| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: NightTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 00:48 PDT
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Love your history lesson. It can help me in my own stories. But I can't belive you would do that to Hinata just sad. T_T
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 19:15 PDT
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I find I have to thank you for the history lesson. Fascinating stuff. You really must have done some footwork to dig up some of the more obsure details. Particularly liked how you co-mingled fact with fiction in your timeline. Your attention to detail makes me want to write something a little less, ohhh I don't know... stupid? Anyway, I really like the angle you took with Hinata & (sorry I forgot his name.) You never really see that in fics. I appreciate its originality. Oh, in case you are curious, the symbolism behind stepping on the plate is reminiscent of Peter's denial of Christ. If you ask me, it's kind of a catch-22, since it technically could be considered idolatry. The early Christians still co-opted a lot of the Pagan rights to make it more marketable to the masses at the time. Hey, I may be a drunk, but I still remember some of the crap those nuns beat into my melon. Anyway, wonderful chapter. I think it's really your most complex and well planned one so far. So many interesting tidbits and I learned something. What a great day! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 15:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Poor Hinata, but I guess if you love something, you gotta let it go!! Update soon please and keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. And I do appreciate all the research you've obviously done to make this story as accurate as you can. That type of thing would get very tricky with a story like this, and thank you for doing what you could with it.
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Title: Time after time
Reviewed By: shivonne On: August 03, 2007 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow to see time go by like a blink of an eye. Poor Kagome having to go through M&S death. how sad that as time goes you lose people but also gang some as well there are still the children of the children. I'm glad that they when to the castle it should be much easier. and it's sad to see your mate die but like you said you keep the memory with you always. wow your writing has change so much while writing this story it's amazing. sorry I didn't login in to lazy ladytokyo
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Title: wow...just WOW
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 13:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story you have here. Took me forever to read but I finally made it to the last page you updated ^.^ I really enjoyed this story so far and I will continue to read to the very end that is sadly coming soon. I kind of get lost in all the kids lol I almost decided to make a list of who is who since I forget while I'm reading. Very smooth in flow and it definately stays in one direct path even though you put the spot light on other couples. It stays right on subject and comes together very nicely. I also read your other story 500 years untill tomorrow which I also loved. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 10:20 PDT
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oh my god i love this story! its getting comfusuing trying to rememebr all the children tho but hey that happens with big families in real life why shouldnt it happen with big families in stories. keep up the great work i cant wait until you update again!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 12:57 PDT
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awww...that was sad...but well written...and thanks for letting us know what fdamily the kids cam from discreetly in the sentence with their names or i would have been so confused...cant wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 18:26 PDT
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ooooh, does this mean we'll be seeing the next chapter taking place in...Kagome's home time? Or maybe WW2? hmmm...
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Title: RIP
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't ready for that...of course I'm bummed out *sniff* I'm purly american in that respect, cause I just can't handle it when much loved main characters pass on...So you got a couple of my tears on this chapter, I hope your happy. (by the way, this story is GREATLY improved from the first time I read it)
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 11:25 PDT
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*Sniffles* That was beautiful, man! You handled the passing of the other half of the group beautifully and with dignity. I hate being sad, but hate even more when you read stories that just gloss over that inevitability. Oh, the bit with the itty bitty demon virus/pestilence thing was really cool & very imaginative. I wonder who Minako...Binaka...Beyonce (whatever her name is), will mate. Oh gods, please don't tell me she will wait like 400 years and end up with...HOJO!!! LOL. Anyway, splendid (or should I say splendent) job.
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Reviewed By: Usoppe On: July 25, 2007 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I have stayed with it since the very begining and i hope u do finish this but at the same time i don't want the story to end. also i just want to know how you're going to get through WWI and WWII.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 06:55 PDT
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Sango...*hiccup* Miroku...*hiccup*..That was so SAAD!!!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! It was good, but geez, I didn't think I'd cry this much. God... *sniff* That would be AWFUL to watch everyone around you grow old and die.. "I'm coming, Houshi-sama"... Oh god oh god oh god oh god.... My heart... It was a good chapter though... And i love the name Yoshi... Update soon please.
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Title: Don't stop now!
Reviewed By: halfbreen saiyan goddess On: July 25, 2007 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the best fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. I've liked it that much that I'm reading it a second time too. You've really kept the story flowing and the characters coming too. I just hope when I get around to finishing my own fanfic it'll be as good as yours is!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! It WOULD depressing to watch others around you grow old and die while you stay the same! Update soon please and keep up the beautiful work!! ^_^
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