| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!! I'm glad we got a chapter about Kagura and Sesshomaru!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 21:25 PDT
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hahaha...that ending line was cute...god it has been a while for updating but thanks for doind it faster than other people...it was so intense...thanks but please continue...onegaishimasu
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Reviewed By: Kay Kay On: June 22, 2007 11:48 PDT
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woweeee!!! so good and btw commenting on the new ch. 91!!! :) i saw it coming, w/ emi and kazuki, so cute though and!! i just can't wait for the rest of the story, well sort of considering your stopping soon....:( oh well the stroy is great, can't wait for more, and new babies, exciting and unexpected for miroku and sango. :) write more soon!:) ranundine
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Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oddly enough, I really am enjoying this. No, it's not the greatest literary gem in the world, and it does fall back on some fanverse staples (mating marks and life extending blood transfusions), but you know what, this is still really fun. Many (but not all)of the multi-chapter IY stories that I consider very well written are also horrifyingly depressing, or at least bittersweet. This is just whee! and I am having a lot of fun reading this. I did notice a few typos here and there, but it wasn't anything glaring. For the most part your spelling and grammar is a welcome relief. Overall, a nice little updeat soap opera-ish thing that I will consider a guilty pleasure. Also, 100 chapters? You're unsane.
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Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story! though the time jump is a little hard to follow, it's a fabu story! AHH, I love it in stories when "history repeats it's self". I always saw Inuyasha and miroku's children falling for eachother. I would have loved to see Miroku's little henti boys chasing Inu's little girls pinching their butts. LOL. Love love love your story!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 11:30 PDT
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WHOOHOO! i loved it! history repeats (i knew it!), inuyasha's getting some teeth yanked, poor puppy, but an awesome chapter. I like the idea of a sequel Jessie Angel, but it's up to the author... BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! umm... updates?
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 10:45 PDT
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Wow... when this story ends, I would love to see a sequel centered on the 'children' of Inuyasha and Kagome, along with Sango's and Miroku's. A very lovely chapter. I guess there is never a dull moment for the gang, right? Very beautiful chappie.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 05:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And history repeats itself. At least Emi doesn't have to deal with a former incarnation! Very well written. And the idea that the reason that Inuyasha had never transformed before being that he had Tetsaiga in his eye was avery original one. Lokking forward to the next chapter. Later.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:08 PDT
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As always a wonderful chapter. I laughed out loud at Kagome wishing she had a holy hand grenade:) I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but when it arrives it will be just that much closer to the end. It is an awesome story and I have enjoyed every minute of it!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I had a feeling those two would get together!! Keep up the amazing work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. I was hoping that Kazuki and Emi would get together! I could see it coming from when they were kids, and I'm so glad I was right. They will make a great couple. And, even better, Kagome and Inuyasha will always have a reminder of Sango and Miroku around. Even though they will lose their best friends, at least they will have Miroku and Sango's daughter....who will not only love their son to pieces but will cherish the memory of their friends (her parents) as much as they will. Talk about a win/win situation. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very good chapter.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:49 PDT
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oh my god!!! i love the new chapter. i knew those two kids would end up together when kagome thought about how much they looked like her and inuyasha. the whole repeat on how to stop his transformation was amazing. i wonder if it gave inuyasha and kagome a new insight into how much that kiss between them had actually been a sign that they were destined to be together. it might be a little weird for kagome, though, because it is her son and the daughter she had for sango and miroku. i guess it is alright if you don not think about it too much. i mean they are kinda blood related. it is still an awesome couple, though. i would keep going with it. i wonder what miroku and sango think of those two fallin for each other. hopefully, they will not have the same problems as inuyasha and kagome did at admitting their feelings for each other. you have done an awesome job so far on this story. i can not wait to see what you decide to do next. keep up the fantastic work and try to update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, that 'tough love' talk of Inuyasha's was adorable. I think that was my favorite part. Very Yashaesque, in an Oscar the Grouch meets Dr. Phil sorta way. Love Kagome's confidence in battle and her snide little attitude toward the creepy crawly. When you originally mentioned the roach youkai to me, I was invisioning that scene from The Mummy, with the beetle invasion, but you topped it. Really nice battle scene. I'm green with envy of your talent in that department. I don't know why, but Sango reminded me of Bruce Willis in Die Hard. They're getting older and still got it, but are reluctant to break it out. The "I'm getting too old for this" was cute. Poor Inuyasha; he's a good papa and feeling all guilty. I just wanna squeeze him. Anyway, awesome chapter, chocked full of entertainment. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved this chapter sooooo much!!! just as kagome, i felt the deja vu and it was kinda....creepy to say the least......but omg i loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!! three thumps up for you!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I repeat. That was a REALLY GREAT chapter!!. I just had to log in and say it again!
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