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Reviewed By: firedragonex [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2012 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Splitting the two Ranmas apart is not uncommon, but having it done by aliens is a new one on me, i think that you captured Ranma's unrefined speech very well and it help keep Him and Ranko in character, and i like how it's seem like she will start plotting to get him together with not only herself but other girls that she and therefor he secretly desirers. |
Reviewed By: QundraDraconum [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 06:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Ramna/Ranko stories I've ever read. Good characterizations, good plot, and good reactions from everyone involved. I hope you decide to continue this someday.
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Title: UPDATE??
Reviewed By: DeafSkull69 On: December 31, 2007 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story and am waiting for the next chapter to read on.
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Title: Updates?
Reviewed By: kaptin hippy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 11:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've now read two of your stories, but it's been so long since any of them have been updated; Those I've not read as well. do you plan to ever finish them? Your a great writer and it would be a shame if your stories were never finished.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really good Ramna x Ranco story. Though I don't actually approve of much Akane bashing, still the develipment is really steady and logical. A pity there are no updates so far.... Seems like it's a bane of all good fics here :(((
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Reviewed By: Democritus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 20:40 EST
Comment/Review:
This is easily my favorite Ranma fic, and I'm sad that there hasn't been a continuation in so long. You've had more than enough time to do your soul searching, find your purpose in life, find your muse again, etc. It's time to buckle down and finish this thing, for the sake of art (does this stuff really count as art?) and for the sake of thousands of greasy, sweaty nerds who've been left with unquenchable aches in their loins.
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Reviewed By: non member reviewer On: February 11, 2007 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story, but I wish you would continue it, and just when it started getting real interesting. The way its done gives it a proper developement of a story.
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 10:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow out of many of the ranma 1/2 fanfictions that i have read this is one of the pest well writen plotes i have ever read. please keep up the fantastic work, and update a.s.a.p.
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Reviewed By: Predhack [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 04:56 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this so far. I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: SoloTalent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great too . I like it that it develops so slow , it makes it more enjoying to read :)
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Reviewed By: Lazatszu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done I am curious though. Is this story going to be just another one of your Harem fics or is this going to be strictly Ranko/Ranma? Personally im voting for a single pairing vs a Harem it's just more realistic overall and nobody in their right mind wants to share their spouse/lover with other people so I don't see Ranko going for a group thing without turning her into a mindless sex-robot like so many Harem fics end up doing to the female characters.
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: June 05, 2006 23:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
This needs to be updated soon. It's a good story, and I, for one, would like it to continue.
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Reviewed By: Aimless One On: May 24, 2006 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style for your work is...interesting. I just hope you will finish/post for either Storm Warning or A Change in Him soon (A Change first!). This story however is my fav as it builds the charaters a little fuller than the others. Post SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: amdfanatic On: May 21, 2006 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SlickRCBD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great take on an old idea. BTW, except for that bath scene near the end, the story's rating could be downgraded to Y. It might even pass muster with the scene. One thing is, even with that scene at the end, it's still not clear what exactly the aliens did to Ranma. Was it making his girl-side fall in love with him, or was it the link? All and all, it was an execellent piece of writing!
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