| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kenshinfan230 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!...plz
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Title: Unexpected Endeavors
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Poor Kagome! Having three or four demons on her! Aww! Update a.s.a.p! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i just read all 8 chapters tonight! im so glad i found your story! funny thing is hehe i wrote a fanfic similiar to this! but yours is way better!! i was soo glad reading this i didn't want it to stop!!!!! idk why, but i was sorta excited to think of kagome and sesshomaru.. but the way you showed the relationship between kagome and inuyasha made me blush the entire time while smiling! VERY ROMANTIC! + i love your style of writing!! so how many more chapters do you think you will add? i hope it's alot more cause this is a really great story, and i would almost hate to see it end,,,but i SO want to know what is going to happen! haha.. very great story keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 14:19 EDT
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Um....I'm a little confused...But I'm sure I'll figure it all out soon....So basically because Koga claimed her...though she says no...Sess can't claim her? But InuYasha claims her too...So I'm confused! Anyway! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 10:08 EDT
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OH! How could you just leave off there??? I tell you this every time! You can't leave off there!! You're too good of a writer to leave off there! I must know what happends! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: critical eyes On: September 21, 2006 05:51 EDT
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Ouch, poor Kagome. It´s not funny anymore (actually it is but not for her) to have so many handsome suitors, aah I wish I could be her. As much as I like Kouga I would always choose Sesshoumaru, the dangerous and silent ones are the best *drool*. And I want to see the little silver haired puppy with his fathers face. This is your fic and I like your choises and your style and if you are not comfortable with a lemon than don´t write one. There are many PWP out there but I´m reading your fic because of your main pairing and your plot which is unique. Looking forward to the next chapter and the meeting, whenever it will be, with Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter and I definitely like Haru. The whole bit with the canines having a proverbial pissing contest over Kagome was very funny. You were a little harsh on MIroku, though. loosening a tooth and beating him up black and blue? I know the guy has bad manners, but still. . . You implied the women did it on sight, and not simply defending themselves.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: September 17, 2006 15:10 EDT
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Cant wait for the next chapter! I have to wonder where Inu has wandered off to in the middle of the night... in the freezing rain... Kikyo perhaps? Newho... UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster bein lazy On: September 10, 2006 06:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! i must admit though i was pritty miffed at sesshy first when it seemed like he had indeed tricked her into the deal. It is a nice 'new' plot, diffrent in so many ways from the others that it makes it an origional great story line, tis one of the most rollar coastar stories I've read in a long time that pairs sesshy with kags, (and thats a lot!) your story is great and should be complimented as such, so awesome job, and keep updating, i really want to se what happens next and the suspence is killing me! love the story, it should be put up as the best one on mediaminer like they did with Temple of The Dog , im sure everyone would love to read it! :D
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 16:20 EDT
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Oh.... That's all you have written? It's so good that I didn't want to stop reading!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: luver-of-horses On: September 06, 2006 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, excellent fic, i personally love inu/kag pairings but sess/kag are just as good. loved the content, so interesting, with lots of depth and explanations? (thats not what i'm trying to say, i just can't express it) it's really good. please write next chapter super-soon and always remember: NOTHING'S IMPOSSIBLE!!!
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Title: critical eyes
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 11:42 EDT
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Funny story you have here and now you have a plot too. I like that you are not rushing anything and there is not too much OCC´ness like falling in love on first sight *snort*. Kagome still has feelings for Inuyasha even if she is attracted to Sesshoumaru and that is believable. It´s nice to see another side of Jaken. Just for your information: Jaken was the leader of a group of toads and were fighting against a demon when he was (unintentionally) saved by Sesshoumaru. Seshoumaru killed the demon because it was blocking his path and since then Jaken followed him because he admired his strength and beauty. Shortly after that he got the staff of heads from him. Inu no Taisho was already dead but Inuyasha was not sealed yet so I think Jaken is at least about 100 years Seshoumarus retainer. Still I like your idea better. I´m looking forward to how Rin will behave, she is after all a human child and they get jealous when they get a new sibling. Don´t you want to give us a few hints if Seshoumaru and Kagome will actually have a relationship? Please?
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:54 EDT
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Keep at it. I really like it. I watch for updates and read them when I get the notice (which is not something I do often). Thanks for writting an interesting story.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:36 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this story! please continue, I like how you are portraying the characters.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 23:10 EDT
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Cant wait for the next chapter! Love it!!!! Good luck with the history courses ^-^
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