Mahou Sensei Negima! Fan Fiction ❯ Makie's Revenge ❯ Chapter 6

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Makie’s Revenge
Chapter 6

Setsuna held up the O.B. Chip and tried to present it to Asuna.  All she could do was whimper and shiver in fear. “No… Setsuna,” she pleaded, “You cannot do this… No…” “I must.  I am only doing this for my master, Makie,” Setsuna replied. She tried to place the chip on her forehead.  Asuna was frightened. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!” Asuna screamed and jumped up from her chair.  However, she fell from her chair and inadvertently kicked the O.B. Chip off of Setsuna’s hand.  She dropped to the floor, still tied to the chair.  Setsuna suddenly looked around the room to find the chip she dropped. “No.  Error.  The chip must be presented to Asuna,” she said robotically. Asuna tried to get up, but was incapacitated.  She tried to break free, but to no avail.  Setsuna turned around and grabbed the chair and set it back to its upright position with Asuna tied up.  But Asuna snuck in a small nail-file, she found on the ground, where she fell. “Asuna, you stay here,” Setsuna barked, “I have my orders.  You will not escape.” Asuna then sneered and asked, “Tell me something, Setsuna; do you think you were trying to submit yourself to Makie Sasaki, the airheaded psycho?” “Makie is a great girl, not a psycho,” Setsuna replied, “She is a success towa--.” “Yeah, yeah, yeah!  She’s the Queen of Hearts,” Asuna interrupted, “But… were you trying to submit yourself because of Konoka?” Setsuna then asked, “Why do you want to know?” Asuna replied, as she used the nail-file to get her free, “Come on, sword girl, I know for one thing that you & Konoka are one in the same.  But, you sacrificed yourself to protect Konoka, who was also a slave to Makie, if I recall.” Setsuna then gasped a bit and said, “Konoka is a nice person.  I love her; but Makie is more beautiful than her.” “Oh?  Then why did you just say that you love her?  You and Konoka are not in a relationship!  Are you?” “I… Konoka is a beautiful… girl… Makie is better…”  Setsuna said in fear. “And yet, you still hold onto her control!  What is wrong with you?” “I… I… ERROR!  ERROR!  Please explain!”  Setsuna started to buzz a bit, despite the fact that she is human. Asuna broke free and grabbed her by the arms. She then shook her around and slapped her face. “Setsuna!!!  Get a hold of yourself!!!  You cannot be controlled by such evil!”  She cried, “You only want to be with Konoka!  Why would you say that???” Setsuna then replied in her normal voice, “Konoka was in danger.  Makie had control of her, but I wanted to join her, only to protect Miss Konoka.  She agreed to me to free Konoka, but she tricked me.  She tricked me… to get back at Ayaka.  Our failure of a class rep is very smart, which is why Makie recruited myself & Miss Konoka.  NO!” “Recruited?!  More like Abducted!!!”  Asuna shouted, “How could you do such a thing?” “It wasn’t my fault!  She gave her word… and she broke it!”  She cried, “Makie… why would she hurt Miss Konoka?  Why would she control her like that?? Oh, Miss Konoka!!!  I’m sorry!!!” She started to cry.  Asuna tried to comfort her, but she swatted her hand away. “Resistance is futile, Asuna,” she said, reverting back to her robot voice, “You will be in Makie’s collective soon enough.” “Collective?”  Asuna thought. “Asuna!”  Setsuna cried, “Activate!” Nothing happened. “HA!  You thought I got the chip in me, right?” She showed the chip to Setsuna. “I found this in my shoe.  Sadly, the chip never got a hold of me.  It dropped into my shoe when I kicked up.  So, you failed.” Setsuna shook in fear; she realized that she made a mistake. “How?  How did you…?  How could you?  NO!  ERROR!!!”  She cried. “I know why… Setsuna!  Deactivate!” Setsuna’s body stopped moving.  Her eyes closed and her whole body collapsed. “What an idiot that Makie is,” she thought, “Makie created the O.B. chip replicas to control a person for her own doing.  What she didn’t know is that Satomi & Chao created the original chip was for an exclusive master.  Makie is still the airhead ditz I know.” She put the chip in her pocket and walked past Setsuna.  She then held her up and put her in the chair.  She then tied her up by the arms and legs and hid in the closet. “Makie, I’ll make you wish you’d never hurt Ayaka,” she growled.

