[FanFics] Support This Site
[ New Forum ] [ Register ] [ Login ]

"Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ]
Pages (77): [ «    30  31  32  33  34  35  36  37  38  39  40  41  42  43  44  45  46  47  48  49    » ]
 Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi)  On: June 11, 2006 07:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
great story, I love it, I can't believe this, I want Inuyasha to remember but its going to take forever for that guy to get something lodged in his brain. I want to go up to him and just smack him senseless sometimes and yet I want to go up to him and kiss him sensesless, either way he's going to be senseless by the time I'm through with him. Well I got to go, and hopefully work a bit on my chapter that I'm writing, I don't know when I'll post it but I will start the next chapter and see how it goes.
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2006 06:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
did he actually remember? or was he just drawn to her? because if he did remember wouldnt he have said? and wouldnt he hase thought to mark her again to make her his mate again? :P anywho I am somewhat pleased at the direction this is going now and that its at the place I've demanding it be for a while lol(almost...) anywho LOVELOVELOVE!!!!!!!!!UPDATE!
 Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2006 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That wuz amazing!!OMG. See? I Knew actions speak louder!lol SO does that mean he remembers? and did their friends woke n saw them??? That chapter wuz spicey!! all sugary and spicey. I really love this fic. Great job!! AND MY BIRTHDAY IS 2MORROW!!! YAH!lol....this is somthing like a bday present to me....I enjoy your stories very wery much....lovely work. Ja....
 Title: oh my god
Reviewed By: kisa niwatari [nsi]  On: June 11, 2006 06:09 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok i just got done reading chapter 29...and i'm crying. like hella bad. this is such a great story. oh my god i feel like a baby. I LOVE THIS STORY....oh my god, ok i have to go cuz i need to read the other chapters lol but yeah...still tears. the screen got blurry and i said "dammit, kisa! your a crybaby" lol keep it up! ~~Kisa Niwatari
 Reviewed By: lovelywhite110 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2006 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! lol! I am starting to think every chap u do keeps on getting better and better. I loved the lemon Hehe! I would laugh my ass off if kagomes friends were awake and they heard them. lolzz Update soon (which u probably will)
 Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster being lazy  On: June 11, 2006 01:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
O M F G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, they've been caught being naughty... hehe...*has devil grin* lol, great job, Inuyasha remembers, to bad he couldn't have at least been smart enough to take her to the couch again or something, i mean REALLY! god I am so thankful I dont have a boyfriend that does that!! god, talk about embarassment major!!! lol, keep up the good work, there getting there, and now they just gata go home and tell everyone ELSE that they've remembered! hehe... *kills Hojo, Kouga, and Kikyou* mwuahahahahahahahaha... wow im being extra evil today ]>:D
 Reviewed By: page 13  On: June 11, 2006 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was a good chapter! please telll me inuyahsa will ermember sonn if he doesn't already. at the end of that chapter it didn't sound like he remembered but I guess you could say otherwise. he has to remember soon!! the anticipation is killing me! love the story!
 Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2006 23:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dang girl, that wa one steamy chapter. I absolutely loved it. Whoo, I need a fan. LoL. I'm glad they did it. ;p So I guess her dream shifted into reality then and she didn't notice it at first? I wonder if her friends really were awake. That's so sweet, they're sleeping together after. I can't wait to see what happens when they wake up and when he'll finally remember. Great chapter. All your time and revisions are well appreciated. ;-) Thanks. I can't wait for the next chapter, I love this story. :-)
 Title: WOAH!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2006 23:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOO UTTERLY AMAZING THAT I AM JUMPING UP AND DOWN IN MY SEAT WITH EXCITEMENT AND HYPERNESS/HAPPINESS!!!! GOSH I WAS IN SUCH A DOWN MOOD AND THIS SOOOOO MADE UP FOR IT!!!!! THAT WAS JUST BRILLIANT!!!!!!! HE BETTER REMEMBER SOON OR I WILL HAVE THE BIGGEST FIT!! LOL!!! GOSH BUT THAT WAS AWESOME!! TRUE EXCELLENCE!! PLEASE JUST STOP THE TORTURE....BUT I LOVE IT!! ITS GREAT AND GOSH THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU SOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING AND MAKING IT THE MOST WICKED AND ASTOUNDING CHAPTER SINCE THEY FINALLY GOT TOGETHER IN CHAPTER....um.......a while ago!