| "Torn" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: TigersBloodMagik [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 21:49
Comment/Review:
I'm really liking your style for this picture. The first thing it reminded me of when I saw it was nightmare before christmas. Yes I agree as some have pointed out the necks are long, or slightly skewed, but I think it just makes the style. It also reminds me of the "girly" webcomic style. Exgaggerated bold lines and very solid coloring give it a rough but well done look. Heh the eyes in the moon kinda sneek up on you. Again, I really love this drawing.
| Title: Artwork Review? (no duh... -.-)
Reviewed By: Sai Ya Xiao Jie On: May 19, 2005 17:41
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, it's so intense! If you've read my other reviews for ficcys, then you'll know I offer VERY long reviews, and I try to avoid reviews that have nothing to say. I'm not flaming, I'm just offering some suggestions that may/may no come in handy. Think of it as creative criticism. ^-^ I really like the spacing/postures of the subjects; it fits the story very well. I like Vegeta's expression, even if it doesn't fit with the story all that well. Vegeta's neck seems curved to an unnatural degree, but the shading in his eyes is great. Goku and Trunks are drawn nicely, though the bleeding on Bulma looks unnatural. When blood runs, is not thick, nor does it bulge up, so try to make it look flatter. Her expression kinda scares me too, but I think it's just me. Also, you want more contrast in the background, and contrast between the background and the characters. This is especially important because it is in b&w. Don't get me wrong; it's a nice picture! :) Also, the fanficcy is great.
| Title: I like this..
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 17:30
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 9 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bulma's posture looks stiff and her neck is a bit too long. Goku and Vegeta look great though. Over all this is a good picture. I like Vegeta's satanic expression and the way they are drawn. Tell your friend that I like her art. By the way, I am reading your fanfiction torn and its wonderful. Bura
| Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl (Not signed in) On: April 26, 2005 13:41
Comment/Review:
I like the expression on Vegeta's face and I think it goes very well with the feel of your fic! ^.^! *Scrambles off to check for updates!* ~Frabs! ^.^!
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