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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 01:34 PST
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EH? HOW many reviews *hic* I suppose thats what you get for being so talented ^_^ I have to admit I'm a bit late with this review, but this story is brilliant! I personally think you've kept Inuyasha very NOT OOC, but still allowed him to be well...affectionate etc. Which is good ^_^ You've also brought in pretty mcuh all the main characters and shown their reaction, (Sesshomaru and Kikyo and whatnot lol). ALSO this story is WAY long, which I love ^_^ Update soon. Love Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is great. can't wait to see what happens next please update soon!
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Reviewed By: animeprincess101 On: January 04, 2007 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg... wow i was sooo impressed with your work. Now in my own sick fantasies this is exactly what would happen but getting it to this point would be something beyond my reach. I think your syle is unfaltering and you sence of drama is fantastic. One thing that I can say I enjoy so much is the fact that is seems unending. So many you can clearly see the end in sight and even within some of your chapters I could see maybe an end comming but yet you keep us all guessing. This is the first fanfic I have read over 27 chapters and at first i thought I would never get through it but as it stands I have made it to the most current chapter. This was so good that It only took me 1 week to read all 70 some chapters!!! I am very impressed and very pleased please please please keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 16:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God you have a ton of reviews. Hopefully I'm not repeating too much of what others had said, because this is a serious review. I'm going to give you the good with the bad. First off, I'm impressed by this story. It's well thought out (in parts) and you went through alot of trouble to develop the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha which helps carry the story (more like it's the Atlas of this story). Your depiction of the relationship between the two has great dynamics and it comes alive without feeling forced whatsoever. Also, your development of the demon mating traditions and blood bonding were well developed without being extraneous and overburdening to the plot. Everything had relevance and I like that with the stories I read. You also did alot of research and it showed, (especially when Kagome uses Inuyasha's sword to caterize his wounds to stop the bleeding and the process of blood transfusion). The weddings (the Western and Eastern ones) were also well researched too as well as few other instances I can't recall as of right now. -_-;;; However, though it's obvious to me you put in alot of thought into the story, there were some problems. First, the obvious being the gratitutous spelling errors. It's not a sin to screw up a word here or there, but I noticed you would consistently misspell several words in one chapter that could have been easily remedied with a once-thru re-reading. And with the following this story has, I don't think finding a beta-reader would be much trouble. Also, though you did a great job developing Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, I didn't see it for the other relationships in the story. Miroku/Sango was fairly easy to develop because the relationship was already there in the canon, so it was just a matter to connect the dots, however I was dissappointed you didn't try to go further with it past what was developed in the series. Unfortunately, Sess/Kagura felt very, very rushed, if not outright forced. I'm not saying that you can't pair the two up, but the canon didn't give you much to work with and for the most part I just can't suspend my belief to buy a Sess/Kagura relationship based on what happens in your story. Plotwise, you did some pretty clever things. The battle of East and West was particularly clever especially the climax where Kagome wields the Tessaiga. On the other hand I was dissappointed with the way you dealt with Naraku. It really felt like the whole battle was more of an inconvience and Naraku was kinda brushed aside (I mean come on, the spent 150 episodes battling this guy, he needs some kind of big last hoorah ;)). Finally, I'm not sure if this really is a constructive criticism or an opinion, but I found the deal with the Hot Topic shirts abit too corny (do they even have Hot Topics in Japan? And if they did, wouldn't they feature puns more towards the Japanese language and culture?). I mean for all the great pains you went through with other elements in the story, that just seemed... lazy. It's like looking at part of a painting of the Sistine Chapel and noticing the rest was done with stick figures and crayons. In conclusion, you did a great job, keep up the good work, but remember that story has its flaws as well as your writing style. I see great potential, but it's gonna take a little more care and effort. If you want more input feel free to email me, I would be glad to offer any further assistance.
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Reviewed By: ice_queen On: January 01, 2007 23:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ... it'z an amazong fic that actually has a pot and isn't just fluff ... plus i find the translation for stuff like Kaede-baba really funny
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 17:59 PST
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Absolutely wonderfull as usual!!
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 09:44 PST
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love the updates. i was really happy to see that you had written more. i thought it was funny and cute how kazuki was the only one to get emi to be quiet. loved it!! and i can't wait to read more!! keep up with the writing. i absolutly loved the two new chapters. happy new year! and yay to the chapters!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: December 31, 2006 17:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are awsome! This is, like, the uhmmmmm *counting fingers* 11th time I've read 'Mating Season' I've read all your stories over and over and over and you get the point. But still, You're awsome! I kindly ask you to read my stories; that would be an honor! I wrote them a while back when I was a new fan to InuYasha, and just now got a username to post them on. 'Mating Season' inspired me to continue writing one of my other fanfics, though I haven't posted it up yet. (I'm too lazy to type it right now)Please give me some reveiws and update soon! I can't wait for Koga's reaction . . .
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Title: wow !!
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 20:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it long entertaining and hasn't lost its steam. great writing. well thought out and engaging
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(too lazy to sign back in) On: December 30, 2006 19:35 PST
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Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great couple of chapters. I wonder how the meeting with Kouga and his pack will go?!?! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Title: Fun
Reviewed By: kzara_003 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 15:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fun fic. This is the first time i've ever written a review for any fic. Keep updating please.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 20:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe...poor Koga...but it has been awhile since the last chapter that I had to do a double take but i am so glad that you updated...it was really cute...absolutely adored these chapters...cant wait fot the next ones
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Title: hahahah!
Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 19:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't even read the chapters yet, but I had to comment - you've seen "Night at the Museum" haven't you?
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Reviewed By: brsm On: December 21, 2006 12:12 PST
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this is a wonderful story, I've reakly enjoyed it. Please hurry up and finish another chapter, I can't wait until you update.
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