| "The Spider's Web" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 05:47 CDT
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this is a great story! i cant wait to read more of it and find out what happens. how will sango, miroku, inuyasha, and kagome react when they know that everything is linked to their family heirlooms?
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Title: Greatly enjoyed!!
Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story!!! You go into nice depth and it seems that everything is revised so it makes sense *have read way too many stories that dont explain anything and are usually misspelled and dont make sense..... TT_TT;;;; Oh, and woman in japanese is spelled "Onna" (you forgot an n) Sorry thats been bugging me... Also, why do you spell demon "daemon"? Onegai shimasu, keep writing Inu fanfics!!! ~Tora
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 10:27 CST
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Damn. I thought for a second the wedding was Kagome's and Inuyasha's. ... if only. -wistful sigh- As you can tell, I'm such the avid InuKag fan. Well, another brilliant story and I can't wait for any other ones that might pop up anytime soon. LMAO.
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Title: Evilness
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: October 27, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil!! I wanted it to be Inuyasha and Kagome to get married!! lol. But anyway, awesome story, really great!!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 18:55 CDT
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ahhh that was a really great story...I kinda wished that you would have continued...and that you could have shown a few more moments between Fluffy and Kagura...but all in all...I loved it...you did a great job...hmh...lol...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 15:11 CDT
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Great work! I love it. The connections where even good. I love how you have things going. I look forward to the next chapter and what is next.
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Title: Mind games are fun!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 07, 2005 14:31 CDT
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This story is very enjoyable. I like the inventive yet appropriate variations on the origins of the group. The university setting gives a lot of latitude for different scenarios. Cool! My only real criticism: while I usually enjoy a sprinkling of Japanese words and phrases, I felt that this was overused in certain sections, especially in the scene where Kagome is told of Kikyo's death. I think using foreign phrases is most effective when the reader can understand the meaning by context, so that the flow of ideas is not inhibited. The lexicon at the end of the chapters is helpful, though. Thanks for writing! I'll be looking forward to updates. Merci!
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Reviewed By: 33andobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying your story. I hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES IM YOUR FIRST REVIEWER!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Okay thats enough of that...PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!! I love the way you write, please do try to update really really soon. Your already on my favorits list too, bwahahahaha..ha....ha.....aha, yah okay ill calm down now. JA NE!!!
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