Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ One Long Week ❯ Shut it, seme! ( Chapter 1 )

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By: BiancaChang
Sasuke and Naruto have always been attracted to eachother, but were always too stubborn/embarrassed/ashamed to admit it. So what happens when the two are forced into the same hotel rom together for a whole week? Madness. SasuNaru Eventual Yaoi Lemon

Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama / Comedy / Shoujo | Type: Yaoi | Uploaded On: 04.17.2008 | Pages: 3 | Words: 3.7K | Visits: 2.6K | Status: Work In Progress

Konichiwa fellow Naruto fans!! Or SasuNaru fans... same difference. This is a yaoi, shonen-ai, BL or whatever you wanna call it fanfiction, so if you don't like it, go away and leave us yaoi fangirls in peace!! So this chapter only has a lime, and it's not ENTIRELY smut, mind you. I do wanna focus on a storyline too. So go on!! Read it already!! Oh yeah, and thanks for clicking on this page! Much appreciated!! REVIEWS WELCOMED!! EVEN FLAMES!! So what are you doing reading this (who reads these anyways??) go on, enjoy!!
One more thing, this is my first fanfic I've had the courage to post, so I know you don't have to be nice, but still, I'll love you extra for niceness!
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto. So please don't sue me!! I can't afford to pay bills! I'm only... young! Hell, I can't even afford to pay for my own movie tickets!!
One Long Week
It seemed like a normal day in Konoha. The sun was shining, birds were chirping, and little kids were hippity-hopping down the path. In fact, everything was normal, except for one thing. A certain blue-eyed ninja wasn't outside, enjoying the beautiful day with his friends, but inside his small apartment, sulking.
Naruto was never exactly popular with his village, and on most days he could handle it. All the horrible teasing, dirty looks and isolation was a part of his everyday life. But today, for some reason, all the weight of it felt like it was on his shoulders. He was too depressed to head of to the academy today. Maybe tomorrow, when all the self pity had evaporated.
He wiped a tear away with his black tank top. Naruto didn't even feel like taking the time to put on his everyday clothes. Hell, he didn't even put on his headband. That's just how low the poor 17-year-old was feeling. It didn't matter that he was a jounin or that he had some good friends to stand by him. It was just one of those days.
Before the blond-haired boy could let out another sigh, he heard a violent rapping on his door.
“Oi, dobe!” It was the Uchiha.
Naruto ignored the pounding on his door (that was threatening to break) and rolled over, covering his ears with a pillow. He didn't feel like being Sasuke's dobe. Especially not today.
“Open the goddamn door, idiot!” Sasuke hollered. “I know you're in there.”
“Go away, teme.” Naruto mumbled.
“That's it!” the raven-haired boy shouted. He kicked down the door with ease.
“Bastard!” the shorter jounin yelled. “Now I have to fix the door!”
“If you had answered it, we wouldn't have that problem, now would we stupid?”
“Can't you take a hint? I don't want you here! Go away!”
Sasuke took offense to that, but decided to mask it with anger. “NO!”
Naruto gave him the best death glare he could, and then put his head back into the tear-soaked pillow.
“What's wrong with you, dobe?” the Uchiha tried to ask it with anger, but it sort of came out as a worried question.
He didn't answer the question for a long minute, then finally he spoke. “Stop calling me dobe,” the blue eyed boy mumbled into his pillow.
All Sasuke had heard was some mopey mumbling. “What did you say, moron?”
“I SAID STOP CALLING ME DOBE!” Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs, tears blurring his vision.
Sasuke's anger deflated. The hurt in Naruto's eyes was so clear that Sasuke himself started to feel hurt. Or maybe he just felt really sorry for his poor friend, even though he didn't exactly know what was wrong.
Naruto went back to sobbing into his pillow. Is it my fault he's feeling like this? Sasuke wondered.
He walked over to the bed where his down-trodden best friend lay, and put a hand on his back in comfort. Naruto continued sobbing.
Sasuke felt like shit. Every once in a while Naruto had some down days, and then he had gone and rubbed salt in his aching wounds.
“I'm sorry, Naruto.” he mumbled.
Naruto's sobs became whimpers.
Sasuke noticed this and decided to continue. “I don't think you're a dobe.”
The shorter jounin looked up at the raven- haired teenager and rubbed his eyes. “Yo..you d...don't..t (sniff) th..think..k I..I'm muh d..ob...be?”
Sasuke couldn't look at the boy. Apologizing wasn't his thing.
“I don't. I actually lo-”
He cut himself off. If Naruto found out his true feelings, then their friendship would be ruined. Sasuke couldn't count the number of nightmares he had about rejection. Naruto's blue eyes looking up at him with disgust, saying he only like women. If Naruto found out that Sasuke loved him, then everything, their friendship, their good times together, their everything could be ruined. And Sasuke just wasn't willing to take that risk.
“Y...you what?” the demon vessel innocently asked, with a little anticipation.
If he and his dobe were truly friends, then Naruto would forgive him for loving him, right? Or maybe if Naruto didn't love Sasuke back, then the Uchiha could finish his “I love you,” with “...as a brother,” or something. It was too late to back out now anyway. It was now or never.
