| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: June 09, 2006 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!! That was a hot little chappie. The dancing and singing was marvelous. LoL. I loved this chapter. I love how they always tease each other. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens after the kiss. This story is wonderful, I love it. ;-) More please. LoL.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: June 09, 2006 23:13 PDT
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is it hott in here? lol. this chapter is really good. I would be writing my story if it were for some guys that keep walking into my room to try and get me to go with them some where... oh well where was i? Oh yeah, I'm feeling the heat from the story, and I am just reading it. You're an amazing writer. Well got to go, I need to go to sleep. Talk to you later..
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 21:39 PDT
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I must say... I love the song Buttons. It's so awesome! Anyways, that chapter was intense!! wow... go Kagome and Inuyasha!!! They both were a little bold... hehe. Finally!! Maybe something will actually happen, and something will finally trigger Inu's memory!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Update when you get a chance!
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Title: THAT WAS ASTOUNDING!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was astounding and awesome!!! Damn....I hate working...AND ON FRIDAYS!!!!!! THIS CHAPTER WAS SOOOO GOOD AND I SOOO CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM DIEING FOR THEM TO GET TOGETHER WHERE INUYASHA REMEMBRSS!!! IWANT TO CRY!!! AND LAUGH!! THIS WAS AMAZING!! OKAY WELL IF I AM NOT WORKING, WHICH HOPEFULLY WILL BE THE OUTCOME NEXT TIME I READ, I WONT BE WORKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BECAUSE I WANT TO REVIEW MORE!! THIS CHAPTER ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE INUYASHA REMEMBER DANG IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OKAY WELL LOVED IT AND HAVE TO GO!! ONLY 4 MORE HOURS TO GO!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!! I LOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVEDLOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 20:32 PDT
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:D :D :D :D!!!!!!! LOVE! XD that club night sounds so fun lol now are they going to go home and do it???? :D xD well done ol' chap LOVE update etc
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 18:05 PDT
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OO LA LA I LOVE IT! the chapter was amazing... as always lol update soon! (but its not like you don't)
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 09, 2006 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl, how long you gonna keep torturing us?
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 15:08 PDT
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update dammit update!! I like the story... so I keep reading even though it depresses me! Inu HAS to get his memory back soon or I'm gonna cry again
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Title: THAT WAZ GANGSTA
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAT IS MAH FAVORITE CHAPTER OF ALL TIME, NOT ONLY MY FAV SONG WAS IN IT, BUT KAGOME SHOWED INUYASHA WHO IS DA BOSS. PLEAZE WRITE MORE!! KEEP UP THE GUD WORK
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Title: THAT WAZ GANGSTA
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAT IS MAH FAVORITE CHAPTER OF ALL TIME, NOT ONLY MY FAV SONG WAS IN IT, BUT KAGOME SHOWED INUYASHA WHO IS DA BOSS. PLEAZE WRITE MORE!! KEEP UP THE GUD WORK
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: June 09, 2006 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Awesome chapter!! I was wondering what kind of things would take place at the bar. It was good keep up on the updates!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter wuz hawt!!! Really hawt. It put the sun too shame!!!! And that lap dance wuz fantastic. I really saw them...clear as eva! She seriously have to give in to her desires!! ARGH!!!! why is she being so stupid!?!?! Actions speak louder than words...so jus do her actions..lol if you kno what i mean...lol I love it as always!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: miko-neko_sama On: June 09, 2006 12:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. I can't believe they did all that. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope that one will be as hot as this one. Inuyasha and Kagome go great together. He just has to remember after all that. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait for it I really need to read another soon and real soon or I will die from all this going around. But this chapter was great cause of the dancing and the singing. Hope to have a chapter today please. Just can't wait for tomorrow. LOL!!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 11:26 PDT
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*claps* woot woot! Alright that was a great chappie, i kept remembering ignigtion too!!! lol it cracked me up for some reason!!! Great chapter!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD! This chapter is absolutely amazing! You have a great story here and I can't wait until the next chapter! I will be checking for updates until the very end! (and then I'll be looking for any new stories you might write after this) Keep up the good work!
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