InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Thunder Clouds ❯ Kagome kidnapped ( Chapter 2 )
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By: kougasgirl05 
Kagome gets kidnapped after she tries to save Shippo from Manten.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.10.2003 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 729 | Status: Work In Progress
Kagome gets kidnapped after she tries to save Shippo from Manten.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.10.2003 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 729 | Status: Work In Progress
*Thunder Clouds Chapter 2*
Okay hey again I'm sorry about the last chapter I had to really rush
through it and I didn't get a chance to proofread so I redid it,I hope
it's better.I will try to make this one better and longer. Since my
friend is writting a hiten/kagome fic that is really similar to
this and she started hers first I'm gonna
try to change it up and make it different from hers.
Its really good, its called Thunder Arrow Of Love. Im also ganna
start a Kouga/Kagome fic cause I got some requests. I'll try to start
it soon.
Im sorry if it sucks please dont flame me. -_-
Oh yea since I redid the ch u might wanna go read it again cause I changed some stuff involving Shippo, his parents, and why he wants revenge on the thunder brothers.
Diclaimer: I dont own Inuyasha or it's charactors :(
(This is stupid nobody here owns any of the shows and they never
will so what's the friggin point.Why the hell would you come here to write stories if you owned Inuyasha and could just make ur own episodes. ~_~)
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Chapter 2
"Kagome is Inuyasha gonna be my adopted father since you're my new
mom?" Shippo asked with a pleading voice and anticpation.
Inuyasha jumped ten feet in the air."WHAT!?"
Kagome*sweat drop*"No Shippo he is not."
Inuyasha`Good grief, who does she think she is taking in that kitsune.
She can't take care of him we have to find those jewel shards.'
"Good cause then you won't mind if I do this"said Shippo as he swiped
the shards from Inuyasha and he was rammed into the ground with one
of his kitsune curses."Sorry kagome I'll return these as soon as
I get my jewel shardback from the Thunder Brothers."
"SHIPPO NO WAIT"yelled Kagome as she ran after the kitsune.
Inuyasha"Damn that little runt, COME BACK HERE I"LL GET YOU!"
"WAIT! KAGOME come back and peel off this scroll!"
Shippo ran and soon got far enough ahead of Kagome so that he could rest"Good now I just need to lure the Thunder Brothers here then I'll swipe my jewel peice back it's the only thing left of my family."
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Manten flew through the air over the empty flats. He needed to find
more jewel shards so that his brother would be pleased with him but he
kept getting sidetracked as he dreamed about how wonderful it could be
to have hair as his brother did.
Manten had inherited his mother atrosous looks and baldness while Hiten had been born with his father's handsome looks and full raven hair. `If only I had some hair I would surely attract some women as brother Hiten does.'
"Huh... what was that ?"said Manten as he turned and saw a familar
looking kitsune running through the grass.Manten flew down and saw that
it was the same kitsune who's jewel shard he had taken but only yesterday
and the jewel fragment was now imbedded in his head.
"
Ha now I'll just have to kill the foolish kitsune for a pelt."
said Manten as he krept up behind the unsuspecting kitsune and
cornered him.
Shippo"huh ... what was that."Shippo turned around and was horrified(is
that how u spell that -_- sorry I dont have spell checker) at what he
saw.It was one of the Thunder Brothers and he was smirking evily while
he drooled. He inched closer and closer to Shippo.
Shippo'What am I suspose to do I cant possibly defeat him hes got me cornered.
Oh no I'm doomed.`
"Oh whats this I see you have a another jewel shard. Hah, now I'll have a new
pelt and best of all another jewel shard what a lucky day this has
been." Manten grin was dripping with malice as he drew nearer and nearer
to the helpless kitsune.
"Hand over the jewel and I'll make your death quick."
"Stop right there"said Kagome as she pulled out an arrow and aimed it
at Manten.
Shippo"Kagome no he'll kill you!" `She cant kill him with her arrow
alone, he'll destroy her with his lightning attack!'
