| "Evolution of the Lost Ground" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: creamiicold [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 02:55 CDT
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This is great! This fanfic is so descriptive and well-written, I cannot wait for the next chapter! You're doing such a wonderful job, it's one of the best Scryed fanfics I've read so far ^_^
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Reviewed By: MimoriFanForever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Whaaa i love this fanfic it is sooooo exiting i can't wait to see what happenes next buttt i can find out if u don't put it up lol . And if u are wondering i am the same person as the one on fanfiction.com so pretend i made this review longer with what i wrote there. kk lol But it was funny on fanfic i was like i know that author but from where?? And then i relised the story im like hey i read this well most of it so i finished on there and then reviewd but now im reviewing here 2 lol i can't wait anylonger and need to find out what happenes to mimori cuz everyone is leaving exept for cammy ,mimori (obviously), and kanami. And there all hurt one well sortta 2 ffrom falling out of a barn 1 again from jumping outa a car and another from getting kid napped drugged and im gonna stop there. Well i gtg but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon
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Title: One Word... BRILLIANT!
Reviewed By: writtengirl16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This FanFic is simply the best! It contains everything a FanFic needs! I CAN`T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! O_O
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFREAKYINGOD I WAS WAITING YEARS FOR AN UPDATE I ALMOST GAVE UP ALL HOPE...but now ur back and its all good in the hood
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Reviewed By: MimoriFanForever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is one of thoes stories where you always want to know what happenes next. it is very exiting and enjoyable. I love the romance, action, drama, and adventure. I hope to see a lot of chapters to this very creative story. ^_~
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Title: Aww
Reviewed By: Tangerine_Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Gem35 On: August 21, 2006 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, probably the best S-cry-ed fiction I've ever read. A little OOC, maybe, but everyone is so emotionally constipated in the anime that you'd be hard-pressed not to write them that way. Despite the fact that I couldn't stand her in the show, I really like how Sheris has combined with Ryuho in your story. That's a sweet little detail that actually makes some sense. The kidnapping of Mimori was well-written and very disturbing, and the fight scene between Genso and his gang and Ryuho was very well done, too, BTW. Thanks! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story but I do trully hope the Elian and Kanami scene was just friendly because im a Kanami and Kazuma shipper all the way even if they dont get together as a couple they dont hook up with anyone else but thats just my thoughts Hope you update soon ^-^
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Title: PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 13:02 CDT
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Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome! Needs more of Kazuma kicking butt but the plotline and writing so far have been great! PLZ CONTINUE! Have mercy on all the people who love this story!
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absoultly good still so far i just wondered if ryohu and kazuma get yet another alter transformation stage4 just tugged at my mind by the way keep going good story i love it
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Title: EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: Mont On: April 24, 2006 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
iv also been wondering wut would happen after that last fight seeing how the last episode was a load of crap it shouldnt have ended like that but ur story has fufulled most of my hunger for more scryed PLZ CONTINUE
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
To be perfectly honest I think your story is just plain awesome! I've always thought of what would happed to Ryuho after Scheris was absorbed into him and you have written a great story that totally nails it!! I really hope Ryuho gets together with Mimori but other than that I hope you continue this story! Great job!
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Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: Aine of Knockaine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I couldn't help myself, You know I love this story ^_^ There's nothing better than a little action/adventure and romance all rolled into one! Oh and we can't forget the drama!
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