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"Be Careful What You Wish For" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Title: Pwease continue??
Reviewed By: mysterymaniac [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2007 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I know I haven't talked to you in a while, but I'm still a big fan of this story!! ^-^' Please continue soon!
 Title: HM
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2007 07:53 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This sounds like something TheVulpineHero1 and me would write 1 query ahem WRITE MORE CHAPTERS
 Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 20, 2006 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS J320 REMINDIN U 2 GET UR LAZY ASS IN GEAR! meh... i'm bored so i decided to click on this & i realised i alrdy read all this. wtf is that all about? if u want me 2 write 1 of ur chappys 4 u i will, but then u owe me 1 4 this & 1 for new shadow!
 Title: me am srry
Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2006 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
srry i havent reviewed. that would be so awesome if that really happened!!!! the chappies were a lil corny tho... but good nontheless. i played sonic riders on ps2 once. it sucked. they sacreficed control for speed so u can merrily slam into walls & run outta air real fast... anyway update soon!
 Title: Excellent chappy!
Reviewed By: Emperor Sun Hai [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter! update Soon
 Title: W00t
Reviewed By: Sonic_The_Titan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol thats awesome you took down Sonic then crashed into a wall. I'm gonna read commitment now.I hope you update soon.
 Reviewed By: i.am.someone  On: August 24, 2006 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
finally an update do you know how long i've waited for this huh do ya do ya.........no probably not anyway that was much much much much much much muccccccchhhhhhhhhhhh better than the first chapter keep it up o and update more often pretty please
 Reviewed By: mysterymaniac [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2006 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAYNESS!! ^_^ You continued!! I can't wait until you update and until...*clears throat*...happens!! ^_^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!! PS: I'm a fan of SonAmy stories, so KEEP IT UP!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Triple D  On: August 20, 2006 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey cool start...i have problems on what to start if off with..but thats just me..keep it UP!! :D
 Reviewed By: unlogged mania_the_hedgehog  On: August 17, 2006 00:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!^_^
 Reviewed By: I wish I hope nothing is impossible!!!  On: July 23, 2006 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
go on!*_*
 Reviewed By: mysterymaniac [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it!!! :( Except you stopped at a part where I was wondering what was happening next....*pouts* I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE!!!! PLEASE!!! *gets on knees* I'm begging you! ....*sweatdrops* Heh, right.... Um, I have one suggestion: Can you try to leave out the cuss words? To me, it would make it a better story and everyone could read it, because some people, when they're reading a story, and they find a cuss word, they'll immediately stop reading it. I'm sorry if I'm being picky...but I personally don't like cuss words. So, instead of saying s-h-i-t, could you say shoot? Instead of saying Holy ...., then could you say something liky Holy Macorole? I dunno....I'm just saying that to me, I would like to have no cuss words. Anyway....*gets pom-poms* 2,4,6,8, who do we appreciate? Go....*forgets the name of author* Um...heh....never mind. *throws pom-poms behind* Just continue the story, okay?
 Title: black rules!!!
Reviewed By: hey,I'm Mania and I kissed Shadow  On: June 18, 2006 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wonderful!
 Reviewed By: i.am.someone  On: June 18, 2006 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i hope your right about chapter 2 being better cos that wasn't exacley the best of all starts(no offence) the worst thing was and im not being horrible or anything but i think the story was to predicting for example they kept wishing they were on mobius and that is most likely where they r now goin but if im wrong then yeah the storys alright

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