| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Title: sorry...
Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah sorry its been a while...ive been busy with life and well i kinda fell out of the fanfic loop (i started to read real books...but i know im missing some good stories out there...) well i finally formatted and printed out the rest of the story...here are some numbers for you... The story itself: 630 pages A/N and extras: +21 pages Total number of pages: 651 pages o_O i feel bad for all of the trees that i just killed...but it went to a good cause and i will always have a hard copy of the story... once again good job...it definitely was a surprise at every turn...i cant wait for the other ideas that are swimming around in your head... much love for creative minds, Ariel Himura ^_~
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: May 06, 2009 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. You did a great job of making Inuyasha your own. I hope you will continue to write. :)
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 09:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thou there are some grammar errors at points throughout it, I think it'd be hard to write something better, I don't think anyone of the people who have pointed out the errors could write a 100 chapter book without an error in it, and besides, I think the errors are a testimony as to how you have bettered yourself as an author from the begining of this story to the end, just as this whole story is a testamony to if the fans had it their way, all of your stories would neverend. Oneshot to 100 chapters, that just blows my mind, and shows just how well you can capture an audience, if it weren't for the fact that this is a fan fiction, you could make alot of money off this story, I can't wait until you publish a book, its gonna be amazing, love you splendent, your awesome! PS this is actually the story that got me
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Reviewed By: twist1012 On: February 09, 2009 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well there was a few mistakes. When you wrote " Meet someone knew" the knew part was suppose to be spelled new. It happed through out the story and isn't a really a huge deal,but I wanted you to know. It was a great story and I'm looking foward to read more from you. Twist
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 15:33 PST
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I... I love you... There! I said it! What else can I say. Oh! The story is awesome. The gift that keeps on giving.
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ok so i finally finished reading it and lets just say that was an amazing ride.... i loved the story the beginning was a great hook and i am glad that you continued where you were going to first leave off... I loved how the plot progressed and I think that you did an amazing job with how long this story actually was... it was pretty creative considering you had to fill in 500 years!!!! cannot wait to read more stories!!
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Reviewed By: mamine On: November 08, 2008 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!! IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: PHEW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 05:50 PDT
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WHAT SHOULD I SAY...HMMM...THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER, EVER, EVER READ! CONGRATULATIONS! YOU WORKED HARD FOR IT,AND IT WAS WORTH IT. 500 OUT OF 10
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Title: PHEW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:49 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on the edge in chapter 61. I'm at peace knowing that Inuyasha is safe now. Great writing! i love this story! it's the best o have read until now! o can't wait to read what happens in the next, approximately,40 chapters.
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Title: AWWW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just loved the speeches of inuyasha and kagome!
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Title: The End
Reviewed By: ~Sieg~ On: September 20, 2008 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i just finished the 100 chapter. I Think that the story was great. Their were a few very few grammar and spelling errors. About chapter 90 the story got very boring enough to keep you reading but still boring. I find it neat how you actually took time to make it 500 years with out just jumping that in one chapter. I did like the Rin and Shippo pairing one of a kind if i may say so. Only thing I found as a waste of time was telling what happen to Jaken and Ah-Un and the other misfits. We all knew Jaken was going to follow His lord same with Ah-Un, And who really cares about the rest of the misfits. Over all it was a great story and easy to follow. Keep upp the good work. ~~Sieg
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Title: Summary
Reviewed By: ~Sieg~ On: September 15, 2008 17:15 PDT
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I just made it to chapter 5 and i saw you A/n. I do believe that, So be prepared to laugh, and cry, and teeter at the edge of your seat. There is action and adventure, blood and gore, romance and hentai and WAFF. Follow Inuyasha and Kagome as they experience the joys and hardships of mated life and parenthood over the next five hundred years. I proudly present to you, my masterpiece that is Mating Season. should easily be your summary for the story. So far the story is good at keeping you wanting to read more. I would see why you decided to continue writing. ~~Sieg
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:51 PDT
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Oh, and that blind-fic I owe the two of us! xD
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:43 PDT
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Geez... I'd never gotten around to reading this one of yours since it was so long, but I'm starting now. xP Chapter 19... I have a situation like that, just a bit more complicated. I'm the one who was in love with my friend, then she went and got a boyfriend, after YEARS of it being just us. I'm still heartbroken about it, so I can really understand how Eri feels... Lol, it's more complicated cuz I don't think I'm gay... It was JUST her. Oh, and btw, sorry about the huge delay on our emails! I'll try and get on it soon! >.
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Title: still rereading/catching up
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's plot has been pretty good so far, albeit a little on the Mary Sue side. Chapter fourteen is in desperate need of a revamping though. One thing I've noticed is that you don't use names or character titles very often. You've really used 'he' and 'she' excessively throughout the story. It hasn't become confusing, since you seem to be sticking with the basic, two-person or one-sided conversations (though I'm hoping this "error" is fixed by that time), but it's a little annoying (and impersonal). One of those things that isn't exactly wrong... it just isn't done. But that's about it. Again, my only suggestion is to get a/another beta. Especially for chapter fourteen.
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