| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 00:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit my eyes are very tired... It's almost three in the morning and I just finished the latest chapter having just started it this afternoon. (I had to take a break to feed my husband and son dinner... how annoying right! *LOL*) I am very impressed with your story telling abilities and I simply am dying to read the next chapter. With that said, I also wanted to comment on all the medical references you make. I am rather curious if you are in the health care field. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and your knowledge of medicinal plant properties and actual surgical/noninvasive procedures is very accurate. When you had Kagome cauderize InuYasha's chest wound, I admit I didn't even think about that... I was thinking of things like steri strips and suture glue (You can use actual super glue in cuts and gashes in an emergency). The plant medicines and such are dead on... practically every prescription out there comes from some sort of plant or fungus. The Poppy plant which is where Morphine comes from kills pain, slows breathing and BP. It is also (and I'm not quite sure of this but during the era was used commonly by soldiers and such) native to the regional area. Anywho, I ramble... I was wondering if there were any other nursies/healthcare workers anime nutts hanging around here. In the end, VERY GOOD STORY!!! InuYasha and Full Metal Alchemist are my two favorites at the moment so I was pretty much glued (much to my husband's dismay) to the laptop ALL day and night. You are a talented writer, you take the time and research your storylines and you have a real concept/love for the characters/anime you write for. I would probably read anything you post... even your grocery list! Hugs Nursie
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Title: plz update
Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 12:43 PDT
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plz update it is getting so intresting
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: niceone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep this going got to know what hapoeneds in the next chapters
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Title: I Love This Story and this Chap!!!!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fantastic, you have got me hooked on to this story! THe way you write this stays true to the characters and unravels a gripping plot at the same time! But please, stop with the cliffies! ahhhhhhhh. Way to go Kagome, mastering the Tetsaiga!(thanks for updating) =D
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: October 03, 2006 06:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly incredible! It's so good it's like watching the actual show. Please update soon! Oh, and the baby should be a boy!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 18:28 PDT
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What about the pup? is it a boy or a girl?~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another magnificent chapter... you had me somewhat worried there when Inuyasha was bleeding alot... I like held my breath until it was over lol... but awsome chap again...laters
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 26, 2006 09:42 PDT
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Excellent chapter. I like how you have incorperated the medicine of today into this story of the past. As I was reading about all of this, I thought about a transfusion, but I didn't think of Myouga. (Kagura's reward was a HOOT, BTW) Once I did I was a little concerned about the possible blood thinning properties of flea spit....but then realized I just needed to shut up and enjoy the chapter. :) Thanks for the update on Sesshoumaru as well - I knew he'd gotten thumped pretty baddly. I wouldn't have wanted to be the one that had to replace each of the shattered bones in his legs. yeouch! Thanks for writing!
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Title: taishorin
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an excellent fic. The development of the characters is pain stakingly detailed. Well done. I was hoping that Sesshoumaru would have been the one to donate blood, it would have given Inuyasha more of his Fathers blood and perhaps more respect from Sesshoumaru. It would have been ironic to hear what Sesshoumaru would have said in his thoughts to know he was actually keeping Inuyasha alive with his own blood! Anyway your story line is fine, keep up the good work! Taishorin
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 02:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I amost cried for Inuyasha. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Too Cool For You On: September 24, 2006 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i cant wait for more lol
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Reviewed By: Life without Love On: September 24, 2006 20:35 PDT
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Great chapter loved it. and i vote for a girl... that is if the votes are still going... you said at 12 on the 24 ut i saw that people are still voting so heres mine.
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Title: it brought a tear to my eye
Reviewed By: h On: September 24, 2006 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best ANYTHING ive have ever read including george rr martin and garth nix, oh and by the way boy boy boy boy
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 11:12 PDT
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Great now i want to read the next chapter but it's not there i'm gunna go cry now.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at home On: September 24, 2006 09:51 PDT
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Vote for a girl
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