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Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 06:34 CDT
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Hey, it's been a little over a year since you've updated. I sincerely hope you finish this one!
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Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 17:58 CDT
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...okay, WTF happened to the rest of my review? Media Miner, you slay me. Hmm, what did I say? That I'm also a big innocent-first-love Rin/Kohaku fan :D and that your dynamic, between both Inuyasha & Kagome and Miroku & Sango is really great, that "punch in the gut" that all good storytellers can achieve, and seemingly so effortlessly. There were jarring bits (the constant referral to Kagome as Sango's sister or Shippo's mother come to mind), but nothing that drew me out of it completely. I do hope you'll find time to continue this piece soon, because so many questions lay unanswered: who was Kagome dreaming about in chapter four? What is Kikyo's role in all this? How will they both react when Inuyasha presents his formal suit and/or blood bonding ritual? (I can picture that being an intimate scene, LOL!)
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Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 17:54 CDT
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Ah, this is just what I needed today, methinks :) I'm glad I had a chance to "ruin" your hit/review count, LOL :) This is really lovely! You write Inuyasha so well. I really enjoyed his interlude in the second chapter, when he was cutting down the trees to vent his frustration. Another passage I enjoyed - keeping an eye on your latest fic - was the scene between Kikyo and Sango in chapter three. It was interesting to see some of Kikyo's thoughts, about Inuyasha, about Kagome, about her own place in the world now that she's actually alive again. Your character interactions - well, I
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo wow i love this ^__^
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going very well so far. I like how you have captured Kagome's feeling of lose becouse of losing the family.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay lovvee thhis story so far! The beginning was kinda werid for me but then it kinda came together in my mind. It is very original and I lovvee it! keep up the great work I cant wait to read a new chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: robinLuvsInu On: August 15, 2008 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more! post another chappie soon plz
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This, along with Pack Law, are very good fanfics!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 14:51 CDT
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i appreciate your devotion to this story, and i'm overjoyed that you plan to finish it! i love the confused emotions that thae characters are experiencing. it just seems so true. i feel comfortable with you mixing terminology. i hadn't even noticed it until you pointed it out, so i don't think it's a problem. i will be anxiously awaiting your updates, whenever you find the inspiration to write.
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: August 14, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah an update! luv the story and i can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:56 CDT
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thank you for the update, i love both this story and pack law. please keep up the good work in both of them
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Reviewed By: pewterwings On: August 14, 2008 12:13 CDT
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I am very glad to see you have decided to continue this story. Makes me warm and fuzzy feeling.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another interesting story. Love the angst. Appreciated the excitement of the undead miko regaining life and understood her actions. Should be interesting to see how Kagome handles things when she wakes up.
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Reviewed By: jennnna On: August 13, 2008 22:11 CDT
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too lazy to fill in ut i give everything a 10 =D i loveee it and cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 20:20 CDT
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Glad to see you back. Can't wait for more!
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