| "precious jewles" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 12:37 CDT
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Hoorah! A wonderful ending! I see you fixed up your spelling errors. I do think that you could've combined two chapters to make the chapters just a tad longer -- but you did well anyways. A wonderful story overall, and I hope you continue to write amazing material.
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 10:13 CDT
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I found this story surprisingly good. It's really short, and has plenty of spelling and grammar errors, and I almost didn't read it because of that. But then I said to myself, "What if under all those light mistakes there's a really good plot?" I've read it all so far - it's really good! - and hope you continue to work hard and produce more chapters.
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