| ""Trunks Lil Book Of Hentai Short Stories, Volume 1"" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBoyTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 00:36 CDT
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Well I can see that if its a chapter in an ongoing story not 6 stand alone stories based on various anime. And Mr Genius... its spelled Coherent...
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Reviewed By: grissom500 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 18:56 CDT
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Maybe all the bad reveiws are on the first chapter because when I read a book, if the first chapter sucks, it takes ALOT to get me to read the rest of the book. And that's assuming the first chapter is somewhat CHOHERANT. Write that you don't want reviews in your summary if you don't want them.
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Reviewed By: Interdecon On: April 24, 2005 15:55 CDT
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As you can see, there are tons of good reviews for your fics, so why don't you update?
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Title: Authors Comment
Reviewed By: SaiyanBoyTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 07:06 CST
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I dont see why people post after only reading one chapter. Thats like reading 10 pages of a novel and just saying "I didnt like the first 10 pages so the rest must suck just as badly". If you only read a single chapter, please dont comment, wasting my time, your time and the people reading to comments time. Each story may stand on its own but they are all together as a set. I admit the ChiChi/Bulma one was my very first attempt so it is very rough. In my own opinion the Cowboy Bebop and Samurai Pizza Cats ones are by far the better ones to read. -Trunks-
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Reviewed By: Lady Blackhat On: June 06, 2004 23:14 CDT
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Never made it past the first chapter on Bulma & Chi Chi. My thoughts are muddled to say the least. I can't say that I liked what I read.
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, that was one of the best hentai volumn fics i have ever read. WOAH. ** I'm still entranced. ** You HAVE to continue with this. Yu Yu Hakusho,Rurouni Kenshin,Inuyasha,Witch Hunter Robin, etc.... Maybe even Code Lyoko even though i think it's a french film. Has anyone heard of it?
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Reviewed By: blinkrush On: February 08, 2004 17:10 CST
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man, you should see the fanfics that are trying to be as great as yours. This is, single-handedly, the best volumed hentai series ecer written.
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Title: Ideas
Reviewed By: SuperFan=) On: November 13, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OutlawStar: Jim and Aisha Aisha and Suzuka Gene and Melfina Tenchi Muyo: Tenchi and Ryoko Tenchi and Aeka Tenchi and Sasami/Tsunami Tenchi and Washu Tenchi and Kiyone Tenchi and Mihoshi Mihoshi and Kiyone Ryoko and Aeka Washu, Tenchi and Sasami/Tsunami Tenchi and the rest Sailor Moon: Need i say more....
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Reviewed By: AsianGurl On: July 29, 2003 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic you should do more on digimon and cardcaptor and more details mon bulma and chi chi !!Well write more and email me at nguyen4ever2002@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 13:33 CDT
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That bulma chi chi hentai thing was a knewl about time someone did a lemom on them image the face on vegeta if he saw them doing that it would be pricless. |
Reviewed By: ICE On: July 25, 2003 11:10 CDT
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That was funny, i laughed my ass off!Great story! |
Reviewed By: RubySpider On: July 23, 2003 04:12 CDT
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I've only read the Spike/Faye chapter, but WOW, that was really hot! One of the better PWP's I've come across. |
Reviewed By: fgubatan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just like karina. more bulma/chchi!!! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I6: You are such a horny little boy aren't you? I like that. Sex is sex! Who needs all that emotional stuff-
Flame: Hey! Love is what makes it-
I6: Love and Lust go hand and hand. By the way, since no anime is sacred, I demand you finish this digimon one and start another one. Maybe a Magic Knight Rayearth one (if you've watched it or read the manga) and perhaps a Fruits Baskets one. Just one request and-
Flame: NO YAOI FICS!! Please! G&G is alright, but NO YAOI! Especially if the involve MY HIEI!!!
I6: Yours?
Flame: Okay, not LEGALLY Mine but-
I6: Ignore her, great job and UPDATE SOON!!
Flame: *mutters* You horny bastard. .
I6: What!?
Flame: *sweat drops* Nothing! |
Reviewed By: moonchild On: June 19, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the stories really funny |
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