Manten"Hah, foolish wench I shall kill you and the kitsune."
(okay in the show the thunder brothers eat women but in this story they
dont that would ruin things and it's gross, I dont want Manten to eat
kagome ^_^)
Manten proceded in pursuing Shippo.
Kagome"I mean it one step closer and I'll shoot"`If only I hit him.My
aim hasn't improved much since I met Inuyasha.Oh well I've gotta try my
best and save Shippo or we"ll both be killed.Kami give me strength."
(Isn't Kami like the name of their god or something.I'm not sure.)
Kagome aimed at Manten and closed her eyes praying the arrow hit.She
pulled back and let the arrow fly.
Kagome opened her eyes."Huh"`Did I just hit him? Oh my gosh I did but
he's still coming at me`
Manten"AHHHH, you wench MY nose, my perfect nose I'll KILL YOU "
Kagome strung up another arrow and took careful aim while manten charged at her and his mouth filled with eletricity
Kagome`Oh no nows he's really mad, I have to stop him.`She shot the arrow but it only grazed his head."dratz"
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH MY HAIR"Maten yelled inraged that 2 of the few hairs on
his head had fallen out.His mouth filled with lightning as he charged up
to use his lightning attack.
Shippo"OH NO RUN KAGOME thats the same attack he used to kill those
warriors!"
Shippo ran to kagome but he was too late as Kagome was caught in
the attack and was rendered unconciuos while Shippo was sheilded by Kagome.
`OH NO, he coming this way. He'll kill her but he'll kill me too and how am I suspose to
save her? I have to get Inuyasha`Shippo retreated
and ran as fast as he could to get to Inuyasha.
"I'll come back and save you Kagome just as you saved me I promise."said
Shippo his voice full of determination but edged with worry and guilt.
Manten"Ah what is this......oh she is beatiful I think I'll take her with me."
(Also in the story Manten is not gonna try and use kagome to make some stupid
hair concoction -_- yuck he can buy a wig or something hahha I told you I was
gonna change some things.Lets buy him Rogain! ^_^)
Manten grabbed Kagome and threw her onto his thunder cloud then he hopped on
and rose upword into the sky.He could see his dark thunder cloud home far out
into the horizon atop the enormous mountain`I know Hiten won't be pleased but
maybe he will like this beatiful vixon, I'll take care of that kitsune later.'
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"INUYASHA HELP HURRY" Screamed Shipppo as he ran and pounced on Inuyasha
and removed the spell scroll. Inuyasha was freed."INUYASHA Kagome has been
ubducted by the thunder brothers you have to save her!"
Inuyasha"WHOA whoa hold on what!? YOU let Kagome get ubducted by the
Thunder brothers, the same guys who stole your jewel shard?"
Shippo"YES they did and now we have to save her or they might kill her!"
"Inuyasha"Huh figures you would let that happen, why didn't you stop them?
What did you do hide in the bushes while they took her?"asked Inuyasha
growing very angry.
"Forget that we have to go save her!"said Shippo growing more impacient
and worried by the minute.
Inuyasha grimaced and sighed in frustration"OK alright come down where are we
suspose to find them anyway huh?"
Shippo`OH NO I don't know were to find them how are we suspose to
rescue Kagome?She'll be killed if we don't save her and soon!`"Ummmm....all I know is
rumors that they live in mountains or high in the sky atop clouds but I'm
not uh sure exactly."
Inuyasha hands clenched, his eyes glazed over and his face grew red with
anger and frustration, smoke was practily coming out of his ears.Shippo backed away in fear."Uh uh IIInnuyasaa?"
Inuyasha grabbed Shippo by the neck and shook him feircly.
"HOW THE HELL ARE WE SUSPOSE TO FIND HER NOW!?!Now we'll never
find her."He spat the words out and threw Shippo to the ground.
Myoga(the flea)hopped on Inuyasha's shoulder."Ahem, Lord Inuyasha perhaps
if I may be of some asisstance?"
Inuyasha*blink blink*"Huh what Myoga, how can you help us?"
