Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Losing Grip ❯ Yu Yu Gang goes to the club ( Chapter 2 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

`thinking'
“talking”
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Chapter 2:
 
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“Hey guys” Kayko said. “Hi” they said boredom evident in all their voices. “Hn” was Hiei's greeting. It was then that Botan decided to show up. “Hey guys I heard of this new club The Dancing Demon, wanna go?” she asked. “sure” Kurama answered. Kuwabara who was either deep in though or to bored to talk just nodded his head `yes'. “Ohh I d love to go Botan, Yusuke your coming too right.” Kayko said. “Duhh anythings better than stayin here.” Yusuke said. Kuwabara who seemed to come back to life said “Why don't we invite my Yukina!” at this Hiei growled, but before he could slice the baka's head off Botan said “Great idea I'll go get her, be back in a bit.” she said disappearing through a portal. A half hour later she came back with Yukina. “What took ya so damn long?!” Yusuke snapped. “Sorry me and Yukina had to change the outfits we were wearing.” Botan answered sheepishly. She was wearing a pink halter top with matching pink pants and pink high heels. Her hair was down with pink flower clips holing her hair back and was wearing hoop earrings with pink beads on them. Yukina was wearing an aqua blue spaghetti strap shirt and a light green skirt that ended right above her knees with blue high heals. Her hair was in a tight bun with two strands of hair framing her face and she had blue stud earrings in. Hiei's eyes almost bulged out at her Yukina's outfit. “Umm Botan can you make me a portal so I can go home to change please?” Kayko asked. “Sure Kayko here” Botan answered making a portal for Kayko. Five minutes later Kayko came back through the portal (Botan kept it open for her) wearing a green sundress and green sandals. “Well lets go” said Kurama. “Aren't you guys going to change?” Botan asked. “They all changed before they come to my house and I changed when I got home so we don't need to,” Yusuke said “so lets go already”. The seven teens stated walking to the club. Right. Left. Right. Right. Straight. Left. Left. Left. Left and through an ally way they went. Then about a half hour later they were at The Dancing Demon. The line wasn't very long considering it was a new club. "Wonder why the lines so short" Kuwabara stupidly said. "It is proboby because everyone usually doesn't come out to clubs until about 9 P.M and its only eight thirty" Kurama answered. Fifteen minuts later they were in the club." Ohh look its open mic night I can't wait to hear the singer's voices'.” Kayko said excitedly” Me too from what I heard The Dancing Demon has great singers at open mic night.” Botan chirped
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Review responses 4 ff.net and mm.org for the ppl on e-fiction.org this was just chap 1 was just posted a lil wial b4 I put this chap up.
 
MM.org:
Dark Moon: (does the I'm happy someone actually review dance) thankx 4 the great review^^
Akiku: Thanks for the GREAT review I really didn't think anyone would give me that great of a rating^^
 
FF.net:
Pen Against Sword: thanks for the tip, review, and offer. I know my grammar really sux so I'll deff. E-mail u thanks again .
Sailor Dawn: Thanks for the review and I kno my grammar really sux.
 
Notes from Me:
1-To the ppls on FF.net and MM.org I'm really srry it took me so long to update. In Nov. I went on vacatiopn and ended up w/ Chicken pox from it. And then my comp. Crashed 3 times and I had to recover all my lost files which included this chapter
2- If you already know who you want paired w/ who than tell me in the reviews plz.
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FA: Hiei can you do the disclaimer plz
 
Hiei: hn no
 
FA: (in a very hoarse voice) please my throat is relly sore.
 
Hiei: no
 
Fa: You'll get sweet snow!!!
 
Hiei: fine FA fortunately owns nothing for if she did it would be the end of us all.
 
FA: thankx Hiei
 
Hiei: Hn where's my sweet snow
 
FA: what sweet snow
 
Hiei: The sweet snow you promised me 5 lines up Baka Onna
 
FA: actually nowhere in that line does it state that I promised u sweet snow if you want some sweet snow than go to the store and get some.
 
Hiei: Onna. Give. Me. The. Sweet. Snow. Now.
 
FA: I can't
 
Hiei: (glares) why not?!
 
FA: cuz my asshole classmates/enemy's stole it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think there working w/ the Evil Pink bunnies and their (the Evil Pink bunnies) allies the dust bunnies that live in my basement!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Hiei & the rest of the YYH gang an the IY gang that just walked in: @_@ o.0 ?_? >__<*
 
FA: what?????
 
Hiei: Onna where are ur enemy's at and are the Evil Pink bunnies and the Dust bunnies in ur basement still.
 
FA: (whispers where enemy's are in Hiei's ear) and the Evil Pink bunnies and the Dust bunnies leave alone I'm dealing w/ them.
 
Hiei: fine whatever (disappears)
 
FA: (grins evilly) Muahahahahaha