| "Jatar- 'Love and War'" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 13:07
Comment/Review:
I like it. It's pretty good for a scetch really. I would though ask for maybe more shading and a more close eye on how you shape things. **shrugs** but that's me. Keep drawing. ^^
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Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 00:08
Comment/Review:
The characters are pretty neat looking --I really like the armour on their shoulders and design of the hair. You've got a lot of it lined up pretty well, but there are just a few things that throw it off. Like the shoulders and crown of the head. A nice shaded picture of these characters would be great next time. ^_^
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Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 10:37
Comment/Review:
It just seems that your main problem is proportioning. When you get that down then you will be able to work on your shading and all the little extra stuff that makes artwork gravy. XP Also it seems like you a little heavy handed when it comes to drawing, so just lighten your sketching and any mistakes you make would be more controllable. But keep trying and you should be able to get the knack of it. ^_~ Songie
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Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 20:34
Comment/Review:
Not bad the transiton is nice. My only suggestion would have been not to draw the line down the middle but since your lines change smooth enough from one aspect of him to the other.~Fanilia
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Title: ArG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (not signed in) On: January 23, 2005 18:23
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Everything really looks rough. The eyes could have been better, and the nose is uncentered. You could have done more with this such as shading. Also try to keep the shoulders in proportion. This picture focuses solely on his shoulders and above, so you've got to make sure that what little you're drawing looks super fantastic. Just like everybody else, you have a lot to learn, which is okay. Remember to believe in yourself.
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