Myoga"I have heard rumors as well of the fiercsome Thunder Brothers,
but I believe that they only live atop enormously high mountains so it
appears as if their home is practicaly floating in the clouds."
Inuyasha"And just how is that suspose to help"Yelled the dumbfounded
Inuyasha with a confused blank look on his face. He was growing even more
frustrated and very impatient.(course that's always how he is ^-^)
"Well we must search for this the Thunder Brother's home by looking for
a place such as I have described,surely some villager will know were this
type of lacation can be found."
Inuyasha clenches his fists and groaned in aggravation, his temper was running
shorter by the second. "Fine, Shippo know
anywhere we might find one?"
S
hippo stepped back in fear of the angered hanyou.(is this how u spell it srry)
Without Kagome there to defend the poor him he was worried that Inuyasha might actually lose it and try to hurt him.
So far it seemed that Inuyasha was getting pretty close to the brink of losing
his temper completely and Shippo didnt want to find out what would happen if
he really lost it.
"Uh we could try the Northern Lands past the end of the forest." Said Shippo
with uncertainty and a slight hint of his evergrowing growing fear.
Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's bike and hoisted Shippo up by the tail."Okay well
lets get going. We gotta find those Thunder brothers before they kill my
shard detector."Inuyasha said smugley as he swung Shippo over his shoulder
and he took off North.
Shippo'He doesn't treat Kagome with any respect, she deserves much better,
Inuyasha should be more appreciative of Kagome. I don't know how she puts
up with this arrogant selfish fool.'
(^_^ wise words of the young Shippo.There is gonna be some Inuyasha bashing,
I'm not very happy with him right now so I'm taking my anger out on him but
to me this is putting it lightly)
************************************************************
Okay was this ANY better im soo srry bout the last chapter and for how long it took me to get this one out.I hoped you liked it cause im still kinda getting into the groove *_*
of writting.I'll try to update as soon as I can and i'll try to start my kouga/kagome stroy too. PLEASE REVEIW!!!! I really need your opions on this just dont make um tooo harsh ok. I need some kind of advice on how to make it better or im neva gonna get any betta
REVEIW!!!
Kougasgirl(4eva^_^)05
Okay hey again I'm sorry about the last chapter I had to really rush
through it and I didn't get a chance to proofread so I redid it,I hope
it's better.I will try to make this one better and longer. Since my
friend is writting a hiten/kagome fic that is really similar to
this and she started hers first I'm gonna
try to change it up and make it different from hers.
Its really good, its called Thunder Arrow Of Love. Im also ganna
start a Kouga/Kagome fic cause I got some requests. I'll try to start
it soon.
Im sorry if it sucks please dont flame me. -_-
Oh yea since I redid the ch u might wanna go read it again cause I changed some stuff involving Shippo, his parents, and why he wants revenge on the thunder brothers.
Diclaimer: I dont own Inuyasha or it's charactors :(
(This is stupid nobody here owns any of the shows and they never
will so what's the friggin point.Why the hell would you come here to write stories if you owned Inuyasha and could just make ur own episodes. ~_~)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 2
"Kagome is Inuyasha gonna be my adopted father since you're my new
mom?" Shippo asked with a pleading voice and anticpation.
Inuyasha jumped ten feet in the air."WHAT!?"
Kagome*sweat drop*"No Shippo he is not."
Inuyasha`Good grief, who does she think she is taking in that kitsune.
She can't take care of him we have to find those jewel shards.'
"Good cause then you won't mind if I do this"said Shippo as he swiped
the shards from Inuyasha and he was rammed into the ground with one
of his kitsune curses."Sorry kagome I'll return these as soon as
I get my jewel shardback from the Thunder Brothers."
"SHIPPO NO WAIT"yelled Kagome as she ran after the kitsune.
Inuyasha"Damn that little runt, COME BACK HERE I"LL GET YOU!"
"WAIT! KAGOME come back and peel off this scroll!"
