| "30 Kisses -- Bulma & Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: LP On: June 18, 2016 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were fun to read and made me smile. I love your style of
writing! These were too cute.
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 18, 2016 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were fun to read and made me smile. I love your style of
writing! These were too cute.
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 18, 2016 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were fun to read and made me smile. I love your style of
writing! These were too cute.
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 18, 2016 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were fun to read and made me smile. I love your style of
writing! These were too cute.
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 18, 2016 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were fun to read and made me smile. I love your style of
writing! These were too cute.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 08:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the story is short it is written really well through present to past etc, it really made sense good work
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 27, 2006 14:10 PST
Comment/Review:
I love these! Great characterization and clever situations. Keep it up! Thanks
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Reviewed By: trynia merin On: December 20, 2005 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you used Yamucha to convince Vegeta why he was staying, not for just Trunk's sake, but also for Bulma's. It was very much in keeping with how the show portrays him. Although I write him as the antagonist sometimes, it's refreshing to see him in the light in which the show portrays him.
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