| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 08:40 CDT
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thnkx Alithiel for telling us what's happening! There's nothing worse than being left in the dark @o@.....the blackness! noooo!!!!!
Also, I'm putting this up on my site www.geocities.com/darkstar276, ah, no buts now. 'tis a good story and I am only placing good stories. Ah, just read it for the third time and it still brings a tear to my eye..... |
Reviewed By: Alithiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 17:15 CDT
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Well, 'tis me, Alithiel, obviously. I'm just writing to thank everyone for their enthusiasm and interest, and to let them know that no, that is NOT the end of the fic. I've just been busy with a bunch of graduations, including my own and my brother's. And my job, and college, and other things. I HAVE started the 16th chapter, but I don't want to make any promises on when I'll finish it. Hopefully soon, but I just don't want people accusing me of lying, LOL. After that, all that's left is chapter 17 and an epilogue. Thanks to everyone again!
Alithiel |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do you mean he's not needed!? Of course he's needed! He's one of the most important characters in the whole damn show next to Goku! I beg you, don't leave it hanging there please. |
Reviewed By: gundam200x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* This is the best fic I have ever read!!!! You convey emotions very well, Veijita's despair, and Goku's love and confusion. Its great!!
I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 03:27 CDT
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'Bout time for an update don't cha think? |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2002 06:12 CDT
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Still going stir crazy............. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 06:30 CDT
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going crazy...must...know..what..happens...now....
ack....
Zorella |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sobs- That was sooo sad! Poor Vegeta. I'm so glad Goten is better though and that scene with Pan and Vegeta was adorable! Uncle Vegeta, -lol- Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2002 07:11 CDT
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oh wow, excellent chapter! i'm very glad goten is better. but poor vegeta, though. he totally perceives himself wrongly. of course he is needed! i hope he realises that soon or has someone tell him. man! he's been through so much. i wish things could get easier for him. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2002 06:42 CDT
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Yay! Goten is better! I like the favourite neice bit, very sweet. Poor Veggie, he must understand he is needed! HE IS I TELL YOU! O, the duaghter bit is sad, Vegeta will never know Bra :(
That wasn't the end was it? |
Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2002 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy Goten is well again, but that was really sad (for Vegeta that is). He IS needed, by Goku... and Pan to a lesser degree. Speaking of whom, I forgot what happened to Bulma. I was reminded of her and Bra when Vegeta wondered what it would be like to have a daughter. Gonna have to go back and reread... :D
Anyway, thank you so much for writing more!! *glompies author* You're really really good! That part couldn't have been more perfect! :D |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: karena On: April 27, 2002 21:42 CDT
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i have been reading this fic on the net, at various sites, and am glad that you're posting it here. it feels like it's been almost a year since i found this wonderful story. i certainly hope it has a happy ending for everyone, especially vegeta. it seems he deserves some. |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 21:17 CDT
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*Screams happily* GOTEN IS okay! *cries* but now what's gonna happen? i know Goku will notice Vejita's gone, so now what??????? |
Reviewed By: Edward On: April 23, 2002 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry that I'm not a frequent reviewer, as I can't get to the site from my school computers- it's blocked and I can't get to it that often.
This was-i just... Oh my God... I can't believe that this is so... you're really, really talented. I think that this could be your shot at big time. If you can write like this for your own sake and for the sake of your reviewers, just think about how well you could write for a publisher. Have you ever heard of a place called fanfiction.net? It's the place for fanfiction, and I think had you posted it there, it would have many, many reviews. This is the best piece of written work I've read in a very, very long time. You capture the emotions and attitudes of the characters perfectly, and leave us on the edge of our seats, biting our nails in impatience as we stare dimly at our computers waiting for you to update. You're an incredible writer, and I simply can't WAIT for the next installment. I rated you above very truthfully- this is a perfect paper. For lack of better words, this is AWESOME!!!
Do you do mailing lists/ If so I'd really like to know when ou udae. My e- mail is bluedreamer31987@wmconnect.com
Thanks!
Ed |
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