Pretear Fan Fiction ❯ Himeno and how it really ended . . . . ❯ after the battle ( Chapter 3 )

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In Crispin, Cross of Lead, by Avi, the theme deals with adversity. The book is set in 1377 A.D. in England. Crispin, the main character is a poor child who is looking for freedom and a new life. In order to find a new life, Crispin goes through many troublesome times. In chapter 46, Bear, the man Crispin befriended, is abducted by John Aycliffe and his soldiers.
Desperate to find where Bear was being taken, I raced wildly through
the town, more than once taking the chance to stop and speak to
strangers. “Did some soldiers holding a large red-bearded man go by?”
I asked. (Page 234)
This quote refers to Crispin's difficulty in dealing with strangers. He desperately
wants to find Bear, but first Crispin must overcome his fear of talking to strangers and looking them in the eye when speaking.
The day after my mother died, the priest and I wrapped her body in a
gray shroud and carried her to the village church. Our burden was
not great. In life she had been a small woman with little strength.
Death had made her even less. (Page 1)
This passage is describing the death of Crispin's mother, and how her death affected Crispin's life by forcing him to flee after he was caught outside of his house after hours.
I would give Crispin a five on a scale from one through six (six being the best rating). I liked the storyline for the majority of the book. The religious references were a bit odd. For example,
“These sounds were lanced by the hooting of the Devil's own bird, an owl.”
(Page 58)
I have never heard of an owl being referred to as the “Devil's own bird”. I think of an owl as a majestic, regal animal.
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“Be accepting” was the priest's advice. “Think how our Blessed Christ
was taunted on His cross.” (Page 13)
This passage from Crispin made more sense because it makes reference to the Bible and the hardship of Christ.
In most books there is a conflict. The conflict that arises in Crispin is that Crispin is continuously trying to save his life because he is being hunted by John Aycliffe and Lady Furnival. Crispin doesn't have any family left that he knows of, or who his father is. His mother died when he was thirteen, and his only possession is a cross of lead that his mother passed down to him. Crispin is accused of breaking into Lord Furnival's manor house and stealing money. Even though Crispin didn't do this, John Aycliffe proclaims him a wolf's head (which means that anyone who finds him may kill him if they wish). This label creates a conflict between Crispin and the cities and towns in the vicinity of Stromford. The reward for finding Crispin is twenty shillings. Nobody in the entire kingdom has that amount of money, so they all set out looking for Crispin. Crispin must leave the village of Stromford or else he will be killed. Father Quinel is Crispin's only friend, and is slaughtered just before he shows Crispin who his father is (and how to escape from Stromford). Crispin is now lost on the main road, but meets a man named Bear who takes him in. Crispin becomes Bear's servant. Bear is kind to Crispin, but very firm. This passage shows that Crispin must serve Bear:
I was in such fright I could hardly breathe. Tears were coming hard.
“I …I swear,” I choked out.
“On the sacred name of Jesus”
“On… the sacred name… of Jesus,” I went on.
“That I will be your servant…”
“That I will be your servant…”
“That if I default…”
 
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“If I default…”
The words caught in my throat. It was a dreadful thing he was
making me swear. One could never break such vows.
“Say it,” he cried, his dagger drawing closer.
In fear for my life, I said, “If I default…”
“May the all-seeing God strike me dead where I stand”
“May the all-seeing God strike me dead...” I whispered.
“Where I stand”
“Where I stand”
“Done” he proclaimed. Then he put his dagger aside and
tossed me a piece of bread. (Page 82)
Crispin was devoted to Bear, and as one they traveled to many villages as
well as Lodgecot, and then to Great Wexly. Bear is like a parent to Crispin, and soon all of Crispin's troubles melt away.
“But swear, in Blessed Jesus' name, do not leave my side, or else
your blood will flow like water.”(Page 81)
This is what Bear says when Crispin swears to serve him. This quote uses a simile, because it uses the word “like” to compare blood to water.
As for his face, most striking was a bushy beard of such ruddy
red, it seemed as if the lower part of his face was aflame.
(Page 71)
This metaphor is used when Crispin is studying Bear's facial qualities. The quote compares Bear's ruddy red beard to the smoldering flames of a fire.
Avi creates much suspense in this book. He will leave you at the end of each chapter pondering what is going to happen next.
 
 
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This quote gives an example of suspense.
The moment I did, his free hand shot out, and with a speed
that belied his bulk; he grabbed me by the wrist and held
me with the strength of stone. (Chapter 16 ending)
 
The suspense at the end of each chapter makes you want to go on and read the next chapter, and the chapter following that.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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