| "Vegeta and the Great Pet Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2002 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOLLOL!! I loved the daydreams. Bra the optimist, Trunks the pesimist and Bulma the realist. Yep, no one knows Veggie like Bulma, who I think is going to roast Veggie's ass over an open flame for what he did to her project. LOL. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen when they get home. And where in the seven hells did that bird go? Next chappie please. Later |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 06:52 CST
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heeheehee oh dear veggie's really done it! if i were him, i would've blasted that bird as soon as i heard him in the pet store! i hope he finds it before the fam gets back! god knows what bulma might do to him! hehe :P you keep this up, k? i wanna see more!! hehe oh, and don't worry, the next chap. of fire&ice will be done very quickly just for you and susan! woohoo :) |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2001 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm, boiled bird! And here I am eating chicken. Well, Maybe Veg-boy can clean up the mess before they get home? Nah :D What'd be the fun in that? Heh heh, wonder where the bird will end up being? Will Vegeta and Dabura's relative (obviously they are, I mean, it's Dabura's fault that Veg went all Majin [don't get technical] and it's Lucifer's that Veg went berserker) ever make up, only to have Lucifer do something else to really get Vegeta mad. I really liked the whole torture scene. I was trying to tell Vegeta that is was a bird and didn't understand what he wanted, but you know him, he doesn't listen. Like Lucifer would do it even if he could. I'm really surprised he doesn't call is Kakarott Jr. or something.... lol Anyways, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Meis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2001 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greeat chapter.hurry and get the next one out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 31, 2001 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG That was so funny. Poor Veggie-I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. The suspense is killing me. Where did that stupid bird go? Please get out the next chappie asap. HAppy New Year Kiddo |
Reviewed By: Meis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was so funny.hurry and get # 4 out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 28, 2001 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!! I think before the night is thru Veggie will be involved in some sort of "fowl" play. Can't say I blame him. Lucifer sounds like a real SOB (oh thanks for using the name, and using it to it's full advantage). You obviously have a kick-ass sense of humor and I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter. Later |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2001 04:33 CST
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hehehehehehehehehehe!!!! vegetablehead! poor vegeta! bullied by his own kids, a tantrum from his little princess, and now adding more insult to the injury- a disrespectful bird! i wonder if their christmas turkey is going to turn out a little more colorful than they thought...heehee can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a good chapter. What other pet would be better than one who knows Vegeta's buttons? Wonder how long it'll be before there's roast bird for dinner. lol Poor Veggie'll be lucky if he can keep from killing that bird, perhaps the repurcussions of it from Bura's pov will stall him.... Sooner or later though.....He just can't help his temper. Can't Wait till the next chapter! BTW, Merry Christmas! |
Reviewed By: Meis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name the bird loudmouth and hurry and get the next chapter out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 24, 2001 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL!! You are quite the comedian. I gotta remember that "poster child for road rage" business. I know way too many loonies that have the nerve to drive. Anyway, this was a hysterical follow-up to chapter #1. As far as a name goes, I inherited a parrot once, that came complete with a foul temper, bad manners and a filthy mouth. His name was Lucifer (no kiddin'), and he got me into more trouble than I care to mention {you wouldn't believe what he called cops and nuns). One day, much to everyone's relief, he flew into a bonfire. So feel free to use the name, and if you decide not to, that's ok. Please get the next chappie out soon. Oh and JB, Merry Xmas. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: December 22, 2001 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute! I always knew Bura (sorry, the other's too embarrasing to write, I mean, come on!) had that mean manipulative Vegeta streak. Like father, like daughter. Or maybe it's from Bulma? She did manipulate him alot into wearing that BADMAN shirt.... Anyways, thanks for reviewing my sotry. Thought I'd return the favor. Hurry and write more, I'll be waiting! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it would be better if it had more gohan in it and less vegeta but other than that it was pretty good........
love your brother:)
ps. more GOHAN GODDDDD..................... |
Reviewed By: Meis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story hurry and continue. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 21, 2001 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. I can't stop laughing-my bro and I did the same thing when we were little. We worked dad over till he couldn't see straight. Please continue. Peace |
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