| "Taylin- 'Love and War'" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 14:49
Comment/Review:
Nice pencil work. I would suggest using more degrees of shadow in your work to give it more depth. Also the hi light in the eyes is too pronoounced for pencil I think if you removed the bottom ones and made them smaller it would look better. I know that pencil is hard to scann, but you might want to try to sharpen the main lines some. Overall the pose is nice and the image very well balanced.~Fanilia
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 16:04
Comment/Review:
You have a good concept of shading, you will just need to focus on obscuring less things. Also, adding more shadows will do that, since it gives more depth. I don't really spot the other arm (our right) and seems to be lost in the wings or not drawn at all. Other than that, I really like how you did the faces.
| Title: ARG Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2005 16:24
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Drawing Skill: 5 of 10
Use of Medium: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bizmarck covered most of the major points. Also, when you're putting together a piece like this, work on composition. Part of why it's hard to figure out what's going on is because the composition doesn't work that well. Things that work well with a CG image don't always work well in pencil, especially with the lack of background or color as a unifying aspect. Keep working at it - practice will only help you get better. :)
| Title: ARG!!
Reviewed By: Amostar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 08:06
Comment/Review:
I must agree with the comments previously made, you just need practise is all. The blade's staff thingeh should be a bit thicker though because if that blade was really on that thin pole, the pole would break I'm sure. Great work, keep practising. :3 ~~Amostar~~
| Title: ArG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (signed in?) On: December 18, 2004 20:57
Comment/Review:
You were going for something really cool, I think, but it needs work. Take heart! Things are getting better all the time (to quote the superfab Beatles). Make the eyes smaller, work on face shapes and bodies, shading. You have the idea, and the glossy hair and the shiny blade were good. Just take this potential and run.
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 20:04
Comment/Review:
Though it looks rather stylish and the shading and line work are smooth its very difficult to tell what is going on, particularly in the left drawing, the similarity in shading makes the scathe very obscure and I'm not sure the angle of the visible hand/arm is even possible given the rest of the anatomies position. Unless the character has very long arms indeed. The clothing shading and line work is also rather obscure. Given the pose and clothing you have to make sure the solid edge lines are very bold and noticeable so the anatomy and physical form comes out obviously, intensive contrast would have the same effect, you have to make all elements stand out independently to give depth and clarity to a two tone picture. Nice start, you have many elements in place already, keep it up :)
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