bulma makes Vegeta get his GED! lol, that would be funny, someone trying to teach him. lol.... |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He hheee! Me like! Especially when bra punsihed Vegeta! Keep um up! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 07, 2002 05:33 CST
Comment/Review:
You know I just reread your fic to get another laugh, and it finally dawned on me that it's the last chapter (I'm not surprised, I've been one egg short of a dozen all day). Well, I gonna crash and maybe I'll regnerate some brain cells in the process. Nighty nite. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 07, 2002 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG That was sssoooo funny. Yeah that was some punishment. I bet if Veggie coud've he would've thrown a party to celebrate. Next chapter-Bulma's Verbal Dressing Down. Poor bastard. I can't wait!! My suggestion for Veggie's next adventure is everyone's favorite place (NOT!)-The Dept. of Motor Vehicles (DMV). Anyone who has ever had to get or renew a licence, register their vehicle, etc., can count on waiting in line for the rest of their natural lives (Veggie-Patience=Trouble). Then when you get up to the counter they tell you that the computers are down (Final Flash), or you encounter clerks that either have an attitude problem or can't find their butts in broad daylight with both hands and a prayer, let alone your records (Big Bang Attack). Oh, and we can't forget those "lovely" -_- photos they take to put on your ID or license. My pic always looks like "Wanted Dead Or Alive" should be written right below it. There are other things at DMV that try my patience, so imagine what it would do to Veggie (chuckles). I know I'll have to go to that hellhole this year to renew, but I'd much rather be scraping up roadkill on Highway 101. Others would be Veggie and the Supermarket (it's amazing that I can go to the same market every week and not find what I'm looking for. I think they purposely hide things just to piss me off). Then there's Veggie and the Mall (yeah I just love getting my toes flattened by strollers), Veggie and the Dentist Office (don't you just enjoy having all of your bodily fluids sucked up by that little hose?), Veggie and the Library ("whispers" you know you should speak softly so as not to disturb the people that are reading- unfortunately for them, VEGGIE DOESN'T CARE!!). Next thing you know there's a little nuke cloud where the library used to be. You know, if you want to be cruel you could always combine a bunch of little trips (bank, gas station, post office) into a one-shot. The consequences would make our favorite saiyan wish he were on Vegetasei when it blew up. So there. This is the longest review that I've ever done, and I hope that it helps in some way. Whatever you put up you know I'll read it. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next. Good job JB. Peace |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 04, 2002 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only have one comment to say...This fic is absolutly hilarious! Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see how Vegeta will get his ass royally chewed by Bulma once she gets home. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 20:27 CST
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hahaha ooooohhhh man! vegeta is double screwed! *sigh*, well if they decide to kick him out, you know where to send him ;) I can't wait to see Bulma go ballistic! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Vegeta kissed the bird's head." roflmbo I pictured that! Hilarious, once again! I was glad that I guessed correctly. Of course Bulma knows him better. Although Mirai Trunks might have guessed right. Trunks was certainly closer. Where did Bura get her story from?! That was ludicrous! And grandpa? What world does she live in? I would love it if Vegeta heard that tale though! He'd have a heartattack!!! lol |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: January 04, 2002 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe...heheheee
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AAAH HAAA HAHAHAHAAAAAAchokegaspcough....
hehehehe YEAH!!! Get 'im Lucifer!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Meis On: January 03, 2002 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good now hurry and get the next chapter out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2002 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOLLOL!! I loved the daydreams. Bra the optimist, Trunks the pesimist and Bulma the realist. Yep, no one knows Veggie like Bulma, who I think is going to roast Veggie's ass over an open flame for what he did to her project. LOL. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen when they get home. And where in the seven hells did that bird go? Next chappie please. Later |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 06:52 CST
Comment/Review:
heeheehee oh dear veggie's really done it! if i were him, i would've blasted that bird as soon as i heard him in the pet store! i hope he finds it before the fam gets back! god knows what bulma might do to him! hehe :P you keep this up, k? i wanna see more!! hehe oh, and don't worry, the next chap. of fire&ice will be done very quickly just for you and susan! woohoo :) |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2001 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm, boiled bird! And here I am eating chicken. Well, Maybe Veg-boy can clean up the mess before they get home? Nah :D What'd be the fun in that? Heh heh, wonder where the bird will end up being? Will Vegeta and Dabura's relative (obviously they are, I mean, it's Dabura's fault that Veg went all Majin [don't get technical] and it's Lucifer's that Veg went berserker) ever make up, only to have Lucifer do something else to really get Vegeta mad. I really liked the whole torture scene. I was trying to tell Vegeta that is was a bird and didn't understand what he wanted, but you know him, he doesn't listen. Like Lucifer would do it even if he could. I'm really surprised he doesn't call is Kakarott Jr. or something.... lol Anyways, keep writing! |
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