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Title: With Sharp Pointy Teeth! Ch 8
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The bunny thing's from The Holy Grail, right? Nice touch! Every time I think about the French Taunter, I giggle insanely. I'm getting some rather odd looks as we speak. My favorite line is when the peasant says to Arthur: Some watery tart hands him a scimitar and he thinks he's the bloody king of England Have you seen The Life of Brian? If not, ya gotta! Thanks for the giggles!
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Title: Just finished ch. 3
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 10:52 PDT
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Yep, I do remember this. And I am enjoying it very much. The distraction is very welcomed right now. Good job. I read one of your other shorter fics first, though & loved it. Hmm, who knew that in the cosmic chain of events we call life that pocky tiffs would lead to masturbation, which in turn leads to hot, sweaty sex. I'll have to remember that for future reference. If only all of life's point A's to point C's were so much fun. I think I'm gonna start cramming pocky down my hubby's throat while he's in the middle of watching baseball. Think it'll work?
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 07:51 PDT
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Oh, hey I didn't know this was you. I think I started reading this a long time ago and lost track. I haven't really had time to get into reading anything in a while. You know, pace of life and all that jazz. I am looking forward to a really good distraction though. It's been a crappy week, found out my dog had cancer & kidney failure and had to put him to sleep. It royally sucked. But that's neither here nor there. I'm glad I will have something good to take my mind off it and will review once I get into it. I'm sure it's good if your other story was any indication. If I remember correctly, I did really like what I read of this so far.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Shippou had a great citrous event and came through with high marks for style and sensitivity. chuckles That was well written and definately something that you don't see very often. Shippou and Rin (my personal favorite pairing for Rin) do not get enough attention. I liked the previous chapter, as well. Loved the fight scene because it did make sense. Sesshoumaru has always kept such a tight reign over his emotions that a fear attack could work against him. Nit pickers moment You misspelled a word. Actually, you just used the wrong spelling of the word. Heal should have been heel. Sorry, just thought you would want to know if any errors where found. Anyway, I am awaiting your next chapter. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: "..." On: May 23, 2007 07:26 PDT
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omg i loved it! i knew the two were destined for eachother!!! *squeals* omg im having such a girlie moment....i cnt believe they're finally together.....i cant wait to read what the next chater has for us.....
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Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your story for quite some time now, and let me just say...I LOVE IT!! Shippou and Rin were so cute. It reminded me a lot of my husband and I. We were both virgins, and are our first and only's for eachother. the sweet akwardness was realistic and cute. It really broght back "old times". LOL. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 01:09 PDT
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Loved it...can't wait to see little Shippo's running around!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 00:51 PDT
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The battle scene was absolutely awesome. The way that you wrote the illusion seemed so real and they way that Sesshomaru reacted was very convincing. My nerves were on end just waiting to see how it ended. It just proves that Shippo has grown up...go Shippo!!
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 21:22 PDT
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ohhh ch 88 is so good!! well so is 87, but yea. i'm thrilled that those two got together and this story is amazing!!! i love your writing!! :) but i can't wait for the next ch.!! :) so good!! thanks so much you are a great writter!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re not logged in... On: May 22, 2007 20:11 PDT
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yay! an update! i love this story and i was so happy that it had been updated! glad you didn't skirt the shippou/rin thing either... :-D i can't wait to see the next update!
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Title: CharlyBel
Reviewed By: Li Hudson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 18:11 PDT
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I LOVED the last two chapters. Your authors note at the end of the last chapter was funny and well thought out, and I appreciated you telling us exactly how old they were again. So much time has passed during this saga of yours! I loved the end of this chapter. Just one request... Can you give Shippo another growth spurt so he's the same height as Rin before the story ends? Thanks!:) Great job, as always. I always enjoy this story and your writing in general!
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Title: Awesome two chapters!
Reviewed By: Nessie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 18:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the whole Shippo/Rin thing, I actually think you are the first person on the Interweb who has done such a pairing! And it didn't feel wrong to read, because you have built their relationship so well, it was totally believable. Thank you. Just... thank you. This is one of my favourite fanfics x
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:11 PDT
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oh my god love it but naughty naughty;)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 16:37 PDT
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awwww...that was so romantic...it has been a long time since an update but it was worth it...please update though as I would like to hear about Kagome...and also Sango and Miroku issues...please update soon *bows*
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great couple of chapters!! I'm glad that Rin and Shippo are finally mates!! Where are they going to live now? Kagome's pregnant with twins?!? WOW I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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