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| "Moon Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, I figured I'd better check out your fanfic cuz you checked out mine, as a thanks. I really like it so far, but in a way, you're also going a bit too fast ^^; Don't hate me! But, anyways, I do like it, it's just a little, I dunno what the word for it is... um... I'll let you know. ^^; I know I'm not being much help but keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: magerm~not logged in On: September 29, 2005 18:49 CDT
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Okay, will you UPDATE??????????????????? I'm waiting... *drums fingers on table* It's a good story so far, but you had me confused for a bit. Try to be a bit more detailed, but not to much.
| Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's so cute how Sasuke is all sweet and kind to her! I don't think it's OOC, he's just showing a side of himself to her that he doesn't let others see which is a nice change. I love your description in the begininng of the chapter, very beautiful too. The idea of sakura blossoms glowing in the moonlight sounds really ethreal (i think that's how it's spelled)! Continue please! I really love this so far! x3
| Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 17:53 CDT
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Kaguya...like from that Inuyasha movie they showed instead of my beloved anime shows? I know it's actually a fairy tale but, I have a guess about the girl. Judging from the title and how you put Kaguya-hime in there, is she theprincess?-or I'm just being too far fetched? Nya. Ja ne! p.s. I'm updating Rock My World sometime this week unless I get sidetracked...>.< Hopefully, I won't!
| Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 23:14 CDT
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It's a good start, I can't wait to figure out who the girl is that he found and what her past is! So, please continue!
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