| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Title: Brandospands
Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh myyy gooddd... This story wass sooooo awesome!! I was in my only little world while I was reading it because it was sooo good and I just got sucked in! I cant believe how wonderful this story was and im glad you made the time to write this for all of us fans :D. Im so glad you didnt stop at just 5 chapters! Thank you for all your hard work! I cant wait to read the sequels and all of your other fanfics and just wow. I dont know what to say thats how good it was lol. I read your whole story straight for like 3 or 4 days thats all I did was read this story cause I just wanted to know what was gonna happen next and it was amazing. I was so sad that it ended but not all stories go on forever lol. It would be so awesome if they made this story into a movie or it got published or anything omg I lovveed it! I just cant believe how awesome it was lol. I just want you to know even if some people didnt post reviews on here they probably still loved it I just wish every single person who read this would give you credit and give you your props. Well I just wanted you to know you made my whole day when I read this and I still think about it and dont even look at the show the same anymore lol cause Im like come on inuyasha go talk to kagome lol but I know he doesnt but still. JUSST THANK YOU SOO MUCH!! I cant wait to read all your other stories :D -Brandy
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god! I cannot believe you COMPLETED this story. *faints from shock* I had lost hope a while ago, removing it from my fav list (Spring cleaning), when something told me to go the main IY page. I am so glad I did! *gives you a cookie* I WILL have to reread the story, but if I remember correctly I loved this fic when it first came out. You even included a family tree?! O_o *bows* Expect a shit load of positive reviews in the near future.
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Reviewed By: inunut On: June 29, 2008 12:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And all because of pocky..... This was an amazing story to read and I loved every bit of it! (though the family tree did take a while for my head to get around!)
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Title: Chapter 4 rewrite
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 15:06 PDT
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This is a lot, lot more solid. I like the interplay between Kirara and Shippou and M/K...I like the extra depth you managed to put into both the rationale and reactions. Nice.
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Title: Ah coincidence!
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 12:53 PDT
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I was once again rereading this story...started while waiting for the manga to come out day before, and had gotten up to chapter 38, and look what I found! You'd revised the begining! Since the opening is still fresh in mind (just reread the first chapter), I can honestly say you have managed to make some of the things that were a bit vague in the description (InuYasha's position when Kagome catches him, for instance) a lot easier to visualize. And I think you made it a lot clearer how Kagome actually was feeling about Inu when all this started - if you'd only read the first chapter before, it would have been possible to believe she was being more teenager curious rather than already wanting him...I think it's clearer now that she is very interested, and that hearing him call her name was certainly stirring something in her...Good going! Now to read the rest of the updates! - Knittingknots
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 19:55 PDT
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Ha! I read this when it was little more than a one-shot, and I loved it. Coming back to read the rest of it, I've discovered that I still love it. Great job!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 10:13 PDT
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this was a great story! although i'm glad i found it after it was completed and didnt have to wait to find out what happened. it took me a day or two to finish it, but it was worth staying up until 6am to read.