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE SO CLOSE JUST ONE NO MAYBE TWO STEPS AWAY AND GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! ITS KILLING ME BUT THE DEATH IS BEARABLE WITH A CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!!!! GOSH!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS EXACTLY WHAT I NEEDED FOR THIS BAD MORNING SEEING HOW IT IS 2 30 AM!!! BUT I AM SOOOO GLAD THAT YOU UPDATED BECAUSE NOW I AM WIDE AWAKE AND I CAN STAY AWAKE LIKE I PLANNED!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS JUST GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT!!! I LOVE YOUR MIND!!! IT WORKS SOOOOOOO AMAZING!!! AND I LOVED THE BAR SCENE WITH HOJO!! I WAS HAVING A CRACKING UP FIT!!!! GOSH THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!!!!!!!! I AM SMILING SOO MUCH!! OH I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! THANKYOU AGAIN AND A MILLION TIMES OVER FOR UPDATING!!! MUAH MUAH MUAH!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND NOW FOR SOME RANDOMNESSJKFLSDAJFLSAJDFKJSLDFJLKSDJFLKSJDF;JSKLDFLSAJFLJSD;LFJLJDFKJ thankyou again!!!:D^_^_^_^ I
 Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo  On: June 10, 2006 23:36 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
W00T!! Thank you! Damn, now I want some lemonade. And he was so close to marking her...AGAIN. And..has Inuyasha been with other women since he forgot?????
 Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2006 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. When will Inuyasha remember remember Kagome. I know that somehow he kind of recognises her as his mate. Keep up the good work. Akina315
 Reviewed By: lovelywhite110 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2006 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the torture continues!!! i love the little hot chap. i even listen to the songs got that was soo sexy. i got the mental pic of inu and kags dancing. lol update soon!!! i cant wait to know what happens next. WE LOVE YOU!
 Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster to lazy  On: June 10, 2006 02:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOVVVEEEED IT!!!!!!!!!!! what else is there to say but this is the GREATEST story in the world only second to The Lucky Ones!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMG *catches breath* I almost died of laughter when I read, me sisters kept yelling at me to go to sleep and stop F*ING laughing!!! lol, keep up the good work I cant wait for the next chapter... no really I cant!!! XD
 Title: Damn woman!
Reviewed By: Mark..you know me  On: June 10, 2006 02:38 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shit that was....fuck it was...all hell it's hot as a bitch up in here now! i hope u know u just fucked my head up...i can't think so i know damn well inu can't! as LW said y'all ladys know "how to get it down on the floor!"(shit and get IT up too! oh yes Sura got along ass night a head of her thanks to u.) i know damn well u know that any man put in that moment would have a hard o-i'm not going to say what i was just about to say.-_- Why is it almost everytime i get a break to review the chapters are hot as hell!! i mean damn wait to Sura wakes up and read this. Ya know what...i'm going to wake her up....in a...well i know ya know what i'm bout to do or should i say WHO i'm bout to DO! then i'll let her see this chapter so that she'll know it's all your felt.hahaha! we read your fic everytime ya update even when it's hard to review so...Keep doin the damn thing lil'mama! i tell sura and maria hey for ya.^_^
 Title: HELL YEAH!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2006 02:06 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hell yeah that's how us ladys get it down on the floor!! I feel like going to a party now!! I was playin' the songs and was like "this the shit right here! Inu and kags get a LOOOOONNNNGGG!...night ahead of them baby! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!! SO UPDATE!!!!!!!! go head missy off to work wit ya....and don't forget to make it hot!...like only u can!^.~
Pages (77): [ «    30  31  32  33  34  35  36  37  38  39  40  41  42  43  44  45  46  47  48  49    » ]


Write Review/Comment
Name/Nick:
required
Title:
optional
Rating:
optional
Style of Writing:  
Spelling & Grammar:  
Originality/Creativity:  
Enjoyment Factor: Is this a fun to read or a boring fanfic?
Overall Rating: Not necessarily based on the other ratings.
Review/Comment:
required
If you've rated the fanfic, please try to explain your reasoning behind your rating
(You may enter up to 4000 characters.)

characters left
You may use the following HTML tags inside your comment:
<b>Bold</b>
<i>Italics</i>
<u>Underline</u>
<font size="3">Font Size</font>
<font color="green">Font Color</font>
Spam Filter:
required
Please enter the letters written below:

..######..........##..########...##.....##.
.##....##.........##..##.....##..##.....##.
.##...............##..##.....##..##.....##.
.##...####........##..########...##.....##.
.##....##...##....##..##.........##.....##.
.##....##...##....##..##.........##.....##.
..######.....######...##..........#######..