Shippo ran and soon got far enough ahead of Kagome so that he could rest"Good now I just need to lure the Thunder Brothers here then I'll swipe my jewel peice back it's the only thing left of my family."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Manten flew through the air over the empty flats. He needed to find
more jewel shards so that his brother would be pleased with him but he
kept getting sidetracked as he dreamed about how wonderful it could be
to have hair as his brother did.
Manten had inherited his mother atrosous looks and baldness while Hiten had been born with his father's handsome looks and full raven hair. `If only I had some hair I would surely attract some women as brother Hiten does.'
"Huh... what was that ?"said Manten as he turned and saw a familar
looking kitsune running through the grass.Manten flew down and saw that
it was the same kitsune who's jewel shard he had taken but only yesterday
and the jewel fragment was now imbedded in his head.
"
Ha now I'll just have to kill the foolish kitsune for a pelt."
said Manten as he krept up behind the unsuspecting kitsune and
cornered him.
Shippo"huh ... what was that."Shippo turned around and was horrified(is
that how u spell that -_- sorry I dont have spell checker) at what he
saw.It was one of the Thunder Brothers and he was smirking evily while
he drooled. He inched closer and closer to Shippo.
Shippo'What am I suspose to do I cant possibly defeat him hes got me cornered.
Oh no I'm doomed.`
"Oh whats this I see you have a another jewel shard. Hah, now I'll have a new
pelt and best of all another jewel shard what a lucky day this has
been." Manten grin was dripping with malice as he drew nearer and nearer
to the helpless kitsune.
"Hand over the jewel and I'll make your death quick."
"Stop right there"said Kagome as she pulled out an arrow and aimed it
at Manten.
Shippo"Kagome no he'll kill you!" `She cant kill him with her arrow
alone, he'll destroy her with his lightning attack!'
Manten"Hah, foolish wench I shall kill you and the kitsune."
(okay in the show the thunder brothers eat women but in this story they
dont that would ruin things and it's gross, I dont want Manten to eat
kagome ^_^)
Manten proceded in pursuing Shippo.
Kagome"I mean it one step closer and I'll shoot"`If only I hit him.My
aim hasn't improved much since I met Inuyasha.Oh well I've gotta try my
best and save Shippo or we"ll both be killed.Kami give me strength."
(Isn't Kami like the name of their god or something.I'm not sure.)
Kagome aimed at Manten and closed her eyes praying the arrow hit.She
pulled back and let the arrow fly.
Kagome opened her eyes."Huh"`Did I just hit him? Oh my gosh I did but
he's still coming at me`
Manten"AHHHH, you wench MY nose, my perfect nose I'll KILL YOU "
Kagome strung up another arrow and took careful aim while manten charged at her and his mouth filled with eletricity
Kagome`Oh no nows he's really mad, I have to stop him.`She shot the arrow but it only grazed his head."dratz"
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH MY HAIR"Maten yelled inraged that 2 of the few hairs on
his head had fallen out.His mouth filled with lightning as he charged up
to use his lightning attack.
Shippo"OH NO RUN KAGOME thats the same attack he used to kill those
warriors!"
Shippo ran to kagome but he was too late as Kagome was caught in
the attack and was rendered unconciuos while Shippo was sheilded by Kagome.
`OH NO, he coming this way. He'll kill her but he'll kill me too and how am I suspose to
save her? I have to get Inuyasha`Shippo retreated
and ran as fast as he could to get to Inuyasha.
"I'll come back and save you Kagome just as you saved me I promise."said
Shippo his voice full of determination but edged with worry and guilt.
Manten"Ah what is this......oh she is beatiful I think I'll take her with me."
(Also in the story Manten is not gonna try and use kagome to make some stupid
hair concoction -_- yuck he can buy a wig or something hahha I told you I was
gonna change some things.Lets buy him Rogain! ^_^)
Manten grabbed Kagome and threw her onto his thunder cloud then he hopped on
and rose upword into the sky.He could see his dark thunder cloud home far out
into the horizon atop the enormous mountain`I know Hiten won't be pleased but
maybe he will like this beatiful vixon, I'll take care of that kitsune later.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"INUYASHA HELP HURRY" Screamed Shipppo as he ran and pounced on Inuyasha
and removed the spell scroll. Inuyasha was freed."INUYASHA Kagome has been
ubducted by the thunder brothers you have to save her!"
