Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ Got to Love that Karma ❯ Chapter 3

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Got to Love that Karma


A/N: Thanks for the reviews

This is mainly in Mitsune's point of view

( ) Means thoughts

Don't own Love Hina, Duh

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Ch. 3: The study session from hell. FIGHT!

A couple days later:

"Why are you here Mitsune?"


Naru was clearly annoyed at my presence in her study sessions. I guess what annoyed her more was the fact that Keitaro was in there to. I shook my head

"I don't know. I'm bored I guess"

"Then why don't you drink like you usually do?"
"I don't need to drink all the time"

Naru looked at me funny. She shrugged before frowning.

"And why are you here pervert?" She asked Keitaro.

He wasn't listening, just writing answers in his practice booklet. Naru got even more frustrated and flicked her eraser at him. He ducked and the eraser bounced off the wall and hit Naru right between the eyes, leaving a red impression between her eyes. I fell of my seat laughing and that got Keitaro's attention

"Huh Mitsune? What are you doing here?"

"I told Naru I'm bored"

"Yeah So am I. Wanna do something"


Naru slapped her hands on the table

"Aren't you supposed to be taking a practice test?"

" I did. I finished it just now"
"I bet you failed it"


Naru smirked, but she doesn't know the consequences of her actions


"Fine it's a bet! If Keitaro does better than you, you have to ..." I whispered the rest to Naru who blushed

"And If I win?"

I couldn't think of anything until Keitaro said


"I'll leave Hinata-Sou"

"It's a deal!"

They shook hands as I thought (I wonder if Naru will do that) Keitaro quickly graded Naru's test.

"You got 95.9%"

"HA your turn"


Naru snatched Keitaro's test out of his hands


"Say bye bye to Hinata-Sou"

She began grading the test and the strangest thing happened. Her face changed from cocky to amused to slighty worried right to full blown fear and embarrassment. She froze into place.


"What I get Naru?" Keitaro asked curiously

"Um Um You failed! Ha HA Ha" She answered scared

"Oh I guess I have to move"
"Yah I guess you do"

Keitaro began walking out the door when the ceiling broke through and a naked Shinobu landed on Naru. The paper in her hand flew into mine. I looked at the paper, ignoring the apologies of a beet red Shinobu as she ran out the door at the speed of light. I looked at the paper and smirked.

"Naru you lied!!"

"She did?" Keitaro asked

"You got a 120%"
"A120%"

"Look at it yourself"


Keitaro looked at the paper and grinned. He got every question, plus the impossibly hard extra credit

'"I guess I won the bet"

"NOOOO!!!" Naru said as she ran out the door even faster then Shinobu.

Keitaro looked around

"Hey where did Naru go?"

"She ran away."

"Oh well what did she have to do if she lost?"
"You'll see tomorrow"

"Oh okay. Can you help me fix the ceiling?"

This would have been my clue to run hard and run fast, but I looked into his serene eyes and nodded, blushing like a ten year old girl. Next thing I knew, we were fixing the ceiling as he told me stories of all the places he seen. Again Keitaro suprises me yet again.


"Want to come along sometime"
"I would like that"

(Whoa! Did that just come out my mouth? Come on Mitsune! Everyone doesn't call you Kitsune for nothing) Yet I just sat there working on the ceiling blushing even harder.

The next day

I woke up first for once. Maybe because I haven't had a drink all day yesterday or maybe I wanted to see want to see what Naru will look like. Never the less, Shinobu was surprised to see me fully dressed drinking a cup of coffee.


"Mitsune? Is that you?"
"Yeah what of it kid?"

"Its just that I never seen you sober in the mornings"

"Oh come on that can't be true!"

Shinobu scratched her head in thought before finally shaking her head. Wow I maybe I should lie off the stuff for a while so I can think about this. I kept on thinking of past experiences of my drinking and didn't notice that everyone began showing up. In fact It was Keitaro who brought me out my thoughts.


"Morning Mitsune"
"Morning"
"Um where is Naru?"


I was about to answer but…

"Pikachu"

Everyone turned towards the source of the voice and began laughing, even Motoko couldn't resist. Naru was dressed in a Pikachu cos-play costume, complete with a twitching tail. It took all my will power not to laugh.

"Morning Naru"
"I hate you" she whispered to me as she sat down

"That's what you get for thinking Keitaro is stupid"

That's how breakfast went. Every time Naru called attention to herself, everyone would just start laughing and She would turn redder and redder. I was about to defuse the bomb that was about to explode until Keitaro spoke.


"Oh don't get mad Naru. You look absolutely cute with that on"

"Huh?" Naru said red from blushing

"Yeah I wonder what cute cos-play clothes you're going to wear next"

Naru to everyone's surprise; blushed even harder and ran away from the table. I looked at Keitaro jealously. (Eh? No I can't be jealous) He turned and our eyes locked. He winked and grin which cause me to blush again. Motoko noticed this and spoke.


"What are you doing pervert?"

