Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ If you were a Saiya-jin... ❯ If You Were a Sayajin ( Chapter 2 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

Well, I am glad to see I got some feedback here, I actually had this fic on fanfiction.net first but the dumbass administrators there, deleted it because it was interactive and a list so I put it on this one, well actually I was gonna put it up here anyways. So if you were on ff.net and you sent something to me, your gonna have to send it again, sucks I know but anyhow, onto the lists from the readers.

And words in between these little sign things […] are my little comments on what you guys put.

First up we have petite_angel, she says if she found out she were a saiya-jin she would:

Dye her tail blonde to match her hair,

Fly to Hollywood so she can see all her favorite actors and actresses,

Send all of the criminals to the next dimension(terrorists mainly)

Create her own rock band and name it "Planet Vegeta",

Blast a Kamehameha on all the school preps ^.^ he he, She likes this one, [so do I!]

Become a superhero like Gohan and call herself the SaiyaWoman, [umm, nice name…continuing on then…]

Go to a school dance and freak everyone out with her "tail dances"

And last but not least, since she would have like the perfect body she would got to the beach and wear a pink bikini and when all the guys stare she would fly away and make them faint. [cool, although I would wear something more along the lines of scarlet, but then again I just don't like pink.]

Okay then, the next person is Krissy, she says she would:

Train all the time to become the strongest in the universe he he he,

Show off her tail and freak people out, that would be so much fun,

Throw a ki blast at anyone who pisses her off,

Throw ki blasts just for fun, not aimed at anyone unless they pissed her off,

Fly a lot just for fun(she always wished she could fly)

Show off her strength, hee hee, that would be so much fun,

She'd save people from danger and save people she hates from danger and make them do all her chores or she would send them to the next demension,

And last on her list, show off her awesome saiya-jin body.

And finally, the last person on today's, umm… chapter, ChiChi says she would:

Scare her mom out of her wits,

Be just as mean as Chichi can (and that is her name)

Brake all her house rules and dare her parents to do something about it,

Piss people off and dare them to do something about it, [just like me.]

Tell the school bully to "bit me" and watch him try to hurt her,

Be the town crime fighter and -not- wear a stupid costume,

Teach only her best friends to fly,

Blow up anyone the pisses her off or annoys her,

Go to the coolest theme park and tell them to let her in for free or she will blast them to the next dimension,

Make a hobby out of killing people who piss her off, [ooookay then, moving on…]\

And lastly for her list: Enter a race and win by taking one step and say tht it was child's play.

Well I would like to thank all of you for being the first peeps to review me and all. Also I want to thank Princess Bulma for being my first reveiewer and you guys no you can email me parts of a list at a time or review me more then once(I think) with more of your list or something like that and yeah. Keep it coming peoples,

Kalia out.