| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: dogdemon2592 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are fantastic you describe every scene so clearly. i look forward to reading more of your fantastic stories.
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Reviewed By: bernhart1984 On: April 02, 2007 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I did not rate on spelling since I am not the world's greatest speller. I hope that you continue with the story. I look forward to see what happens to the Inu Pack. Well done. I loved it and have lost sleep and gotten behind on homework assignments. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Marukireicho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:15 PDT
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...Wow. I loved this story from beginning to end, and I'm justified in doing so--I've been reading this thing for damn near a week! Well, I was happy to note that you'd left off only a couple days ago, so you haven't abandoned it like a lot of authors tend to do when a story reaches this length. Yay! Ahem...please, update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 18:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story with an amazing plot. I'm awed by the way you have the characters grow but stay true to themselves. Reading this story I can see why it is one of the top viewed stories. Don't ever stop writing and update soon please. From a huge fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: SesshyRiku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:55 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. I have been following it since the begining. Thought you would appreciate it if I pointed out a misspelling so here goes. Parish should be perish. Perish is die. Parish is a small village or town. Just thought you would want to know. Later, Fyrloche. P.S. - This thing will probably have me signed in as SesshyRiku. That's my daughters handle. I was just too lazy to change sign ons.
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 18:43 PDT
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hey i like the new chapter!! it was really good!! i wanna read the next one so bad!! (ch 83 btw) i really hope they survive....cause yeah!! but really good!! i can't wait to hear more about shippo and rin...and everything eles!! can't wait, awesome work!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 17:54 PDT
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oh. my. god!!! im starting to freak out about sango now. its so suspenseful! im very addicted to this story. its a true masterpiece.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 17:52 PDT
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Please please please if you let her die i'm going to cry and you don't want that do you? Come on no more torture let here live please please? ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:45 PDT
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AAARRRRRRRRRGH! Okay. This story is getting more and more intriguing and now I have to wait for another chapter! I have to wait to see if Sango survives! Seriously, you have a gift for pulling us along in this story.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 28, 2007 16:20 PDT
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Great chapter. You have done a good job describing the bloodloss in a c-section. In modern times, there still seems to be blood everywhere! I hope that Kohaku's blood will work and that Sess's sword will not need to be used. Thanks for writing for us!
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 15:27 PDT
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Glad to see an update. Everyone's already said what I was gonna say, so....
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope Sango survives or, if she doesn't, I hope Sesshomaru can revive her! I'm glad her baby survived though. Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was intense...please update as soon as posible...right now I cant wait to hear on Dangos condition and what Sess canhelp with...PLEASE UPDATE...*bows*
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Title: Fran
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent as always. I love it.
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Reviewed By: jamesnelson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never was much of one who liked fanfics but this one I, have to say, is supurb. Some missing words here and there but after hundreds of pages entertainment all is forgiven :) Again I must say a very VERY well written fic, only wish the TV series went this way :( but hey there is always hope!!
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