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Reviewed By: burner the echidna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:41 CDT
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Another excellent chapter keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fan fic hope to read more.
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Title: Add me to your fan list for this fic
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this story from chapter 1 a few days ago, and I've already consumed everything you've written so far. I would love to see more of the story, I love the idea of the mind-link and the fun that could come from it. The story is interesting and unique. My only negative comment would be your puncuation, specificaly commas, but the mistakes are minor and easily ignorable. Please update again soon, Thanks!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. I read about your want of reviews so I thought I'd add my two cents to help your motivation for this story. The plot is amazing and your writing style is very good, if not a bit lacking in the commas department. You should definitely continue writing this story and I look forward to your next installment. I'd also be happy to help should the need ever arise so my e-mail is platinumsabr@hotmail.com. Your story is incredible and I compliment you on the wonderful idea! Good job and I hope you don't let the lack of reviews bother you too much.
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going with this story, I really like this story and think you should keep going with it. update soon,
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Reviewed By: R0ad H0g [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 wow, that was really good.
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Reviewed By: Leviathan_beserker On: April 05, 2007 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all the fic was good. The story behind the fic is good and the way you wrote it is very creative. However you should try and throw in an angel battle into the next chapter to demonstrate what would happen in battle.
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Reviewed By: The light of darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey hey hey! what's with the timespan! I do apreciate the fact of college, but still, THREE MONTHS! just try to post it faster. Im enjoying it too much. Hope your studies go well, but i also hope that you get this story done. Happy writing (both on this and college)
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Title: genius
Reviewed By: PM On: March 12, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLY GOOD
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Title: nice one,
Reviewed By: Neophy On: March 09, 2007 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i just wanna to tell you, that i find your story very interesting an funny, i like it a lot, i hope you keep updating the stotry, but also a lil bit faster than regular cuz i just can´t let go i need too what happends later waaaaa xD.. i have years now reading you story jejeje, well take see ya later..
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Title: k
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first thing your update rate is up to you alone. Your right focusing on your gpa is a better choise and like you wrote in the last chapter "good things come to those who wait". K the whole feeling each others pleasure is kida strange i've seen things simalar to it in Inuyasha fics but the author eather forgot about it or it was short lived. But like I always say "In stories the author is god" so its all up to you. Will the 4th child be the same person? And make sure you don't limit Shinji's and Rei's fighting ability to badly. Well im lookin forward to next update later
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 03:56 CST
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Great stuff, despite the fact I've read a plots some what simular to this with Auska/shinji being bonded after the fight at sea. Some how shinji/rei just seems more natural. Their need for each other is greater. Some how I was kind hoping Auska would play a greater role in this. Shinji's new personality seems to be everything Auska ever wanted in him, and if Rei has his memories she should know he has some attraction to her. Maybe even Rei pushing for a 3 way relationship? Heck, perhaps they all become good friends, and they confront Akagi to bond Asuka with them as well. It would take some chapters of work, but Asuka's need for love and friendship wouldn't be to hard to understand. Especialy after seeing how much Rei/shinji share now. Either way great stuff and I look forward to seeing this continue.
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Title: woot!!
Reviewed By: KakashiRulez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havent been to this site in AGES, however after recieving an e-mail notice im back XD, GJ man looking forward to LOTS more :P plz up date soon, not a 6 month wait like last time! this is good!
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Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf On: January 19, 2007 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My word, you are a master of suspense. I love your story, and will bookmark it. My only complaint is that you commonly miss words, leaving them out. While they might be figured out from the context, it helps if all the words are there.
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Title: thank
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for uopdating im grateful
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