| "Mythic Descent" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Inch Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. You are an amazing writer and you keep your readers engaged I love your style and you got Vegeta's personality right on the mark Beautiful story cant wait to read more of your work Inch
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Title: :0)
Reviewed By: kittywings On: September 23, 2005 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read a lot of DBZ fanfics and this one is one of my favorites! I wish I could see it on TV! Awesome job and keep up the good work! More Vegeta stories! ;)
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Reviewed By: Ryu the Weredragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it...But...Here's a question...
Does that mean that Gohan won't meet Videl?
Just kidding.
But The REAL Question is...
When he DOES Meet Videl...What will change? How will Pan grow up? I think you should continue CORRECTLY from the series (Yes, I read part of it's sequal from your site...It wasn't as good, I'm afraid) |
Reviewed By: jaqjarjasjat On: January 29, 2002 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best fan fic I've read yet, and I have read quite a few now. Excellent job done here, and I even must say that it would make a great movie. Lots of subtle laughs and plenty of other emotions included. I can even picture it in my mind as I read. A+ job! |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: January 22, 2002 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!
That was GREAT!!! EPIC!!!
There's some real talent here!
Keep writing.
The lore alone keeps you reading just to see whats around the corner in hell. Time warping was a very interesting touch and it was clear and understandable all through the story rather than horribly confusing as one might expect. There are some really great ideas here.
(next time make the epilog a little longer, sometimes thats the best part) |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 20, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is very thrilling story. I like that it has a few tear-jerkers around the ending. Love the ending as well. If your thinking of doing a stroy that occurs after these events, Do something involing Raditz's relationship but still have V&B play a big role in it. Hope u will consider it. |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2002 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a good fic! Could I put this on my site? Just email me at veggietrunks@hotmail.com with the answer please! |