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Title: wow it's the end
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 13:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow It's hard to think that it's over. I've been following and reviewing this story for god what 2 3 years. Not to mention all your other works. I'm so excited and sad at the sametime it's like saying goodbye to an old friend. I would get so excited when you update and I really enjoyed your e-mails. And just getting to know you. Watching how your writing just change into something else. It's like not even the same author wrote the begainning chapters at all. I have never seen that and it was a treat in doing so. In the prossess I got my boyfriend and kids into it. I had to give the edit version casue well they are only 12 but thats ok. Mating season just took off biy I tell you. lol look at me this almost sound like a goodbye letter or something. I really enjoyed that last chapter a great deal just wanting to know how time treated them and the reunion with kagome family was wonderful. on man and all the charactor added I don't think I could have kept them together like you did. thanks for the family tree oh and the best Fighting scenes and lemon between Shippo and Rin I don't think I will be reading anybody else anytime soon. and for explaining in one of the chapters of why Sesshomaru has posion. I think I'm going to end this before it gets too goveling, But I can't wait for your Updates in the future. I'll be talking to ya ok. Shivonne
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Reviewed By: Pete91888 On: May 26, 2008 19:14 PDT
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Just want to say good job great ending. I started reading your story when you first posted since then I have been keeping tabs on the story. Don't get me wrong it was really good however when you started adding children a relatives wich are obviosly to be expected in a 500 year old finite relationship I backed away from the story a bit. Also after two years time I sort of strayed away from the IY fandom and went to Naruto. IY was interresting at first but come on they need to close the story some time. Anyway great story and even though I strayed away from IY your story was so good I had to read the ending. Thanks for the story pgadoury@tds.net
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't belive you actually made it to the 100th chapter. I thought maybe we lost for a bit there because you took so long, but here we are! You did a great job with the story and made the chapters nice and long which is very fulfilling for readers. I am so happy that you made a family tree. I was getting lost a lot with all of the different names of offspring and such. I could only remember a couple. It helps so much now that you made that. Thanks! In regards to the spin offs that you may be writing; I would love to see more Kenta and Aki, but I know they've had a lot of story time. I just thoroughly enjoyed that side story so much. Kenta's charcter is just so AWESOME. You probably won't do it, but that's okay. Anyways, great job and I look forward to future stories. :)
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Reviewed By: General Review On: May 25, 2008 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S. Nice effort on the family tree. I cant even remember all the characters in the reunion let alone most of the ones in the story.
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Reviewed By: General Review On: May 25, 2008 23:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. It's me again. The people here were buging me about writing a review for ya so thought i'ld finally get off my ass and do it. So...it's finally over. Wow. I loved it personally and so has everyone else. I have gone threw 4 printers just to get one copy of this entire story, i have it bound, laminated, and have had a cover put on it for those here who want to read it but cant get internet. I have gotten outstanding reviews from everyone here and all that could read your other stories and loved em. They named a few tites but i'm writing this at half past midnight and i'm srry to say i've 4gotton them. you are among the best authors i have read from and i loved this story. thank u for taking your time to write this. Tell next time i review.
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Reviewed By: General Review On: May 25, 2008 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. It's me again. The people here were buging me about writing a review for ya so thought i'ld finally get off my ass and do it. So...it's finally over. Wow. I loved it personally and so has everyone else. I have gone threw 4 printers just to get one copy of this entire story, i have it bound, laminated, and have had a cover put on it for those here who want to read it but cant get internet. I have gotten outstanding reviews from everyone here and all that could read your other stories and loved em. They named a few tites but i'm writing this at half past midnight and i'm srry to say i've 4gotton them. you are among the best authors i have read from and i loved this story. thank u for taking your time to write this. Tell next time i review.
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Reviewed By: kyuubinokitsune9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 13:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled across this story shortly after it was first posted back in 2006. At the time, I honestly thought that it wouldn't go half this far, or be half as good as it is. I am happy to say that my opinion at the time has been proven completely wrong. This story has been a faithful companion throughout these past years, and it is one of the best stories that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The story you have created here, is equal to few stories (in my opinion). Many stories never get past the first few chapters, with authors either not having the willingness to complete the work required, or the imagination to continue on. You have succeeded in that. And in doing so, your story has joined only one other story in my personal archives (The other being 'The Lucky Ones' by Terri Botta). Until the day I die, this story will be one that I will continue to read again and again. On a final note, I would like to thank you for all the time and effort that you have put into this story. And to wish you good luck in all your future endeavors and journeys, where ever they may take you. Farewell for now. Keep up the good work. And I hope we meet again. Sincerely, Ginyuki Kitsune
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on finishing this behemoth (and I mean that in a good way). It was a great read. I remember when I first found this story I was amazed at the length then. Twenty chapters later I am even more amazed. You showed great skill in keeping everyone straight especially keeping who was descended from whom at to what degree. As far as I can tell or remember you didn't forget a character or lose one in the middle. Hats off for the great effort and achievement. I can definitely understand the need you have for taking a break from long stories. I am looking forward to whatever comes next from you.
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