Original Stories Fan Fiction / Original Poetry Fan Fiction ❯ OLD vs. NEW ❯ The Darkness That I Feel ( Chapter 1 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: newdkidt
i was kinda having mixed up emotions and this is what i ended up with.
all comments are welcomed

Miscellaneous: Original Stories Fan Fiction / Original Poetry Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Fantasy / Drama / Mystery | Type: Poetry | Uploaded On: 02.10.2008 | Updated On: 02.10.2008 | Pages: 2 | Words: 596 | Visits: 155 | Status: Completed

 
 
Old Poem
 
THE DARKNESS THAT I FEEL
 
There's nobody here the light I once seen has truly slip through my fingers.
 
The darkness has grown cold now that I'm alone
 
So will someone save me......?
 
Please.
 
 
 
 
 
New Poem
 
THE DARKNESS THAT I FEEL
 
Where could I be?
Nobody is here
 
The light I once seen
Has truly disappear
 
The love I once held
Has slip through my fingers
 
The darkness has grown cold
Now that I'm alone
 
This place that I have fallen
Is not what I call home
 
So if you hear my screams
Please don't be scared
 
Just reach out a hand
Get others if you can
 
And please save me
If you can