"Ah nothing Motoko"

"I don't believe you. Prepare to Die"

She swing her Katana at him. I watched in shock as he caught the blade in one hand. I think Motoko was more scared because she gulped and tears appeared at the corner of her eyes

"Please don't break my blade," She begged trying to pull the blade out of his hand. It didn't budge an inch

I remembered how a couple days ago Keitaro unknowingly shattered her practice sword. I took a closer look and saw that it was her family blade. Then I saw Keitaro's face and I nearly pissed in my pants from fear. He looked like a Oni woken up on the wrong side of the bed.

"My My. What do we have here?"

"Keitaro let go of my blade."


Motoko twisted it somewhat and I saw blood leaking down the blade. Keitaro's grin grew from ear to ear.


"Why Motoko it is a nice blade. It will be a shame to break such a nice weapon"

With a twist of his wrist the sword flipped out her hands into Keitaro's. In looked into his eyes and noticed that they were glazed over. Motoko shivered as her weapon was taken.


"I shall challenge you for such a weapon"


That blew the rest of us away.

"Keitaro you can't beat me!"

"Keitaro are you crazy?"

"Yeah big brother is gonna fight!!!"

"You'll get hurt!!"

Those words had came out of my mouth. I froze trying to find the point that I actually cared, but Keitaro interrupted my thoughts

"I see I need to prove myself. On the roof in two hours or the sword gets destroyed."

With that, He left. Motoko tried following him, but here foot got stuck in a crack on the floor, making her slam into the ground. Moments later an extermly pissed off Haruka ran into the room out of breath.

"WHICH…huff…ONE…huff 230;THREATENED…huff…HIM!!!!!!!!!"

Everyone pointed to Motoko, who looked like she didn't do anything. I watched as Haruka caught her breath as she grew even more worried.

"I am going to call grandma Hina. When are you going to fight?"

"Two hours."
"Oh Shit! I gotta call her now."

I watched as Haruka ran out the room in a frenzied panic.

"I think you are in trouble."

"What can that perverted 'man' do?" Motoko exclaimed nervously.

Chapter over

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Okay I am not that big of a bastard. Ladies and Gentleman: The Fight Scene!


Two Hours Later.


I watched as Motoko paced back and forth at the sight of the battlefield.

"Nervous?"

"N-n-n-n-n-no"

"I would be"

"What can he do anyway? He is nothing but an lucky weak pervert"


Suddenly, a blur fly through the air past us and then the trees behind us exploded into splinters. When I turned back in that direction, there I saw Keitaro, still smiling like the devil himself. I did notice that he was wearing an all black kendo uniform similar to Motoko's except that instead of sleeves it was all chain mail and on his back was a jagged yin-yang symbol with the white part bloody and rotten and the black part had chains poking through it. The black part of the ying-yang symbol seemed to glow off his back. I looked back towards Motoko and she was twitching out of fear.

"You should be scared"

"Whatever give me back my weapon so I can end this thing"

Keitaro smirked and threw the weapon expertly at Motoko and had she not snatched it out of midair it was going to pierce her chest.

"Your weapon sucks anyway"

"Oh I don't see you carry one?"

Keitaro again smirked sending waves of fear and something else done my back. He took out another sword but it did not look like Motoko's. It was taller then Keitaro himself and the blade was blood red, yet he easily carried the thing with one hand over his shoulder. I thought Motoko wanted to hide under a rock and cry. (I'm glad I'm not her at the time)


"Has the fight started?"


The voice came from Haruka. I shook my head and she sighed in relief.

"Good there is still time"
"Time for what?" Shinobu asked.


The conversation was interrupted as the cling of swords drew our attention. Motoko and Keitaro was sword locked, but it can be seen that she was losing. She was using both hands just to keep her blade pressed against his, but Keitaro only held the sword with one hand and he was sighing


"Is this the best you can do? I thought you were a warrior!"
"I am so fight me!"

"As you wish, but don't say I didn't warn you."


Keitaro pushed with one hand and forced her blade back, as he was surrounded by a red aura. The blades disengaged as the two zoomed of into the forest. I only saw blurs and loud metallic noises and trees being cut into firewood. They landed and Motoko was breathing heavily and her clothes were torn and dirty. Keitaro hasn't even broken a sweat.

"You are better then I thought" he said as one of the chain mail sleeves fell off his arm
"Better…huff…believe…huff…it! !!"

"Time to get serious"

Keitaro got into a stance and held his sword with both hands, parallel with his blowing hair. I found myself blush despite the seriousness. Motoko got into a similar stance and they both stood still. I could have sworn I saw the wind blow leaves in-between the two still fighters. Suddenly, in a blur of movement, both charged at the other. To me they passed each other with out doing anything and now they stood in opposite positions with backs facing each other. After a few seconds Keitaro smirked and put away his sword as Motoko's clothing tore to shreds and she collapsed to the ground.

"I won. Now to finish the fight."

He charged at the knocked out Motoko aiming to kill. Before anyone could scream, a blur appeared out of nowhere and Keitaro collapsed to the ground. Over him was a shorter dark haired girl carrying a humongous iron fan. Haruka sighed in relief.

"I am glad you could make it, Kanako"

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