The raven haired boy took in a deep breath, preparing himself for the worst. “I love y-”
Sasuke was cut off again, but this time by his heartthrob's lips. He gasped a little in surprise, but quickly recovered and started kissing him back.
The Uchiha licked the bottom of Naruto's lips, begging for entrance. The blond gladly accepted. As soon as he parted his lips to let his longtime crush in, Sasuke's tongue pounced into his mouth, exploring and enjoying every moment inside him.
Naruto tugged at the taller teen's shirt, and pulled it off. Sasuke did the same to Naruto, and shoved him down onto the bed so he could get on top of his new lover.
Sasuke started licking and nipping Naruto's neck, heading southward, and trying to find the spot that made the boy moan the loudest.
“Sas...uke,” he panted, once the Uchiha had found his sweet spot. Sasuke started sucking and nipping on that part of his neck, until a red mark appeared. All the while, the blond was writhing and groaning in ecstasy.
Once Sasuke was satisfied with what he had done, he moved down to Naruto's chiseled stomach, licking and feeling him. He noticed a large bump in Naruto's pants, and decided to take care of it.
Sasuke continued kissing down Naruto's abs and unzipped his jeans. Naruto gasped when his boner hit the cold air. But it wasn't in the cold air for long...
The Uchiha's tongue started licking the top of Naruto's member. He wiggled and moaned under the sharingan owner.
Sasuke enveloped more of the length in his mouth, and started pumping. The sound of Naruto's moans like music to his ears.
The blond could feel himself begin to release. “Sasuke!” he moaned.
Right as he was about to cum, Sasuke stopped with a grin.
“Why'd you stop, teme?”
Sasuke started rapping on Naruto's head. “C'mon dobe, we're gonna be late?”
Naruto looked at Sasuke like he had three heads. “Wh...what?”
“If you don't come right now, we're gonna be late!”
The blond turned his blue eyes down to his throbbing erection.
“I would have cummed if you hadn't stopped, teme!”
“What the hell are you rambling on about...” Sasuke shouted. “Wake up!”
Naruto woke with a start. He noticed his best friend standing over him, giving him his famous glare.
“Hn. I knew you would still be sleeping, idiot.”
Naruto squinted at his stoic friend. “What are you doing here teme?”
The angry teen crossed his arms and rolled his eyes. “I figured you would sleep in today, since it is Saturday, and we usually don't get assigned missions on Saturdays. So I took the liberty of coming here and waking you up.”
“Oh how kind of you,” Naruto spat. His ears were still ringing from Sasuke's shouting.
“Oi, dobe! You should be thanking me! If I hadn't come, you probably would have slept through the entire day!”
“Would not! And besides, that idiot Kakashi is always late, so it wouldn't matter if we were late or not.”
“Whatever. I'm here, you're awake, so let's get moving!” Sasuke pouted. “So get dressed, stupid!”
“And we're friends.” Naruto mumbled. Just as he was about to get up, he noticed his boner hadn't gone away. With a scared expression on his face, he gathered all his sheets around the groin area.
“Get out of here Sasuke! I need to change!”
“We're both men dobe! There's nothing to hide!”
That's what you think... Naruto thought, blushing.
When Naruto hadn't made any move to start changing, Sasuke just rolled his eyes and walked out of the room, a “whatever” escaping from his lips.
Once the door was closed, the demon vessel sighed in relief. He tried to imagine a world without ramen, and only flavorless rice to eat. That got rid of his arousal.
With another sigh, the 17-year-old rolled out of bed and threw on some jeans. Naruto had long grown out of his orange jumpsuit, and hadn't been able to find a new one. He also put on an orange hoodie over his black tank top, not bothering to zip it up. He grabbed his ninja headband and tied it around his waist, using it as a belt. (1)
“Hurry up, dumbass!”
“I'm coming, I'm coming...”
Naruto walked out into the sun, squinting as he came out.
“So, what kind of a mission is this?” the blond asked while he shoved his hands in his pocket.
“It's an A-Rank. It's probably gonna take around a week or two to complete it.” Sasuke said in a bored voice.
“Hn.” Naruto couldn't handle being around Sasuke right now. This was the third night in a row he'd had a wet dream about him. He stood around ten feet behind him, just to resist the urge to hop on him, and kiss him senseless.
“Why do you care so much baka?”
“'Cause I'd rather be sleeping than being with you, seme!” Of course, Naruto had meant to say teme, but mornings just weren't his smartest time of the day. Well, he had been imagining Sasuke being seme all night long too, but that's beyond the point...
“What'd you say?” Sasuke asked in a voice that (surprisingly) didn't convey anger. In fact, there was a hint of hopefulness in his tone, not that Naruto caught that.
“I...I said teme,” the normally hyperactive teen stuttered.
Sasuke let it drop. “Whatever.”
This was definitely going to be a long week.
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(1) Eh... I don't really like Naruto's jumpsuit, or the way he wears his headband. The outfit I put him in (I think...) makes him look waaaayyy hotter. Haha... :D Here's a link to how I imagine Sasuke and Naruto in this ficcy:
http://i171(dot)photobucket(dot)com/albums/u303/Billy_lover_27/Sasuke%20and%20Naruto/spinni ng(dot)jpg
of course, replace all the (dot)s with actual dots!!!
So I hope you enjoyed Chapter one of my first (published?) Sasunaru fanfiction!
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