| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 18:31 CDT
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! I'm going to cry! That was SO well written! Vegeta rocked totally and Goku, can we say tear jerker? Awesome job and I am going to be on the look out for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh wow, talk about a tear-jerker. You're such an amazing writer to be able to make me cry. I've been crying throughout your whole fic. First at Vegeta's traumatic past, then his depression and angst, then everything going on between Goku and him, and now Goku's grief. I really love your fic. So very heartfelt. I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Keep up the awesome work. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SilverSun On: April 20, 2002 18:28 CDT
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Ahhhhh!!!!! How COULD YOU?!? What kind of ,sicktwisted mind leaves people on a cliffhanger such as this?! How will I survive? Tell me. Tell me! Oh no.. When is the next chapter? Is it soon? You wouldn't let Goten DIE, would you? Would you? Hello? How am I going to live till then? Please hurry with the next chapter and get it posted as soon as you get the chance... |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in utter awe, you write this so well, the termoil in Vejita's mind, it's so captivating! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 19:48 CDT
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dammit!!! That's it??? More@!!! Please!! PLEASE!!!!! it's taken me three days between other things to read this and it's just spectacular! you can't end it there!!! you just cant!! Please? I love it, please say there's more!! and post soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Zorella On: April 14, 2002 06:40 CDT
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I love this fic! I'm not usually into the Goku/veg stories, but this one's different. I think it's because of the way that you've written it to involve the reader. I started reading it at like 10pm. I should of found it earlier, coz i didn't go to bed 'till 3am. It's been a long time since I've been this hooked on a story. It must be my lucky month, coz i've hooked on four at once! This one, "Stupid Moneky"; "Rhyme and reason" and "Two sides to a story" It's unbelieveable, ususally I only find a story I like every six months! Agh..Brain over loading..
there's only on boo boo u made; if bulma as killed in a place crash, then technically she could of been brought back, since it wasn't a natural death, it was an acident. But then again, i couldn't care less if she killed herself by stapling herself to the wall.
Overall, I love this fic, can't wait for more, er...when is there more comming???? |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 00:46 CDT
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OMG!! Gohan saw them?! I just had this distinct feeling the whole time that someone was watching, that someone would see. It was getting so good! Man, I cannot wait until the next chapter! ^__^ Please comeout with it soon. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2002 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all I can say about this story. Hmmm makes you really wonder if that really didn't happen in the sireis when vegeta was younger anywas. love this story very much. Very well writen |
Reviewed By: Kiyoko-Kiyone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2002 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I figure...after reading up to chapter 13 I should review this fanfiction...eh? ^_^''
Style of Writing: 9; I gave you a nine because I really like how you write...very discriptive...distription is good ^_^ I mean...if one was to just write without discription what a boring world we'd live in...
Spelling and Grammar: 8; Well...the reason I gave an eight was because I don't like when people use japanese in their stories ^_^''' Don't get me wrong, I do know what all the words mean...I just don't use anything above 'baka'. ...It's no big deal really...I guess it's a pet peeve of mine.
Originality/Creativity: 9; You have no idea how many Kakarotto/Vegita fanfictions I have read...and by far, yours has to be my favorite. ^_^ and they're in character...which is good...what can I say...I like it ^_^
Enjoyment Factor: 10; as I said before...I like it ^_^
Overall Rating: 8; I gave it an eight...because, well its actually a very odd reason...but anyway...I seem to like Vegita and Kakarotto together...yet, I absolutely HATE Kakarotto...I love Vegita though...does that make any sense?
Well...that shall thus continue my review, I'd enjoy to read the rest of it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Beth On: April 11, 2002 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is great and very cohesive. You use a lot of subtly and don't spell things out, meaning that you assume we (the readers) actually have a brain. Thanks! I notice like one or two grammar or spelling errors per chapter, and that is pretty low! You do a good job keeping it low, perhaps running a chapter underneath the nose of a friend or two (who knows grammar) before posting would work. I like the angst factor in your fic. I also have been enjoying that there is no hobophobia (yet) in your fic! Goku isn't going "why am I feeling this way? this doesn't happen between guys!" and Vegeta isn't being close minded about the subject. He's just scared sh*tless (as well he should be). This definitely brings to light the suffering Vegeta would go through if it was more about the rape he suffered and less about the killings (though that is a factor too). All in all a great story-in-the-making. But, one thing is bothering me. In chapter 12 Vegeta gets blood on his leather jacket so Goku cleans it and everything, right? And then Vegeta puts on sweatpants that he ends up wearing when he runs out the next morning, thereby leaving his jacket at Goku's house. How come the jacket shows up again in chapter 13, magically in Vegeta's possesion again, so he can wear it to the party? Does he have two jackets? Just curious. Please, keep up the good work, you are a very talented writer. If you would like to email me my email is: pixie_love_2000@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2002 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooo! CLIF HANGER! oh my god, you have so got 2 get chap 14 up, I can't believe Gohan found out! this story totally KICKS ASS! |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2002 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, chapter 12 was great, I wonder what s going to happen.. Get it out as soon as you can. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Picture this:
You get home and feel a bit down, you look to the internet. Mediaminer. Possibly your favourite site. You see 'shadows of the past' it's the AMAZING piece of work you have been hooked on ever scince it appeared. UPDATED! You say 'yes' and click onto it. Then you get taken to a deep, angst filled BRILLIANT piece of writing. I LOVE THIS FIC! The art work is really great 2! The story is just SOOOOO real man! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 18:27 CST
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-claps- Another brillant job well done! ^^ This story is awesome. You have a truely brillant writing style and I love reading your work! Until the next time! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2002 20:26 CST
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Hmm, interesting...Poor Goku, in a way Poor Vejita...i don't know, very happy to see the update, can't wait for the next bit! |
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