The next morning, Makie woke up from her bed.  She found Ayaka, all tied up and very weary. “Makie…” she spoke hoarsely, “What… will… you do… to me now?” Makie grabbed the O.B. chip and hesitantly tried to place is somewhere. “Master, may I suggest a spot to place the chip?” Konoka requested. “If it is to place it in her breasts, then, no way!”  Makie nagged. “No, I mean… try the back of her neck.” “Good thinking!  You deserve a gold star!  If I place it in the back of her neck, Asuna will never find it.  But what’s the harm?  Setsuna has already placed Asuna under our control.” Makie brushed off Ayaka’s blonde hair and placed the O.B. chip on the back of her neck.  She then placed her hair back to cover it. “There.  That way Asuna will be fooled; and she calls herself Dummy Red?” Makie added. Makie turned away from Ayaka and laughed evilly. “Makie, you are such a little genius,” Konoka smiled. “The fun is just getting started!”  She grinned. Just then, Asuna came in and walked like a robot slave. “Master, how may I do you bidding?”  She said in a robotic voice. “Ah, yes.  Asuna, please be a dear and grab that weapon you brought, from under the bed.  I want to smash it into pieces.”  Makie ordered. “Yes, master…”  Asuna said. She turned to Ayaka, who was frightened. “Asuna… this isn’t happening?”  She thought with tears in her eyes. But Asuna winked at Ayaka, knowing that she was only playing.  Ayaka let out a smile.  Asuna went under the bed; she grabbed the blaster and held it in a stance. “Nice dramatics, Asuna,” Makie grinned, “Now be a dear and give me the blaster.” Asuna then stopped her and replied, “Oh, my master, Makie Sasaki, you are a girl who is a success at everything towards Makie.  You are a great girl, a true ribbon dancer, a wonderful harem with pink hair.  Which is why…” Asuna then grinned at her. “Which is why…” she spoke in a normal voice, “You are still the same Makie I know!!!” “NO!”  Makie screamed. Asuna fired her blaster at Konoka, showing a bright white laser.  The laser struck Konoka, knocking her out cold.  Makie tried to wake her up. “Konoka!  Konoka!  Activate!  Turn on!  Power on!  Anything!!!”  She shrieked. All Asuna could do was laugh in glory. “Oh, dear… Makie, you never change, do you?”  She giggled, “What a major airhead!” “YOU!  You tricked me!!!”  Makie screamed, “You killed Konoka!!!” “I did not!”  She snapped, “I disabled her programming.  Now… she’s free!” “Why you… red-haired harlot!!!” Makie tackled Asuna and started to wrestle with each other.  Makie started to throw punches at her, but she blocked them.  Asuna took the upper-hand and struck Makie around the head.  They were fighting like cats.  They continued on, beating each other up. “Asuna… you did it!”  Ayaka thought, “But please… make sure you do not say “Ayaka!  Activate!”  It is what she wanted!” Makie broke out of the tackle by Asuna and pointed at the door. “Setsuna!  Seize her!!!” Nothing happened.  Makie was confused.  She tried calling her out, but couldn’t get a response. “Setsuna!  Where the devil are you?  Get Asuna!!!” Just as she was about to finish, Asuna socked Makie, knocking her out cold to the floor. “No… what did… I do… wrong?”  She weakly said. Asuna untied Ayaka and held her by the shoulders. “What kept you, bells?”  She asked in a smug manner. “I told you Satomi & Chao came through for us.” “Well, for what it is worth, let’s get Setsuna up,” Ayaka requested, “Incidentally, how did you manage to escape?” “Knowing Makie, she has a 0 in Science & Technology,” Asuna replied, “Besides, the O.B. chip was intended for only one master.  And I believe that the chip she stole was the first one she gave.” “Konoka…” “Exactly!  And that blaster… it can permanently disable the O.B. chips programming.” “Wow!  Asuna, you rock!  But wait, what about Setsuna?” “That O.B. chip she got was a replica.  Makie, somehow, replicated the exact system into the chip; but what she didn’t know was that it can be controlled, no matter what it does to the person.” “Oh?  Then, I guess Makie is still a failure towards Makie.” Makie got up and sneered in pain, “That’s what you think… Class Rep and Bell Girl!  You may have ruined my plans, but… wait… no, I was wrong.” Asuna asked, “Wrong because you kidnapped Konoka & Setsuna for your own sick and twisted purposes?” Ayaka then added, “Wrong because no matter what, you’ll always be a ditz?” “No, and no,” Makie answered, “I was wrong because you were fooled easily… hook, line, and sinker.” “What do you mean?”  Asuna cried. “Konoka did get possession of the O.B. chip,” Makie said, “But when I acquired her services, I created the replicas, fitting to both you and Ayaka; so, I disabled her programming and placed the replica chip onto her.  The minute I disabled her programming, I quickly switched the chips and reactivated her.  The task was hard, but I managed to take control of Setsuna, behind her back.  In fact, Setsuna also had replica number two on her hand.  It was easy!” Ayaka gasped.  Asuna asked in fear, “So, if you… you switched with Konoka on the real chip, and Setsuna has the 2nd replica, then where did you put the real O.B. chip?” Makie sneered, “Oh… why don’t you ask Ayaka?  Isn’t that right, my slave?” Ayaka then gripped onto Asuna’s neck and right arm and restrained her. “That is right, my master,” Ayaka said in a robotic voice, “You are a success towards Makie.  I admit it.” “Ayaka!!!  Then, that means…”  Asuna cried. “That’s right!  The real chip is on Ayaka!”  She responded, “And the best part was:  I already activated her, before you even came in, playing as my slave!  And there’s nothing you can do about it now!  WAH, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!!!” “No… why would you do this?  You… you sick, demonic girl!!!”  Asuna cried. She tried to break free, while crying hysterically. “Asuna, I am so sorry,” Ayaka said, “Makie is a wonderful girl.  I was wrong about Makie Sasaki.  She is a success towards Makie.  Always.” Asuna then cried, “Somebody wake me from this nightmare!  I want to wake up!  This isn’t happening to me!!!” Makie then had a replica chip in her hand and presented it to Asuna. “Now, all I need is you as my slave, and my revenge is complete,” she cheered, “With the chips in place of you, Setsuna, & Ayaka, I will finally be noticeable again!” She turned to Ayaka and asked, “Don’t you agree, my slave?” “Yes, I do, master,” she replied, “And I must say this to you, my most wonderful master…” She let go of Asuna and shouted, “Makie!  Activate!!!” Makie’s face turned from an evil grin to a blank look.  Her eyes were discolored and blank, her mouth was shut, her hands were straight, and her body was standing in attention.  YES!  It seems that Ayaka placed the real O.B. chip on Makie! “Ayaka?!  What the hell is going on here???”  Asuna asked in an annoyed look. Ayaka said nothing; she looked at Makie and was concerned. “But… what is going on here?”  She thought, “Ayaka?” Ayaka let out a smile.

You may think that this is the end, well, you are sadly mistaken.  We’ll bring you how Ayaka planned this whole thing, when she put the chip into Makie…

…In the next chapter!