| "Sight Seeing" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: September 10, 2005 15:04 CDT
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*is all sadlike* You haven't updated your story yet!!! Please update! I last wrote on the 16th! 0_o when you'd just updated! PLEASE!!! ^^;;; Just so you know, I'm not a beggar. I'm new at this. lol
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 16, 2005 14:05 CDT
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>_< Okay that was freaky. I had a dream last night that you updated Sight Seeing and when I checked you had!!! *faints* I have got to stop scaring myself!!! Okay, now onto my review. Very nice. *applauds* I love where your taking it and I love the idea. :) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rhea_Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 04:39 CDT
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Mwhaha, nice manipulation thing going on there between Kay, Hayate and Genma. Will Kay and Genma end up going on a date before getting together with Kakashi?? That'd be interesting! This chapter was much better, although there were a few bits and pieces here and there that were a bit awkward to read, you should probably read through your chapters before posting. Or better yet, get a beta reader! Anyways, i'll be waiting for your next chapter so keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Very good, I don't know what else to say. Where did you come up with the idea for a blind shinobi??? Very original. Original indeed. *nods* Please update, I'll be looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Rhea_Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was an interesting idea with a interesting story, although it all seems a little rushed to get into the story moving when reading it. You'd mightly like to try slowing things down a little, add a few details, ect. But otherwise this is awesome and i look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Oni to Sakura On: July 31, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! I loved it! A very original idea, and a very good one at that. I want to see how it all falls together with Izumo and Kay. Love the name by the way. n__- I did think you could press that nifty enter key a little more often though, lol, otherwise, it was perfectly fabulous! n__n Keep up the good work Master! *Glompz and waves* Ja-matta!
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