| "Snooker retry" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:35
Comment/Review:
Your doing better, but the left arm is still very thin from the elbow down. I would suggest if you want to keep working on this one piece you start over from the begginning with a new drawing of the same pose. Don't go for details and shading just go for the basic outline of it. I would love to see how much improvement you'd show trying that.~Fanilia
| Title: ARG har
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 16:35
Comment/Review:
That looks a lot better, it's great to see that someone is taking some of the advice and make it better. This looks really great. Though the closest ball towards us is somewhat flat because of no shadowing or highlights. After all, the closer it is to us, the more details you may need to add. But much better job of it!
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 02:44
Comment/Review:
Not bad! I like. :) :) That extra shading looks good, and having that pool que round at the end made a big difference. I see you made the front ball larger, which looks great on its own, though you forgot the other two balls, they look tinny in comparison even with foreshortening. The inconsistency is a little noticeable, though if you gave details to the balls it wouldn't be so noticeable, and help with the foreshortening. Well overall, looking good, keep it up! :)
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