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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this new chapter; very interesting. I love how you actually incorporate a history lesson into the entire thing. I don't think I'd have that kind of patience to look up all that stuff, and that's not even including the millions of name translations and stuff you did before hand...Oh, and the Japanese equivalent to "yeah" would be "aa," at least as far as I know. Anyway, can't wait till next chapter. Ja mata ne! ~KilalaMoonRose
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 15:12 PDT
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YAY...it has been a while but I liked the direction that u took on this...it was very interesting...please update though...XD
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Are Sesshomaru and Kagura going to come back into the picture next chapter? Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice long update... seems that everything is coming to an end... kagome will be able to see her family again... wonder how that will come about... and what the reactions will be with the big family tree... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: it's sweet
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and it's sad to know that it's coming to an end. I love that you got Inuyasha and Kagome out of Japan to explore again and the world as well. We are getting an education out of this. tell me should I stop going to class and just read what you have to write? lol I almost expect that they would find vampires in Europe lol. hey why not. I really glad that you thought of putting other creatures in that aren't youkai it make's the world a little bigger. and I'm happy to say that this wasn't a purely hentai fic there are really stories behind it althought we are so over due a lemon eh! it's so sad to know only 5 more chapters until the end. the world truly goes by slowly when your immortal. and Sesshomaru see that he would lose a brother to time. this fic is so sweet and soft I like it. through out this fic you have gone through so many levels of writing skill. I never seen that. you get better with time; how the hell do you do that.It's like reading a different person after several chapter. I say that you take this story and put it on as many sites as you can so that everyone can have the pleasure like the rest of us do. the email is longer than this. it's been awhile since we had a long e-mail chat eh!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 15:35 PDT
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absolutely wonderful! To be honest, I had expected your next chapter to be about Kagome returning to her family in modern Japan, not traveling the past world! Truely wonderful. You know quite a bit. Here's a tidbit about Native American history and legends. It is believed that the Native Americans that lived in New Mexico/Arizona region had winged gods similiar to European dragons. hehe...
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 11:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is WOW! What a magnificent sweeping story! To think it all started from such simple beginnings. You've really gotten a great mix of action and drama into this story. Lots of opportunities for side stories in China too if you are ever inclined. I'm having trouble deciding if I want to see Sess somehow extend Inu & Kag lives to his so the brothers and their mates all go together or see Sess deal with his loss (maybe shed his first tear ever!) Course there's drawbacks to Inu & Kag getting longer lives like seeing all thier current childern possibly die! Anyway...great story, really enjoying it and I'm holding my breath for the next update...really...I am.......better hurry and update...... *what no update yet!!!*...*gasp*...*passes out* ...damn...really thought that might work...LOL
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Title: family tree
Reviewed By: azaroth On: September 04, 2007 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fanfiction. The only thing that bugs me is the family tree. It is hard to keep track of who is who and how demon or human they are. If you were to construct a visual family tree I think it would make it less confusing. Yet again, great fanfiction. Hope my suggestion helps any.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:37 PDT
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I enjoy the souta piece. Anyways, this story is starting to end nicely. You're doing a good job wrapping it up.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:36 PDT
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I enjoy the souta piece. Anyways, this story is starting to end nicely. You're doing a good job wrapping it up.
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Reviewed By: Jay184 On: September 03, 2007 06:27 PDT
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Inuyasha and Kagome in America… I can imagine them running into bigfoot. How intersting that would be…
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what happens next... will it be ending soon... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 05:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grins I love this story. I both love and hate the fact that it is coming to an end soon. shrugs Oh well, that is the life of a good story, isn't it? The desire to see it continue coupled with the desire to see a satisfying conclusion. American youkai? I've thought of them before in passing but can you really imagine all the unique types of youkai that could be? grins in sudden inspiration I'm from the south and I suddenly thought of an opossum youkai. (or possum as it is more commonly known) That would be totally unique to America as would a bobcat youkai. And can you imagine a moose youkai? Move over Bullwinkle! Not to mention polar bear or Kodiac grizzly youkai. The possibilities are endless and that's just in North America! Enough of my rambleing. I'm quite sure that you don't need any help from me in writing the conclusion to this wonderful story. I look forward to the next chapter. Until then.
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Title: Any battles?
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 18:09 PDT
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10 out of 10 as always. I'm wondering what role if any ww2 will play in there lives. Will there be any more demonic battles or are them over?
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 17:10 PDT
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Wonderful chapter. I love your story!!! Keep up the terrific work. BRAVO.
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