| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Raye On: June 25, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The world lost a great writer when the world lost you, somehow I think you know. Every one loved you everyone still does... I read your story and thought it was the end because it had taken so long for an update, then I read the reviews and I found out what went wrong... I know it sounds stupid... but the ending just seems right somehow... goten will survive, and everything... fits. It fits.
It fits in with you.
All the ends ARENT tied up, theres alot the reader has to think about. Maybe the couple of our dreams lives on forever in bittersweet seperation, maybe they find each other... but just acknowledgement... just the Idea, just the KNOWING that they love each other... its perfect.
Life doesnt always end happily ever after, in reality it never does, as your life well showed... Its more like happily ever after until the next sequel, or happily ever after until the next page...because life is about the journey... about the adventure... not about the end result, because the end will always mean death, even for you. This story... embodies that... that is the essense... it is a piece of raw life, and within it you live on. You are just as much a part of this story as goku or vegeta or goten or trunks... You LIVE ON in your writing, your perfect, touching bittersweet writing that made us all consider life and love and hatred and death... even within your death... you make it real... you bring it to life... because... grreat characters... great people... people who leave behind such excellent legacies... great stories...
never die.
Love to you in heaven and all of us who you touched...
-Raye- |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: March 02, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Alithiel,
Wow... it's kind of amazing how many people still ask you to update Shadows of the Past because they don't read these lower "reviews".
I think I speak for everyone who's read your stories, looked at ur artwork, and especially those who knew you personally, friend or family, that you will be missed for quite some time.
And I should've posted this a long time ago. I could continually beat myself up for not ever posting a review here earlier.
You were very talented, very, VERY much so, and seemed to have multiple oppurtunites and doors opening in your life. It's horrible that you were taken from this world when everything was going so well for you.
My sympathies go out to your friends and family. Even if they don't have the internet in Heaven and you never see this, I just wanted to let you know you were a great role model for me and won't be forgotten.
Rest in peace, Erin.
~Niki |
Reviewed By: Ladyflo On: February 24, 2003 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sorry for the last comment. i'm so sorry. But once again this is a great work of fiction |
Reviewed By: LadyFlo On: February 24, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best dragonball Z fanfiction I have read for ages. It has me back to being obsessed again Dammit. Must let it go. Just get chapter 17 up...please (gasp). |
Reviewed By: Japhia On: February 24, 2003 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sorry, i'm french and my english is very bad)
This story....... is simply wonderful....
but now I have seen the messages and I understand that will never have a continuation....
That's not fair for Alithiel... I'm terribly sad...
Thanks for this story that was a real great pleasure. |
Reviewed By: Bohemian-goth [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Alithiel, i know you can't read this now, and God knows i wish it weren't so....It has taken me months to comment because i kept hoping it was a bad dream, but it wasn't and isn't. I was one of your biggest fans (i think you know)and i was previously called chatcat. It breaks my heart to see this story unfinished and it pains me to know that you're family are in so much grief. To me, you were the most inspiring, most wonderful artist and author on mediaminer...i can't beleive you're gone. Somedays i think "Lets go see if Alithiel has posted any new..." then i remember...and i feel like crying. We will all miss you. R.I.P and Godbless you and your family.
-Yours adoring always, Hannah. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 04:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I just heard that this world has been deprived of your wonderful life. I never wanted to have to ever write what I am now... life is not fair to so many of us. I wish it were not true...
Alithel, you changed my world. I can't thank you enough for that. Everyone will miss you so much.
Now and forever, one of your many faithful readers,
Zorella. |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Farewell, Alithiel. You and your beautiful works will be missed greatly. My heart sank when I heard you'd passed on. I'm sure you're making Heaven a brighter place with your presence. |
Reviewed By: Just Another Saiyan Wannabe On: January 14, 2003 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, please finish this soon. My soul will be awash in agony until you do. And it will have a happy ending, right? Please say that it will! |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: January 05, 2003 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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OH WOW!! I know you must get that alot, but your writing is...AWSOME! Your words just flow together! It is so amazing! Wow..When is Ch. 17 going to be up? ^.^' I was so upset at Ch. 16. It was a total cliff-hanger!lol well I'll be off! |
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm so shocked to learn about this! No one deserves such a horrible fate, especially such a brilliant, talented, and kind young woman as her. She was my ultimate inspiration and idol. That's why as corny as it may seem I'm giving her all 10's, because no one in this universe deserves it more. Alithiel/ Erin will be surely missed by all. May you and your siblings rest in peace and God give strength to her family to cope through these difficult times. |
Reviewed By: gundam200x [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 08:22 CST
Comment/Review:
My heart and prayers go out to her family, it is so terribly sad when an accident like this happens, they were all so young...i just know they are smiling down on us right now, Godbless Erin and her brother and sister. |
Reviewed By: Diny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry about my review from yesterday, I didn't know. I didn't know her personaly, but her FF and her pictures are still an example for me. I will not forget Alithiel or Erin. With love and admiration, Diny. |
Reviewed By: Princess Emeraude On: January 03, 2003 23:32 CST
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When you read someone's fan fiction and fan art..you are looking at a part of them. I feel like I knew her kinda...it makes me feel so sad. Too young.....*sniff sniff* She will be missed. |
Reviewed By: saiyansho On: January 03, 2003 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
If any friend or family member of Alithiel reads this, please know that there are many of us out here who admired her greatly for her writing and drawing talent. Dor example, I will be forever thankful for "Shadows of the Past", as it has moved me greatly and helped deepen my own interest in writing. Alithiel - many
thanks and God bless you and your brother and sister. |
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