| "The Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome 34522 On: August 16, 2009 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the sorty cant wath to redy mouer of it, keep up thee good work
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of all, I like the stories concept. But, I have a question... Is your first language English? The words that are kinda messed up make the story a little hard to readand understand I also think that you should add more details. Like in the first couple of chapters you skipped allot, and in conversations the reader has no idea on what the person who is speaking is doing...But after you get passed all of that, The concept is really good, you should just edit more, or have some one do it for you! Good luck, and please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is said in love. Your imagination is wonderful. I can see where this story has potential. Right now it is a bit jumpy only because grammar and spelling is making communication difficult. But all in all, a great imagination. Please do not be discourage, but continue your story. I think I will enjoy it. Peace!
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Reviewed By: inuchick103 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
well the story is nice overall can't wait to see what happens next^_^
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Reviewed By: auntie-kiki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 16:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not sure your first language is English. Besides the grammatical errors you have, its a good story line :) Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a cool story. good job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mysterious_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am not a real good reviewer but heck wit it. i liked the story. i want the rest to be updated soon.
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Reviewed By: Kira Delano [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute and unusual. Spelling isn't that good, but thats ok, i have mananged to get through it. chapters are really short. I don't really like that but i don't like really long was either. But don't misunderstand me when i say that your story is original and very good in a cute weird sort of way.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it please continue soon. the only complant i have is that it is short
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Title: The Curse
Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please add more. ^_^*
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