| "Ninja POUNCE!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 21:53
Comment/Review:
Wow, what a dynamic pose. Looks really awesome. The tattoos, in my opinion, looks way overdone and in some places, look totally flat.The feet coming at us don't look right because of the perspective of the side of feet and his toes look really wrong. As for (his) left hand, the fingers look wonky as well. Aside from those, it's a wonderful, fun piece to look at because it's full of energy.
| Title: F.A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 19:18
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 9 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
The use of references is really working out for you - your art has become much more dynamic since you started using visual references for figures and creating your own characters from them. The colored line art is a nice touch on this piece - I don't think it would be quite as effective with black line art. I'm a bit thrown off by the roughness of the line art in some areas; even if you don't like the simulated pressure of the pen tool, you can set it to a defined single width and still smooth out your line art. The only other thing that really bothered me overly was the watermark across the center of the image. I know they're becoming more popular, and sites like deviantART encourage them, but it takes away from the composition of the piece. Instead, try working in your signature as you would if this were a traditional media piece - it usually helps the work along and doesn't disrupt the color and composition. Keep up the great improvement! :)
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Tomb_Robber_Emiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 22:13
Comment/Review:
This came out great for your first effort with colored linework. The image itself is quite fun, and I love the facial expression. The most glaring problems with it lie in the hands and feet. The perspective of the foot coming at us is rather wonky. The position of the foot is as if it is coming directly at as, however, the position of the leg doesn't work with that. The angle of the foot just looks really painful. D: It's difficult to see if there are any problems with the upper hand due to line confusion with the tattoos (which look pretty cool, by the way), but his left hand is oddly shaped and the fingers lack any definite placement and joints. But overall, this is a fun, dynamic image, and is definitely one of your best. :)
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