Inuyasha"WHOA whoa hold on what!? YOU let Kagome get ubducted by the
Thunder brothers, the same guys who stole your jewel shard?"
Shippo"YES they did and now we have to save her or they might kill her!"
"Inuyasha"Huh figures you would let that happen, why didn't you stop them?
What did you do hide in the bushes while they took her?"asked Inuyasha
growing very angry.
"Forget that we have to go save her!"said Shippo growing more impacient
and worried by the minute.
Inuyasha grimaced and sighed in frustration"OK alright come down where are we
suspose to find them anyway huh?"
Shippo`OH NO I don't know were to find them how are we suspose to
rescue Kagome?She'll be killed if we don't save her and soon!`"Ummmm....all I know is
rumors that they live in mountains or high in the sky atop clouds but I'm
not uh sure exactly."
Inuyasha hands clenched, his eyes glazed over and his face grew red with
anger and frustration, smoke was practily coming out of his ears.Shippo backed away in fear."Uh uh IIInnuyasaa?"
Inuyasha grabbed Shippo by the neck and shook him feircly.
"HOW THE HELL ARE WE SUSPOSE TO FIND HER NOW!?!Now we'll never
find her."He spat the words out and threw Shippo to the ground.
Myoga(the flea)hopped on Inuyasha's shoulder."Ahem, Lord Inuyasha perhaps
if I may be of some asisstance?"
Inuyasha*blink blink*"Huh what Myoga, how can you help us?"
Myoga"I have heard rumors as well of the fiercsome Thunder Brothers,
but I believe that they only live atop enormously high mountains so it
appears as if their home is practicaly floating in the clouds."
Inuyasha"And just how is that suspose to help"Yelled the dumbfounded
Inuyasha with a confused blank look on his face. He was growing even more
frustrated and very impatient.(course that's always how he is ^-^)
"Well we must search for this the Thunder Brother's home by looking for
a place such as I have described,surely some villager will know were this
type of lacation can be found."
Inuyasha clenches his fists and groaned in aggravation, his temper was running
shorter by the second. "Fine, Shippo know
anywhere we might find one?"
S
hippo stepped back in fear of the angered hanyou.(is this how u spell it srry)
Without Kagome there to defend the poor him he was worried that Inuyasha might actually lose it and try to hurt him.
So far it seemed that Inuyasha was getting pretty close to the brink of losing
his temper completely and Shippo didnt want to find out what would happen if
he really lost it.
"Uh we could try the Northern Lands past the end of the forest." Said Shippo
with uncertainty and a slight hint of his evergrowing growing fear.
Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's bike and hoisted Shippo up by the tail."Okay well
lets get going. We gotta find those Thunder brothers before they kill my
shard detector."Inuyasha said smugley as he swung Shippo over his shoulder
and he took off North.
Shippo'He doesn't treat Kagome with any respect, she deserves much better,
Inuyasha should be more appreciative of Kagome. I don't know how she puts
up with this arrogant selfish fool.'
(^_^ wise words of the young Shippo.There is gonna be some Inuyasha bashing,
I'm not very happy with him right now so I'm taking my anger out on him but
to me this is putting it lightly)
************************************************************
Okay was this ANY better im soo srry bout the last chapter and for how long it took me to get this one out.I hoped you liked it cause im still kinda getting into the groove *_*
of writting.I'll try to update as soon as I can and i'll try to start my kouga/kagome stroy too. PLEASE REVEIW!!!! I really need your opions on this just dont make um tooo harsh ok. I need some kind of advice on how to make it better or im neva gonna get any betta
REVEIW!!!
Kougasgirl(4eva^_^)05